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    Shazia

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    July 25, 2021 at 8:28 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Cert<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ain </yt-formatted-string>people believe that children should be encouraged to be competitive but others think th<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>at children should become more co-operative to become successful.</yt-formatted-string>

    <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>In my opinion children should be more competitive r</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ther th</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>n being coll</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>abor</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ative but in </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a healthy </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and positive w</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ay. Now- </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a- d</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ays children </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>are exposed to competition from </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a precise </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>age, be it </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ac</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ademic</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ally or soci</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ally. </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>There is no doubt th</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>at children </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>are the core of the future world </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and the educ</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ation for children is considered to be the top priority in </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>almost every n</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ation.</yt-formatted-string>

    <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>First of all competition c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an motiv</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ate pursue their go</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>als, both in educ</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ation </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and sports, under any competitive environment </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>anyone especially children tend to be pushed to their distinct </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>nd ide</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>al </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>adroitness. Through competition youngsters c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an be tr</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ained </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””> sharpen their independent skills, their confidence c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>n incre</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ase bewilderingly </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””> to </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>accept</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>able range. In this competitive world every individu</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>al </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and every child is struggling on their own with inadequate </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>amount of support. In this world, people </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>alw</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ays try to work their way up </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and try to be the best. For inst</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ance, competition</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””> motiv</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ates youngsters to </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>acceler</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ate their efforts to </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>att</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ain </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a higher level in educ</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ation </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and in other </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>activities. For this they work h</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ard to compete with others </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and underst</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and the v</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>alue of h</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ard work.</yt-formatted-string>

    <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>Secondly, it is </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>also import</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ant for children to be co-oper</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ative which c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an inculc</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ate te</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>am spirit in them, te</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>am work </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and tolerance </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and they le</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>arn to be p</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>atient. They </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>also le</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>arn to be</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ar others success in </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a friendly m</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>anner. There should be cle</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ar limit in every competition that we put in children’s mind. To illustr</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ate, some children c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>annot t</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ake the pressure of f</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ailures </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and tend to h</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>arm themselves or even try to commit suicide sometimes </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and become dishe</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>artened & frustrated. </yt-formatted-string>

    <b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>To conclude, </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a he</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>althy competition c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an definitely bring the best in </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>a child but coll</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>abor</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>atively they c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an be more successful with proper guid</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ance, they c</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>an </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>achieve positive results through positive w</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ays </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and thoughts </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>and </yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>att</yt-formatted-string><b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”><yt-formatted-string force-default-style=””>ain their dreams.</yt-formatted-string>

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    Shazia

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    July 15, 2021 at 7:58 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    Children now a days are using computers from young age, but spending long hours definitely have a negative impact on them.

    This essay will look into both advantages and disadvantages in using computers at an early age. Since the advent of computers, we are becoming more dependant on technology. The main advantage of using computer is it makes our lives easier in numerous ways.

    Firstly, the advantages of using computer is it has made learning process easier for children. For instance the outbreak of the corona pandemic has forced all the children for home schooling. young children can learn reading skills through images and videos.

    The other advantage is they will learn other skills such as painting, on line story readings . Furthermore it makes children easy for the future use of computers.

    Secondly , the disadvantage of spending long hours on computers makes children addictive and it negatively impacts the overall development of youngsters . The children are becoming ferocious .

    Children sitting for long hours can damage their eyes .They can easily get addicted to computer games which may leads to distraction from their studies .

    To conclude , computers are good for children to start using from an early age but it should be done in adults supervision and for limited time.

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    Shazia

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    July 13, 2021 at 5:34 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Technology )

    Few people argue that modern technology has enhanced and improved peoples social lives. I strongly believe that people are advent to modern technology and connecting freely and easily with no geographical barriers. This essay will explain several benefits offered by modern technology. However social media has it’s own positive and negative effects unless it is used in a proper way .

    On the one hand technology and social media has connected people globally . Use of various social networking sites such as Facebook , WhatsApp messaging ,video calling has provided way to converse with people from distant locations all over the world . Meanwhile technology has made humans more social. For instance, the ongoing global pandemic of corona virus disease , this out break has affected different people in many ways. Ever since the lockdown started everyone got isolated . although people are spending quality time together with their family members, in light of sophisticated modern technology many adapted to work online, children were doing home schooling .Furthermore online meetings by businessmen using zoom and Ms teams are being held , and ordering the needful through online stores , e shopping , and many more .

    On the other hand, people think that because of social media our way of life has changed. The invention of such technology has effected the youngsters more by its addictive nature, where they spend their quality time on social media and are isolated from the society . The ferocity of the modern technology can negatively impact the moral development of a youngster , for instance crime level has increased over the decades .

    To conclude although modern technology has some negative effects but I believe that the benefits associated with it are immense.

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    Shazia

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    July 1, 2021 at 5:30 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    People believe that children these days are engaged in various computer games and instead spend more time in outdoor activities which is more advantageous for their growth .

    I believe that outdoor activities provide a conducive environment for the child’s mental and physical health .since children are more interested in online games ,they become complacent towards their health .

    Outdoor activities are beneficial to children in many ways . They make them fitter and stronger as individual , outdoor games require more than one individual , for instance when children play games like football or cricket they can also develop social skills as they learn to share and work as part of a team and make new friends . Furthermore children who spends more time outdoors are less stressed and are mentally more stable than those who spends more time playing computer games .

