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    sheena

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    June 25, 2022 at 1:57 PM in reply to: Task 1 (Process Diagram)

    The given diagram illustrates the process of making materials from reusable plastics by recycling plastic bottles.

    Looking from an overall perspective, the entire process consists of stages such as bottles collection from bins, sort them if recyclable, compress and crush to produce pellets and convert pellets to create raw materials and various products.

    To start with, consumers dispose the used plastic bottles in recycling bins, which are in turn picked up by the garbage collector vehicles and transport them to recycling centers. At the recycling center, bottles are sorted by hand as per the quality and recyclable plastics are compressed into cube shaped boxes. These boxes are then crushed to form smaller plastic pieces.

    Consequently, these particles are washed and fed into a machine which produces plastic pellets. These pellets then heated to create raw materials. Finally, the raw materials will be used to manufacture end products such as bottles, tiffin boxes, bags, T-shirts and pencils.

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    sheena

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    June 23, 2022 at 6:08 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay: Formal School Age

    Nowadays, kids at the age of 3 to 6 are sent to school for legitimate reasons, but few people propose to begin schooling only after 7 years. I support commencing education as early as possible and this essay will discuss both aspects, justifying the argument to start education at an early age.

    Indeed, it is very easy for toddlers to learn new concepts and adapt to new environment compared to older children due to their faster brain development. They are curious, highly energetic and often it becomes difficult for parents to help and nurture them effectively. Schools teach discipline, nourish language abilities, enhance analytical and logical skills in a professional way compared to the tactics of inexperienced parents. For instance, learning disabilities like dyslexia or autism can be quickly identified by trained staffs and may be corrected if found in advance.

    On the other hand, children should not be forced to learn multiple things as each student is unique and takes his/her time to learn. Overburdening them with home works and exams is not a good idea which will unnecessarily induce stress and anxiety for students and family. Furthermore, younger ones would not have learnt to express themselves and convey the issues or problems they go through. Hence it is important that parents spend time with kids rather than relying on outsiders.

    In conclusion, though there are some cons in sending children to educational institutions early, it can bring positive impact on them if institutions are able to balance the emotional needs of each pupil. Hence, I encourage the idea to ensure systematic coaching in advance.

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    sheena

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    June 15, 2022 at 6:56 PM in reply to: Essay

    In recent times, many people expect that the financial liabilities should be handled by both partners in a marriage. Personally, I disagree with this notion as it may not be practical and will have adverse impact on the family. This essay will discuss benefits and drawback of such an idea and explain the necessity of dividing the roles in a family.

    Undoubtedly, there are many advantages in sharing the financial responsibility in a household as a double income makes one’s life easier compared to a single income. Issues due to high cost of living, other economic crisis and struggle to meet basic needs of the family are mitigated, if both people are working. For Instance, there are cities like Tokyo, where people do not prefer to have babies due to high cost of living and double income can solve this issue to some extent.

    In contrast, multiple things in a house are getting neglected when both partners are busy in making a better living. Inculcating good habits and values and physical and mental health of the members are often disregarded in such situations. For example, many incidents are reported about how infants are treated badly by nannies in the absence of their parents. Hence it is necessary to divide roles in a family as per people’s abilities and take care of aspects other than wealth and balance the whole ecosystem for an overall well-being of the household.

    In conclusion, although it is good to get additional
    income for the financial stability, it creates multiple issues due to the less
    time individuals spent with their kids and spouses. Therefore, I oppose the
    idea of focusing only on the money instead of looking after all aspects for a better
    living

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    sheena

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    June 11, 2022 at 11:57 AM in reply to: IELTS Task 1: Influencers Bar Chart

    The bar chart details the number of followers for famous personalities in Instagram in years 2018 and 2021.

    Overall, data is captured from the accounts of Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez and it is observed that Cristiano had the greatest number of followers while Selena Gomez was less popular among all in 2021.

    In 2018, number of the fans for Selena Gomez was approximately 125 million whereas Cristiano had just 100 million plus. However, this figure increased precipitously for Cristiano, tripling the numbers in 2021 while Selena’s admirers doubled. Though Selena was having the highest number of supporters in 2018, she was unable to keep the top position in 2021 as the figures dropped to the last position among the 5 influencers.

