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    Femmy

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    June 10, 2021 at 1:21 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Foreign Language)

    Learning alien dialect is very important , not only the foreign language helps to exchange thoughts with people from across the world. but also learning foreign language increases the confidence among individuals. In this essay , I shall compare the pros and cons of the most suitable way of learning a foreign language.

    The first step to learn a foreign language is to do self- practice. I believe that this is advantageous because learning the language on your own , may help the individuals to understand it in a better way and it is economical. However, this is not suitable at every point as it can cause troublesome situation for students , they would not be able to get feedback from an expert.

    The next approach that students can take into consideration is hiring the tutor. This is extremely beneficial owing to the fact that language trainers can teach the students to understand the advance level along with that trainers, before beginning of the session trainers provide with their guiding material which helps the student to understand better and is not approachable for each and everyone because it may be expensive and not everybody can afford it.

    Finally , the last approach that would be fruitful for the students is to be a part of the group class . On the one hand , group classes are not only interactive but also they interestingly collaborate which can help them to practice the language among themselves. On the other hand, group classes may decrease the level of personal attention and there is a possibility of comparison among students which may end up demotivating some of them.

    I would like to abridge my thoughts at the end by saying that , each approach has its own benefits for student as studying on their own will help to understand the basic level, whereas private coaching will help them to understand the advanced level and subsequently group classes will lead to polishing the skills of individuals.

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    Femmy

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    June 9, 2021 at 1:29 AM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Dear Jane ,

    How are you? Every thing working well ? I can’t believe it’s been a month since we last met . Well now the wait is over as I am organizing the party at my home. Of course , you are invited and this time I am not listening any excuse . You have to come and see me

    I am so excited to share the wonderful news that finally my brother has cracked the IAS exam. You know that these exams are not everyone’s cup of tea. Despite of failures, he never gave up and he finally cracked the exam .My parents are throwing a surprise party for him. Oh! Good news needs to be celebrated .

    Also, I know you are extremely bad with the directions , so guiding you in advance how to reach the venue. As you will enter the Marina Street, take left and you will see In bold letters ‘PARK AVENUES’ . It won’t be a problem for you as it is very popular and by any chance you missed the direction, you can ask anybody .

    Dearie, you need not to worry about the accommodation as we have made arrangements for that . Not only we have booked the hotel rooms but also you are most welcome to stay at my home. It’s totally your choice in either way you feel more comfortable.

    With love,

    Emma

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    Femmy

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    June 9, 2021 at 12:50 AM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -3

    Dear Emma,

    How are you ? I hope this letter finds you well . It’s been so long that we haven’t met each other. You are such a sweetheart , you never failed to surprise me.

    Thankyou for sending me such an amazing present . After opening the present ,I felt so special when I saw Series 6 I-Watch and that too in rose gold color. How do you know that I badly wanted this watch . Especially ,I liked the watch because of it’s packaging. Every time you think out-of-the box.

    Also, I am so excited to tell you about the other presents that I received on my birthday . Not only my brother made me a beautiful collage of our photos but also he gave me a greeting card . Besides that ,My grand mother gave me an antique necklace , I wore it on the same day .

    To be honest ,I was missing you badly on my special day as my parents arranged a surprise birthday party for me where all my relatives and close friends were invited. I also visited NGO to distribute clothes to the needy people. You know, I feel extremely satisfied after doing great cause.

    Take care and write back soon.

    Jane

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    Femmy

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    June 8, 2021 at 1:36 PM in reply to: Essay Writing – 8 (Freedom)

    With the advent of sophisticated modern technology along with the developments in communication have enabled the people to pursue their careers and also they can reside anywhere in the world which have transformed the human lives significantly . I believe that the advantages of this statement definitely outweigh the disadvantages.

