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    Silk

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    December 16, 2021 at 2:54 AM in reply to: Task 2 : (discuss both views- Art )

    Some people believe teaching arts are crucial and should be taught in school while quite a few people oppose and believe it is completely worthless. In my opinion, art should be part of fundamental education to encourage creativity among the children however, this essay will discuss both views.

    On one hand, the future is in technology and science. So many parents are aware, and so believe it is very beneficial that school focus primarily on academics, so that their children will get success in this modern world. For example International company like Nasa conduct different science projects and the selected students get chance to visit their campus, many financial services to study abroad .so many student and parents alike feel that their future is somewhere among these field.

    Alternately, one thing that needs to be pointed out that the main objective of school is to enable students to get knowledge of every subject be it like academic or arts, and then allow them to choose whichever field they wish to pursue. Arts is an engaging subject which allow people to be creative, upgrade own’s artistic skills to express themselves, sometime it is helpful to enhance more concentration and build their confidence level.

    In conclusion, I believe school should encourage arts as part of curriculum because learning art can show the imagination of student or what they have inside and enhance their in born quality and if not at least it can be used to release stress of workload.

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    December 10, 2021 at 3:21 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2

    Now-a-days the internet has become so popular many people are watching the latest news on internet and traditional newspaper are less valued to younger generation. As per my opinion, I partially agree with this statement, and i feel that it mainly depends on personal interest, as i will explain.

    Firstly when we consider young generation, it is basically true that conventional newspaper have less important role to play. Young people have grown up in a digital world and use computer as it is quick, effective, easy to gain information moreover, its available at any point of time. Although, newspaper are published in early hours, the news continues to spread throughout the days, and this is available on our phone and we even can follow news stories update regularly. Youth of today feel much more confident using mobile devices, as they have been part of their daily lives.

    Nevertheless, The opposite is the case for older generation is the case for older generations. Traditional newspaper have become part of our national identity in many nations. For elderly people it might not be as comfortable when using internet on mobile phone so for them conventional form of news is nostalgic feeling. For some technology can be terrifying to some individual, as they are afraid of change. Yes they do feel the newspaper can also be used in many household chores like wrapping stuff, crafting, Now-a-days traditional newspaper agencies are providing lots of gifting scheme as their business is in risk which attract some individuals. Furthermore, they do have some disadvantages like printing and distributing cost which are not same with online news, even we have to wait for the next day to have updated news for example exam result which are published via conventional method are not available on same day whereas, in online we can get that result in matter of second at any place of world.

    In conclusion, Traditional newspaper and online newspaper both have their own advantages and disadvantages its all depend on news seeker point of view and how they find it useful, it is tricky to be certain for this claim to be true.

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    December 9, 2021 at 3:07 PM in reply to: IELTS Writing Task 2

    It is true that we are increasingly surrounded by advertising by companies that we want to sell us their products. I agree that advertising has impact on sales of consumer which i will be discussing in this essay.

    Advertisement can certainly temp people to buy products that they might not otherwise want. A good example could be any food app. Even though we are not sometime hungry but when we watch any advertisement mentioning some discounts or any new update about new restaurant we immediately tend to visit that restaurant or order the food online. Perhaps it is the influence of marketing that leads us to make these kind of decisions. Some time in form of festive offer or clearance sales we get to think that we are getting profit out of it or being benefitted if we opt it and grab the offer.

    Advertising makes product much easier and faster to be accessed by the people across the world. For example when you search a product online you also get suggested items which people have taken with that same product or if the particular product is out of stock you get option of all other similar product we sometime get a chance to purchase new product than our regular used product and sometime we like it and get benefitted out of it. We find celebrity are invited to advertise the good by using their influential to target their fans. This is no doubt for increasing sales.

    In conclusion, advertising can motive people to go for shopping sometimes we get benefitted out of it and sometime we just fall for their marketing strategy but yes i agree that high sales of consumer’s product is advertising in day today society.

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    Silk

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    December 8, 2021 at 2:12 PM in reply to: IELTS General Training Task 1

    Dear Sam,

    I am writing this letter in context of moving to Cardiff.

    Currently i am working from Scotland but my hometown is in Cardiff, where my old parents are staying. As their health conditions are deteriorating day by day, and i need to be with them for their care. Moreover, commute to Cardiff from Scotland every week is very time consuming, tiring and pricy. Furthermore, we have a branch in Cardiff which will be 20 min drive from my home.

    Therefore, requesting you to move me from Scotland to Cardiff location effective from 1st Jan 2022.

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    October 27, 2021 at 2:19 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2 – [Crime]

    Worldwide many nations have improved major crime rates, still people feel unsafe than before. I will explain the main reasons for this and some strategies to overcome these issues.

    Due to recent pandemic situation many people lost their jobs and so there has been sharp increase in cases like robbery, shoplifting, car and bike theft, protests against government, riots, etc. which are not serious crimes but still people didn’t feel secured coming to my next point for not feeling unsafe is lots of drunk and homeless people are living in the streets which create inconvenience to travel late night or in lonely roads. the last point I want to add is that crimes are conducted mostly by under age 18 for example lots of mid-students are engaged in criminal activity like drug dealing as no one can suspect teenagers involvement in crime and there is no certain punishment for juvenile crimes.

    In my opinion if we improve their quality of life, then there will be less robbery or theft so measure taken for my first and second problem could be applied to increase safety is to offer more jobs opportunity so as to increase the economic status of unemployed citizen. Another strategy would be to raise the number of policemen in dangerous areas where crimes are more often. We could even plant number of CCTV on empty roads or roads with less street lights. For juvenile crimes I suggest school should educate children about day today crimes and family should make them feel protected and if they find any behavioral changes immediately provide them with necessary counselling.

    In conclusion, whereas major crimes have actually been diminished but there has been number of minor crimes making people feel worried and unsafe. Government all around the world should take safety measures to tackle this situation by increasing job positions and planting more policemen and placing number of CCTV on streets.

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    October 26, 2021 at 3:26 AM in reply to: Discuss both views – [Children Spending Time Alone]

    Some individuals believe parents should promote their offspring to take part in managed group activities in their leisure time while some individuals also encourage their offspring to learn to spend time with themselves. In this essay, It will be discussed the two viewpoints on how the children should spend their leisure time and I will give my opinion based on below discussions.

    Children participating in any group activities develop respect and trust as in any group activity they have to complete the task being a group not individual so to successfully complete the task or activity you need to have trust, empathy, patience and good communication with other participants in the group which not only boast the team spirit behavior of the child but also teach them time management as the art of time utilisation will make them more discipline and enhance their career prospect when they grow old. Therefore, parents should encourage children to get involve in group activities which is the building block of learning new skills in life.

    While some people also believe that children should find ways to occupy their unstructured time by their own as the valuable lesson which they learn will carry with them throughout their lives. children who perform activities by their own develop a strong sense of independence they don’t have to be around another person or the group of people at all the time. which will make them socially independent to be comfortable in any situation so parents should teach them to value their own time and let them plan and participate on their own which will help them to handle every type of situation whenever they are not physically present with them.

    To conclude, some individual believe that letting children involve in their own activity bring sense of calmness and boast self confidence and self esteem However, in my opinion engaging in group activity builds team skills from young age regardless of age like building relationship with family members, friends, neighbors, colleagues or customer make them a good team player and mastering the art of being a team player will help the child succeed not only just school, but throughout their lives.

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