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Feedback : As the task demands, need to write atleat 250 words. The second body paragraph should state what “others” believe than your own opinion -“However, I believe” wouldn’t be appropriate here. Own opnion should be explained in different body paragraph or in the conclusion part.
Band: 2/6
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Feedback: Minimum 250 words should be there (these are only 148 words). Statement needs to be paraphrased in introduction. Avoid being repetitive in word aand ideas. Use impactful vocabulary. Answer has not been fully addressed. More detailing is required to support your main idea, examples are missing.
Band: 1/6
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Feedback: “its” is a possessive form of “it” while “it’s” is contraction of “it is” (wrongly used in introduction). Stick to “subject verb agreement” ( body paragraph 1, main reason is), make use of appropriate punctuation. Vocabulary could be more impactful. variety of sentence structure should be used. Approach is good.
Band : 2.5/6
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Feedback : need to focus on sentence structure, try to use variety of structures ( complex, compound etc.) . Transition words are missing . Vocabulary needs to be more sophisticated. Be cautious with prepositions. As “partially agree” essay, second body paragraph could be more elaborative.
Band : 1.5/6
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Feedback : Need to work on grammar usage. Kindly refer to sample answer to make it more justifiable as an informal letter.
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Feedback : Approach is good but avoid repetitive usage of words, make use of punctuation to make sentences more clear. Need to include more impactful words. “Some and others” couldn’t be seen in the respective paragraphs.
Band : 2/6