    On the one side of the coin, because of the contemporary epoch of technology , people would be separated from their family . This is due to the fact people would have to travel overseas for their work ,they would not be able to see their loved ones. Considerably, Not only the latest version of applications such as Skype as well as Facetime had enabled the people to communicate but also people can travel via airplanes to meet their family. However, travelling is only possible once or twice in a year and personal touch cannot be maintained without having face -to-face contact.<div>

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    On the other side of the coin, the latest era of development has significant advantages . Firstly , people can explore employment avenues .Owing to the fact , they can find the jobs according to their demands additionally commoners while travelling and working off-shores can have remarkable learning opportunities which may eventually enable them to learn different cultures as well traditions of the nation.

    Furthermore, seeing this on a larger scale , automation has enabled the people to have international exposure. This can be substantiated by the fact that whenever people work in extra-territorial regions, they have an edge over other others which may lead to better career growth. For instance , people working in International Companies such as Google , Facebook and the likes are considered to have better better growth prospects.

    In conclusion, I would like to say that even-though there are some disadvantages of people working across the world , which can sometimes cause social dis-connections with the family and these are outweighed by the advantages.

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    Femmy

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    June 6, 2021 at 7:40 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing with regard to assist my services at your food chain. I have recently seen an advertisement on the newspaper, where it is stated that your restaurant is looking for someone to do the part time job.

    Firstly , I would like to express my concerns towards applying for the job. Not only this job is important for my professional experience but also I need this job badly for the survival of my family, where I have to solely manage all the household expenses. For this reason, I would like to apply for the job .

    Furthermore, one thing that I believe, I would be the suitable candidate for the job ,owing to the fact I had experience of almost 5 years serving at especially renowned 5 star rating restaurants where I was given best performance award by the manager as well as by the visitors. Apart from that , I do my tasks with full dedication that I think will do wonders for the restaurant.

    Lastly, I would like you to consider my request regarding my preferred working slot. As during weekdays , I am completely free after evening where I would be delighted to serve dinner to the people. However , at the weekends I am ready to work according to your desirable timeslot.

    Looking forward for your response.

    Yours faithfully, 06.05.2021

    Emma Watson

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    Femmy

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    June 2, 2021 at 12:47 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 5 (Overpopulation)

    Our Enviornment has catastrophic effects on the whole country, with overpopulation being the major concern , which is perilous for human beings. I completely agree with the argument and elaborate the same with facts below.

    Incipiently I would like to say that , exploding population has detrimental effects on the world natural resources such as fossil fuels and water which are getting depleted with every passing day . As the population increases their are more mouths to feed and limited resources to provide , which causes the aforementioned resources to deplete. The outcome of this depletion is on the one hand poor countries will become poorer as unemployment will prevail in the countries and on the other hand people will starve and would have abysmal health.

    Additionally, with the explosive growth of population, deforestation is rampant. As with the growing demands, not only industries are setup but also people are building residential houses, which requires the clearing of forests at large scale. This in-fact has serious effects on the flora and fauna, because their habitat gets disturbed with the massive cutting of trees. As per my personal experience , I have witnessed the higher authorities are cutting down the trees to build colonies at outskirts , not only because of the massive deforestation people are suffering now but also our our future generation have to suffer the consequences.

    I would like to abridge my thoughts at the end by saying that to ameliorate the exponential spike in population and to avoid all the reverberation the government should impose strict rules and regulations as well as people should make changes in their lifestyle.

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    Femmy

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    June 1, 2021 at 1:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    The world is riddled with criminals , to decrease the crime some people favour implementing longer prison sentences , while a major faction of the society believes that this problem can be ameliorated with alternative ways. This essay will examine both views, but personally , I strongly agree with the former statement .

    One way of reducing crime is that government should create awareness among commoners such as by providing the platform for education and by awareness campaigns, this will help to educate the society which in turn will help to reduce the transgressions. Other way to mitigate crime rate is by creating enough employment opportunities, because people would be able to fulfil their fundamental needs if they are employed, employment opportunities provided by government will not only reduce the crime rate but also will improve the condition of economy .For example, Nation will only progress if the people are employed, both these things go hand in hand.

