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    Priya

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    February 16, 2022 at 11:12 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    In the current world, different people have contrast of opinion on children’s development via outdoor activities and computer game. This essay will touch upon most beneficial way that children like to indulge in.

    In the recent times, children are swayed to the advent of computer games and online games that keeps them busy all the time. When it comes to computers games it’s like both sides of a coin, which has both positive and negative side. The positive aspect of them is that there are manifold of mind games and puzzle games that really helps in nurturing their mental ability and thinking level, whereas there are few others that has led to abysmal effect in their performance in both academics and non-academics side and they are also susceptible to serious health issues when they get addicted to it.

    On the other hand, the outdoor activities have lot of benefits that help children in fostering innovative ideas and improvement in mental health. Outdoor physical activity games like tennis , badminton and lot more when practiced everyday will definitely help in bringing conducive environment for maintaining good health and staying fit . It’s the responsibility of the parents to condone their children from getting involved in online gaming and rather encourage them to get indulged in physical activities which will eventually prevent them from getting affected from diseases at the very young age.

    Considering all the above pros and cons, outdoor activities will definitely enthral children’s attention when encouraged by the parents to a larger extent.

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    Priya

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    February 8, 2022 at 9:04 PM in reply to: Task 1 (Academic): MAP

    The picture shows us the development of the village “Reymouth”, over a period a period of 26 years from the year 1995 till date on the urban properties and basic amenities for the people living in the region.

    Overall, we could infer that the village has been transformed to a city with the establishment of commercial properties like restaurants, café, golf and tennis courts and a plenty of housing properties for the people living in the region.

    One advent thing we could understand from the picture is that the surge in manifold of housing and apartment areas in the recent times from that of the year 1995. Several acres of greenery area had been converted to golf and tennis courts for the citizen’s recreation purpose.

    On the other hand, series of shops and fish markets lining behind the sea has been removed and changed to cozy restaurants and sea view apartments facing the sea. Whereas the hotels and café has remained in the same place right from the year 1995. In addition to those, a car parking area has been allocated for the visitor’s convenience to park their vehicles.

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    Priya

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    February 2, 2022 at 11:00 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Advertisements are considered to be the gripping way of promoting a product online or offline in the recent days and in fact it has added sudden foray of interest on some of the products among the people.

    Off late, there has been lot of products ventured by the market via advisements to people in social media and tv channels . One such product which lured me to buy was a health drink for diabetic patients and that was Ensure. This product has a barrage of ingredients that adds benefits to the diabetic patients and its also said that it controls diabetes when consumed over a period of time. This product comes up different flavors to linger taste buds of the patients. Clearly , this product has shown a tremendous change in my parents health in a year which made them fit and healthy. However, I was quite apprehensive to try it for the first time but now I feel the product was beyond our expectation.

    Nevertheless, advertisements truly are beneficial and It’s also the manufacture’s expedite to bring good products to market and showcase it to the consumers and it’s also the consumers responsibility to choose the product meticulously and not get driven away by deceptive products showcased in the advertisements.

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    Priya

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    February 1, 2022 at 9:48 PM in reply to: IELTS Academic Task -1 ( Batch B & Batch A)- Pie Chart – Car/Bicycle

    The pie chart depicts the preferences of people on different modes of transportation for reaching their workplace and the reason behind the same. The reasons are discussed by allocating different percentages taking the consideration of cost, distance, wellness, pollution, safety and many other factors.

    The first figures illustrates the reason for cycling to workplace , what stands out from the pie chart is equal proportion of the population are much concerned about the hazardous environment caused by the pollution , to take good care of their health and for their well being they have opted to cycle to their work place and that rounds up to more than half a percentage of the population. Whereas 15 percentage of the population prefer to cycle to avoid parking congestion in the workplace. A very few people less than population discussed above feels its less expensive since no fuels are used as in cars or bikes and also, they feel they can reach work much faster by cycling than by driving.

    The second chart portrays the population who reply on driving to their work, what we infer from the chart is most of the people consider it’ comfortable to drive and reach work. About 21 percent stick to driving since they work far away from their workplace which they couldn’t reach by cycling. Equal number of people and about 14 percent considered the time and baggage they carry, and 11 percent thinks it’s safer than cycling.

    To conclude surplus amount of people go with driving rather than cycling to connect their workplace for the various reasons discussed above.

    Requesting you to evaluate. Thank you

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