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    Vamsi Krishna

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    July 20, 2021 at 11:09 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Big Salary)

    Many people think earning high is necessary for a good lifestyle rather than work pleasure. I strongly disagree with peace of work has less priority than high package job.

    First of all, we can’t buy everything with money like good health and happiness, where you work with no weight on you is a better place to work happily like what you want to do. It helps you and your organization, where if you are working for a big company for a huge amount have always stress on you to complete the task in time. For example, sometimes you have to work even on weekends or holidays because your payroll is high and the manager is expecting a lot from you. But in the case of those who work what they like finish job in time and enjoy their free time.

    Secondly, accompanying family and friends in leisure are very prime. If you have time, only you can spend with them, in profitable work, you have less time because you have to work hard to achieve the given task. On the other hand, people can complete the task very quickly because of their passion for work and will often enjoy their free time with family and friends.

    To conclude, People have to choose their job what they like and what they can do instead of high packages jobs. Yes, a good salary is important to live better, but it is not always the same sometimes you have to realize is it your cup of tea or not.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    July 16, 2021 at 11:57 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    Something that is good in using computers at pre-school age is they can use it better in successive grades because most of the classes are on online so that they should know before. It also helps to learn through gamification if you pass the assignment your score will be displayed on the leader board it increases the competitive spirit among the students. Children are more attracted to mobile these days so that they can adapt easily to the flipped classroom. There are some websites and mobile applications that provide learning through gamification it will replace the byhearting practices with innovative thinking.

    The most common problem that parents are facing now is bringing out children from the computer/mobile into the social state, and another serious problem is sitting posher, most of the homes doesn’t have the proper setup for desktop or laptop, they use to sit in different lighting conditions it affects growth and eyes of children. If they play out, children will be physically fit. If they’re too addicted to the computer it is good to take doctor suggestions. To avoid this situation parents should put a timeline to use the computer and it should be proctored.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    July 16, 2021 at 12:20 AM in reply to: Academic / General part 2 Ipshita 8pm 2

    Women aren’t only excellent at caring for children, and also they’re good at work. Yes, they know how to handle infants, for example, baby bathing is not an easy task that could easily be done by women, because of that we can’t derive women should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. In my opinion, Childcare should be taken by both mother and father.

    Firstly, I want to talk about working parents, in this scenario women are doing a great job, they are balancing both office work and housework. Men should support women by helping in chores so that they can take care of children because women are experts at childcare. Understanding children at age below 2 or 3 is very difficult, mother would understand what they say, it is hard to understand by fathers. If it is a weekend parent can share their timing with kids.

    Secondly, women aren’t going to work spend a lot of time with children, the attachment between mother and baby is huge in this scenario. Mostly, women will be tried at end of the day, so that men should take the charge of caring in the evenings for some time meanwhile she will get some leisure time. But we can’t force them to do only childcare, encourage her to do work if she is really interested.

    To conclude, don’t fix it a particular gender, children should need both motherhood and fatherhood. Form born children to 5 year age group mostly are under motherhood after they moved to fatherhood. It is important for fathers to teach their ward how to face the world.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    July 6, 2021 at 11:23 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    Nowadays most children are attracted to a computer or mobile-based games, people are arguing about computer games are responsible for children’s abysmal performance at school and outdoor games are beneficial for children’s physical fitness and social skills, I strongly agree with the statement.

    First and foremost, the physical fitness in this generation of kids is very low, If we encourage them to play outdoor or indoor sports like cricket, football, badminton, etc, it helps to improve their fitness levels. The nutrition food is not taken by the children if they play outdoor games they should follow a proper diet because they’ll get sufficient proteins. Children are more susceptible than adults, by playing computer games the most of the children are affected with eyesight at an early age. Outdoor games help the children to keep mentally healthy and active in every event.

    The second important one is social skills, we can observe the situation, students who have high problem-solving skills are not able to move socially, because they interact less with people in the real world. Outdoor games and taking children to the park can help to interact with diverse children, it helps to improve social skills. For example, we can see some players with good skills are unable to communicate properly, but it is very important to not only skill to play, but you should have good communication skills. Computer skills are important in this current era to win this digital race, But it is not to the full extent. It should be under parental guidance because we know this digital world has both a bright side and a dark side.

