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    Sakshi

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    September 17, 2021 at 8:39 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    English is becoming significantly the most prominent language globally used, because of the expanding growth in tourism industry and this is the reason why some people believe that it would lead to English becoming the only language used internationally. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement that English language will be the only form of communication.

    The language do offers various advantages to it, being that it is one of the most globally used language and is a pre-requisite if you want to work in international markets, world esteemed multinational companies and even if you simply want to pursue your education in foreign countries. It is the language which helps in unifying people from different parts of the world to share their thoughts and opinions about a topic or any wrongdoings happening in the world. For instance, you can see many different backgrounds and ethnicities of people working together in jobs because they can communicate freely due to their knowledge and fluency in English language.

    Although this does not prompt that it doesn’t have any cons to it, if English becomes the only medium of communication then people would forget about their own mother tongue, to explain this let’s take an example of second generation immigrants, whose parents came from different parts of the world to seek better opportunities for them which were scarce in their own country and had shifted to USA, UK and Europe which as a result had an significant impact because these children were not fluent in their own mother tongue, having very little information about their origins, traditions and customs of its people. The very own existence of their own country and its history would be forgotten if English is made to be the only language spoken globally. For instance, it is said that music has no barriers, and this is true because people from different countries have songs sung in their own language and if these songs are made to sing in English then the beauty and the ambiguity of the song would be destroyed completely.

    In conclusion, although English has gradually become a language to be more used globally, it does not mean that it has the ability to replace other languages, because each language speaks volumes about their history and origins of its country, similarly it is important to be proud of your heritage and that is by firstly respecting your own mother tongue.

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    Sakshi

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    September 17, 2021 at 7:55 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    English is becoming significantly the most prominent language globally used, because of the expanding growth in tourism industry and this is the reason why some people believe that it would lead to English becoming the only language used internationally. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement that English language will be the only form of communication. <div>

    The language do offers various advantages to it, being that it is one of the most globally used language and is a pre-requisite if you want to work in international markets, world esteemed multinational companies and even if you simply want to pursue your education in foreign countries. It is the language that helps in unifying people from different parts of the world to share their thoughts and opinions about a topic or any wrongdoings happening in the world. For instance, you can see many different backgrounds and ethnicities of people working together in jobs because they can communicate freely due to their knowledge and fluency in English language.

    Although this does not prompt that it doesn’t have any cons to it, if English becomes the only medium of communication then people would forget about their own mother tongue, to explain this let’s take an example of second generation immigrants, whose parents came from different parts of the world to seek better opportunities for them which were scarce in their own country and had shifted to USA, UK and Europe which as a result had a significant impact because these children were not fluent in their own mother tongue, having very little information about their origins, traditions and customs of its people. The very own existence of their own country and its history would be forgotten if English is made to be the only language spoken globally. For instance, it is said that music has no barriers, and this is true because people from different countries have songs sung in their own language and if these songs are made to sing in English then the beauty and the ambiguity of the song would be destroyed completely.

    In conclusion, although English has gradually become a language to be more used globally, it does not mean that it has the ability to replace other languages, because each language speaks volumes about their history and origins of its country, similarly it is important to be proud of your heritage and that is by firstly respecting your own mother tongue.

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    Sakshi

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    June 23, 2021 at 11:37 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – International Sports Events

    International sports events have been organized since the time of the colonization period and are still taking place all around the globe, thus various countries take part in hosting such international sports events. Moreover, people have quite a different perspective on this subject, some people think that it is beneficial for the host country, whereas others demur to the thought of this idea and I completely agree with the former statement that it indeed brings various opportunities for the host country, so let’s have a look at sides of the topic.

    Although these international sports events are fugacious, they play a major role in bolstering the reputation of the host country all over the world, as any international game attracts attention towards the host country, thus not only contributes to fortifying the economy of the country but also helps in improving foreign affairs of the host country with all over the world by hosting healthy sports competitions. Another reason is that these games act as a catalyst in bringing lucrative tourism opportunities, thus increasing employment opportunities which ultimately helps in the industrialization of the region where the event takes place.