    On the other side of the coin, some people believe prison sentence is the effective way to reduce crime, because people no longer fear before committing the crime, this is due to the fact that they would be punished severely .For an instance, Even though there are laws that exists to combat crimes , people still commit horrible felonies , which is partly owing to the fact that punishment is not that severe and partly because of psychological instability
    of the individual.

    I would like to abridge my thoughts at the end by saying that crime rate can be reduced if government provides education as well as employment opportunities to the people, which will help to create awareness among people and eventually reduce the requirements of severe punishments for crime.

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    May 31, 2021 at 12:56 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -3 (Globalisation)

    In recent decades, many researches have studied the importance of changing business employees . Indeed , to my mind, the need of hour requires changing business employees due to innovation methods as well as for employees amelioration. This essay intends to research both reasons for my belief in details with suitable examples.

    Firstly, I believe the theory of maintaining old employees has become anachronism .This is due to the fact , change is obligatory , hiring new employees will help in instilling the modern methods of technology which in fact will save mammoth unnecessary costs for the business. For example, Considering the current pandemic , businesses are operating online, old-aged people are unfamiliar with the modern gadgets which makes this thing unsuitable for the company ; however new generation can operate electronic gadgets with ease.

    Secondly, from the prospective of employees, it is of paramount importance for them to switch jobs as a result of which they are able to aggrandize their wealth. Owing to the fact , if employees take on different roles , not only they get increments in their salary but also they are able to learn different cultures of the organization which is necessary for the employees career growth. For example , As per my personal experience , I have witnessed that employees are more satisfied with change of their jobs because they got immense benefits such as hike in salary as well as got perks and are more victorious.

    I would like to abridge my thoughts at the end by saying that businesses should change their employees not only it will help the companies to introduce current innovation technologies but also are beneficial for employees professional growth.

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    May 28, 2021 at 12:18 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    The debate over instilling cooperating spirit or competitive spirit is quite complicated due to the various points each party holds. In my opinion, the amalgamation of both these skills is imperative for all round development of the child.

    I would like to begin with that children should be encouraged to become competitive. This is due to the reason if children are taught to compete with each other , children can turn out to be victorious in any battle of their life , which in turn prepares them to become future leaders. Healthy competition can be inculcated in child when the school organises debate competition, single sports competition, where children can learn competitive spirit. However, promoting healthy competition plays paramount role in children’s growth, it will help the children to navigate life better. For example, when children have competitive spirit amongst themselves, their is nothing in their life that is off-limits.

    On the other hand, cooperative skills help the children to comprehend things in a lucid way and children can develop sportsmanship . This can be explained as when children play in groups , children learn team-efforts as well as learn certain things such as better communication skills, which is required in almost every field today. Especially, children can learn moral values and virtues while playing together. For instance, not only cooperative skills are required in sports such as cricket, football but are also required in organisations where each task is dependent upon other.

    To encapsulate, in this modern era children need confluence of both cooperative as well as competitive spirit , which will eventually help them to excel in their life, with proper guidance of parents and teachers this goal can be achieved.

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    Femmy

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    May 27, 2021 at 12:13 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to inquire about the courses that your school offers. As I have considerable interest in learning more about English , I have planned to come Canada for the greater understanding of the programme.

    At the onset, I would like to ask about the school. Because I have never visited any country for education purpose, it would be a new set of experience for me . Especially , I want to know the operating hours of the school, I have read on the internet that institution offers flexible working hours which infact is a great deal for me . Besides that, because of the current pandemic, the classes would be conducted in offline or online mode.

    Furthermore, I would like to request you to consider my preferable accomodation. As I have never shared my room with anyone , one room set along with attached washroom is suitable for me, that would further allow me to have privacy in my room.

    Lastly, I want you to ask for the plant based food. Not only I have problem in eating cooked food but also I feel that they are hard to digest . After eating heavy foods, I continually fall ill. I do not want to cause a problem for you .

    I hope you will take my concerns into consideration.

    Yours sincerely, Date. 27-05-2021

    Emma Petersons

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