    Furthermore, supporters of The Rock, kylie and Ariana were 100 million in 2018 but numerals shows that their fan base doubled in 3 years reaching 250 million out numbering Selena’s followers. Finally, it is observed that there is no huge difference in figures between the three in 2021, but numbers of The Rock’s admirers are slightly more than the other two influencers.

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    sheena

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    June 10, 2022 at 7:41 PM in reply to: Task 2 IELTS Essay: Information Technology

    Information Technology has a huge impact on our daily lives and it has become almost impossible to lead a life without getting involved with technological trends. This essay will discuss the merits, demerits and justify the usage of the same.

    Undoubtedly, technological advancements have made human life better due to the convenience of getting any job done easily. In fact, nowadays shopping of groceries, clothing and electronic devices are under few clicks away at the comfort of home. Moreover, bill payments are much simpler than ever before and carrying money in hand is no longer a requirement in the digital world. Due to high connectivity capabilities, we are able to work from home, collaborate with team and ensures high productivity in long run. Indeed, remote working is a good choice for keeping work-life balance in our lives and many employers have found this mode of working cost-effective. Also, there are multiple platforms available to keep us entertained through movies, songs, sports and games.

    Nevertheless, there are multiple disadvantages due to the technological intervention in each and every activity we do. Leading a sedentary lifestyle, addiction of video games and social medias and lack of interpersonal communication are few demerits of this boom. This also affects us mentally, making us defocused and inattentive. Having said that, it is an individual’s choice to take advantage of the given opportunity or to misuse it. Of course, these demerits can be avoided by strict and careful usage of the technology.

    In conclusion, it is obvious that, even though there are multiple cons, it is inarguable that pros are bringing a lot more opportunities and convenience to human life. Engineers are working hard to make human life better, hence it is wise to take advantage of the situation rather than rejecting it.

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    sheena

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    June 3, 2022 at 6:59 PM in reply to: Task 2 ( Crime )

    Studies have shown that prisoners, who are released from prison are involved in illegal activities again and this essay will discuss the probable reasons and possible solutions to stop them from such criminal acts.

    There are multiple causes for high recidivism rates among offenders and bad treatments from fellow inmates, jailors and other police staffs is one of the main reasons for the same. Convicts are punished ruthlessly inside cells and limited effort is put to inculcate moral values in their life. Due to this, even if they are out of the prison, they do not have any mental strength to hold themselves back from wrongdoings. Furthermore, Ex-convicts are not always accepted by the family or society and they struggle to find a livelihood for themselves. For instance, many employers deny jobs for people with past criminal records. Because of this social stigma, they fail to keep up their ethical behaviour and end up in committing crimes again.

    In my opinion, recidivism can be prevented by inducing ethical behaviours, rehabilitating and supporting past offenders to live a decent life. While they are serving their imprisonment, human rights should not be violated, this includes providing medical facilities including psychological support and a better way of earning money to ensure financial stability once they are out of the cell. They can also be empowered to pursue their interest areas, to feel a sense of achievement in their life. Moreover, authorities should be able to understand the motive of the offenders and address those issues rather than ill-treating the convicts.

    In conclusion, high recidivism rates are highly problematic in the society and authorities, common people, employers and doctors need to participate in the rehabilitating ex-convicts.

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    sheena

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    May 31, 2022 at 9:25 PM in reply to: (Table Chart)

    The table illustrates the number of international students studying in CANADA and US from different countries such as China,India USA and CANADA in 2002 and 2003.

    Overall, it is observed that even though a greater number of international pupils were studying in the US during the years shown in the table, the percentage of pupils who chose CANADA were more.

    In 2002, more than 5000 students from China and USA enrolled in CANADA colleges whereas pupils from India were few thousands. 45%, 9% and 35% increase in numbers in subsequent year from countries china, USA and India respectively.

    Over lakhs of pupils from China and India chose to study in USA in 2002 while students from CANADA were comparatively smaller in numbers. However, there is a decline in the numbers of students from India in 2003 compared to previous year. A total of 2% of the students opted USA while 17% pupils opted CANADA for studies.

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