    The downside of conducting these events is that it entails a lot of beforehand event management and if on the day of the event any mismanagement occurs, the host country is always blamed, thus tarnishing the reputation of the host country. Another drawback is that conducting such games costs a lot of money and this money is usually from the pockets of the common people. For instance, in the 2010 Common Wealth games conducted in India, the government had build guest rooms for the players but the rooms themselves lacked in many aspects, this issue was publicized by the media which led to questioning where the tax money went.

    In my opinion, with the right plan, these international sports events can bring a lot of opportunities which is beneficial to the host country as well as bringing sports as a unifying moment for the world.

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    Sakshi

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    June 22, 2021 at 11:42 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Teenagers and Crime)

    One of the major growing concerns that have brought to society’s attention is the conclusive rise in the cases of teenage crimes that have been observed in many countries over the last few decades. It is very important to get to the root of this problem and know why it occurred.

    Some reasons for the growth of this issue is because of the environment they are brought up in, there may be cases where these teenagers may have faced violence in their surroundings, whether it is in the form of domestic abuse, school bullying, cases of mental torture, gaslighting or in worst case scenario child abuse. This type of acts eventually leads to breeding more violence, thus putting the child through mental warfare at such a young age which potentially converts these into crime.

    Another reason may be because the psychological condition of the child because the mental state of any person plays an important role in determining the difference between right and wrong, thus it is very detrimental for the child to be guided in the right path. Some of the issues affecting the psychology of the child can be the peer pressure to follow their friends even if it is wrong, inferiority complex, low status in terms of wealth.

    So, every problem needs some solutions and to prevent further crimes is to immediately report such cases of violence to the concerned authorities. For instance, the promotion of child helpline numbers among kids by conducting such awareness programs in schools, by television advertisements and on other platforms like social media. This problem can also be prevented if the teachers are made to create social awareness clubs discussing these issues and make the child aware of them. Another solution to the child’s psychological condition is to provide counsellors and make the parents understand the importance of therapy.

    I think this problem can be prevented if society and the parents themselves make an environment that is comfortable for the child, by making these changes there is potential to make the child feel happy and safe.

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    Sakshi

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    June 8, 2021 at 11:07 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Today in this fast track world, where people have a very limited attention span, people can forget to do their most important tasks of the day but they won’t forget the tune of the advertisement jingle playing all day long on various digital mediums. Such is the effect of advertising world on our daily lives, these advertising companies can make us buy their product even if we don’t have the need for it. While, it may seem to the advertising companies that they are doing us a favor by introducing their new updated products I admit that they are not truly wrong. We do need to know about the recent trends and developments in this world and that is why advertising on various platforms is the best way to learn about this.

    Advertisements are the best way to put up your word among the public, as it is for the public, by the public and to the public. Sales of your product can simply increase within a few hours with the put up of your product advertisement on the public sharing booths. These advertisements are not only just used for multinational companies but is also used by the government to promote their running party or to make the public aware about certain changes in the laws. For instance, the Indian government promoted the Swatch Bharat Abhiyan with their famous jingle. So, advertising companies have a very string impact on the public with their advertisement works.

    With the immense advertising power, any product, any message, any scheme, or it may be any important information, the public gets to be aware through promotion on various platforms whether it be on national television, social media platforms, radio stations or even on your mobiles. The simple power of advertising companies can be experienced. There may be cases of unnecessary promotions, but this is the whole point of advertisement.

    In conclusion I believe advertising is the best way to expand the ongoing technological advancements in the world and also to add value to public lifestyle.

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    Sakshi

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    June 1, 2021 at 11:32 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 5 (Overpopulation)

    Overpopulation is undoubtedly one of the world’s most serious environmental problem. I agree with this statement as the way people misuse and overexploit resources has led this to become as world’s most serious environmental problem.

    Overpopulation is seen as a serious issue as it has many negative impacts throughout the human lifespan. Population growth has undeniably had negative impacts on the environment as in depletion of the availability of natural resources as one of the concerns, it leads to shortage space, depletion in mental health and a rapid increase in crime. For instance, as observed in overpopulated underdeveloped countries, there are more demand and fewer opportunities which ultimately leads to many serious societal conflicts leading to an increase in crime and more chances of injustice to lower waged people.

    Perhaps overpopulation would not be an issue if society changes its lifestyle. Government can play a significant role by passing laws to prevent the increasing population and this issue can be uprooted simply if people can make certain changes to their daily lifestyle.

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