    Moreover children are becoming dependant on technology since the advent of computer. Playing computer games for long time have many inevitable negative affects on their lives including studies. Addiction of gadgets in children is making them arrogant , lazy and also some serious health issue related to eye sight , obesity and many are getting prone to diabetic and mental illness such as anxiety , depression .

    In conclusion , outdoor games is the key to health development in children than playing computer games .

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    June 28, 2021 at 7:23 PM in reply to:

    Dear Ryan ,

    Hope you are good . I am so excited to hear that you are coming to Hyderabad next month , and i am sure you will love the city.

    So as you want to spend 3 weeks in my home town , it would be great if you could stay with me and my family . We will have a great time together .But of course , if you prefer more privacy , i can book a good hotel for your stay .

    Since the weather is expected to be rainy and pleasant , make sure you don’t forget to bring your rain coats . Sometimes it will be humid , as the weather here is unpredictable , I advice you to carry a few cotton clothes .

    There are a lot of places in the city to visit , and we can have delicious cuisine .I am super excited about your visit .So let me know ,if you need some more information .

    Best wishes .

  • Certain people think that hosting International sporting events gives perfect chance to show the calibre of the country to the world. However others consider that these kind of events are mainly wastage of money .

    Organising such kind of sport events are beneficial for the hosting country . It inhibits the ideas, customs and social behaviour of the nation.

    First and foremost advantage of hosting international events is that the host country becomes centre of attention and attracts many sport loving tourist . this brings prestige and honour to the country . such mega events will bring a great opportunity for the local business to expand and many engineers and workers are hired for building of infra structures and many talented workers will be employed .Hosting such events is definitely worth investing if it is well planned.

    Although these events consumes huge amount of money for organising ,for instance constructing suitable infra structure such as stadiums , accommodation for the visitors, athletes and their companions .Moreover such mega events will have some negative outcomes for the residents .While building infra structures , government orders to evict residents in order to build up new stadiums and roads .

    In conclusion , despite the expenses involved in hosting international sports event, I believe that the benefits associated with such events will be massive .

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    Shazia

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    June 17, 2021 at 7:29 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Art is a form of culture which reflects the heritage of a country and nation. It is often argued that the government is spending its finances on the art and this money can be invested somewhere else and make proper use of it.

    In my view , I completely disagree that the authorities should spend a large part of its budget on art rather than spending on the public services. However spending finances on art is also essential but in a proper way.

    Firstly, spending some amount of budget on arts and culture is essential. To begin, it is difficult for many arts institutions to generate much profit, so without some help from the government, many theatres and other such places may have to close. Moreover, the arts also have an important impact on our quality of life. Many people get great pleasure on going to art exhibitions and also there are many historical places where arts of our ancestors can be seen. so it is important that the government should assists such institutions so that they can continue to provide entertainment to the public.

    secondly, In country like India with vast population and many other countries such as somalia where there is more poverty. There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of the government budget on public services. First and foremost, public services are the things such as hospitals, roads and schools, and these things determine the quality of life . For example, if the government does not spend enough money on hospitals, the health of our society may decline. Similarly, if not enough money is spent on schools, our children may not be properly educated. Also, it will be the poor in our society that will be affected more .

    In conclusion ,large amount of budget should not be spend on art but it should be upto some extent . Mean while spending money on public services is also important as it impacts the life and welfare of the society.

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    Shazia

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    June 11, 2021 at 9:11 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    It is often argued that advertisements inspire us to buy unnecessary things which are not needed. On the other hand some believe that promotion of a innovative products may enhance our lives.

    In my opinion, I agree that promoting a new product can ease our lives.

    Firstly advertising is a good way to introduce a new product. Even though some products are of no use .

    For example, if we see a new thing at any grocery store we will have a look on the ingredients, They are using in that particular product, analyse that whether the product is having any chemicals which is harmful to our health.

    If the quality of the product and the ingredients used are beneficial we can go for it.

    Secondly good products can improve our health. In some groceries we will find packed healthy food’s like salads, diet food and fresh sliced fruits etc. It is always important to choose nutritious food. Advertisements lure the costumers to buy products.

    In conclusion I believe that advertising a new product is good unless it is of our use.

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    Shazia

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    June 10, 2021 at 9:29 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Dear Payal,

    Hi there, I hope you are doing well .It’s been long time since we met. Moreover i have been busy from few days with my exam preparations. Anyways you will be glad to hear that my husband and all of our family members got PR for Canada and we are planning to shift there .so, we are inviting all our friends to bid a farewell party. You along with your family are invited to attend the party and be a part of our celebrations.

    My family members ,some of our relatives, and few of our friends are expected to be present at the party .

    I hope you haven’t forgotten my home address. But in case if you don’t remember my address just ping me.

    l look forward to seeing you at the party.

    See you ,

    xyz.

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    Shazia

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    June 8, 2021 at 8:52 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Dear sir,

    I am writing this letter to express my interest in taking this part time job at your restaurant.

    I have recently worked in Radison Hotel for the past 5 years. I have excellent communication skills along with the ability to work with a wide range of people.

    I am volunteering to work 6 days a week. I will be willing to have my shifts in the morning hours till noon.

    I would be grateful if you give me chance to work at your restaurant. Therefore, I look forward to receiving your response.

    Yours Faithfully,

    Shazia Tahmeen

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