    To Conclude, the govt should develop community parks and playgrounds and encourage parents to take out their children at least twice a week.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    June 24, 2021 at 12:14 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – International Sports Events

    Sports has a huge market all over the world, Everybody likes it yes, either by play or watching and for some people, it is a passion. Hosting games helps locals to earn money by tourism. In my opinion hosting games is economically good for any country.

    Firstly, Hosting international games is bolstering the economy and international image of the country. It is not an easy thing to organize such an event, entails a lot of planning and preparation for that a well-knowledgeable committee should be there. Promoting an event is another challenge, the advertising event and inviting most of the countries a catalyst is needed. so the people who are coming for participating from different countries need proper facilities that include food, accommodation, and stadiums to practices. Mostly international events are planned before 4 or 5 years, and sometimes they build a new stadium for the event, it requires a lot of money so that in poor countries the people demur at the idea of hosting. Yes, it’s true, such countries can’t accommodate many people with their limited facilities, even some players are not interested in participating in the events.

    For some countries it is like a festival such event, like football, most of the counties play football and views are from all over the world. through the international games, the countries increase their international tourism and it helps to local to earn some money. These events are fugacious, due to this economy of tourism is that much. Another way of getting money is by media rights, it plays a lot of crucial role. The viewers are from all over the world so that the media is helping to stream live to the people.

    Yes, Organising international events improve the economy of the countries. Some games are establishing healthy connections between two countries, for example, Cricket, so many people from other countries love India because of Cricket.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    June 8, 2021 at 11:04 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    In general, most companies advertise their products through different mediums like the internet(websites), text messages, customer care calls, ads in movies, etc. they invest a huge amount for creating and promoting ads. If we observe some of the advertisements aren’t realistic they do just to lure the customers. Some are made disruptive calls every weekend without knowledge of the customer whether they’re gripping or not. I agree with companies are encouraging us to buy products that we do not require.

    For example, if you register on any traveling website they do post emails, text messages to you with some discounts that are exclusive only for you to entice. Sometimes you don’t need to register if you visit any shopping website the new technology recommended system analyze your search queries and suggest you to buy the product on their website. Sometimes these ads embarrassing us. If you’re watching youtube videos suddenly irrelevant ads are appearing on screen that are unconventional.

    Another example, Buying clothes online and shopping malls. When we purchasing clothes online the manufacturing date etc are hidden to the customer. We get messages from shopping mall huge discounts on apparels grab quickly if you go there the discount is on limited and old stock. Yes, the new products make our lives better, but not all. For example, the apple watch is showing oxygen and heart rate on it helps old people to check their health minute to minute.

    To summarize, when we are procuring any product check the quality, if you’re using an e-commerce website read the reviews after using the product don’t forget your review, it helps others.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    June 4, 2021 at 11:05 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    In the current pandemic, most of the employees are working from home. Due to this parents and kids are staying at home only. If both parents are working no proper care for children. So that parents condone the children to use mobiles for playing games. Personally, I partially agree with the statement.

    Firstly, outdoor activities give mental and physical health. If children go out and play with the group will improve their social skills. With outdoor activities, we know the skills of the children that we can encourage them to the next level. Children who are playing computer games alone aren’t socially good. In recent years we have seen some children attempted suicide after playing the game “Blue Whale”.

    Secondly, parents should watch what their kids are doing on the computer and mobile, if possible, blocking the ferocious content is good. Encourage them to watch advent content.

    In conclusion, under parent’s surveillance kids should use computers or mobile phones. On the weekend take out your children to the nearest grouds play some games.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    June 1, 2021 at 11:37 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 5 (Overpopulation)

    The increasing population is the most serious problem now. even though the governments are conducting so many camps to educate the people stills it’s a challenging part. I strongly agree the overpopulation is a serious problem.

    Due to overpopulation, the first and serious problem is deforestation, which causes global warming. Earlier the human boundaries were limited, but now humans are extending their living boundaries to some extent for that they are removing forest. It’s not only limited to living homes.

    Secondly, Increasing the production of instant food the factory wastage is polluting lands and revers. because of that freshwater is not available to all and soil strength is decreasing gradually.

    Overpopulation and environmental damages are directly proportional. if we control the population we’ll give a better environment to the next generation. Govt. has to take this problem seriously and take some precautions.

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    Vamsi Krishna

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    July 20, 2021 at 9:36 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    I’ll resubmit it.

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