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    Aniket

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    August 31, 2021 at 8:41 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (large number of gyms) Problem & Solution Essay

    In today’s era a person who exercise daily, often stays fit. In order to stay fit, some people join gyms but, it is not possible for a large crowd. There are considerable number of workout places, as a matter of fact most crowds still do not get a motivation to exercise maybe due to the modern pressure in this technological era, while, they should try to find opportunities for exercise.

    One possible reason for the inactive lifestyle could be laziness. Most people do not like to go out and hate doing physical work. The common thing which can be observed that most people take gym subscriptions and roughly after 2 or 3 days they stop going due to the laziness. Another possible reason could be, the workload people face nowadays. For instance, in a plethora of companies, the strict deadlines do not allow time for breaks. Furthermore, due to the modern innovations which does physical work within a fraction of seconds. As an example, washing machines in homes doing laundry and other such appliances which finishes a work without an effort. Hence, people make less physical movement.

    To resolve this problem, first and foremost people should stop relying on different equipments and find ways to exercise. For example, they can take stairs instead of a lift. Next, they can park cars or vehicles a little far away from the office so they can have a good walk. Moreover, in order to solve the workload issue, companies should promote prizes and awards like bonus for the individual who stays fit. Gyms should be open within the companies premises and like lunch time there should be a compulsory time for workout.

    In conclusion, management and people both should try to search and incorporate various methods to promote a fit culture. Also, people should rely less on technologies.

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    August 28, 2021 at 9:55 PM in reply to: Academic Task-1 ( pie chart)

    The two pie charts illustrates the proportion of budget on household necessities for four categories, for a particular country China, in two years 1995 and 2011. Overall, it can be seen that the budget had increased gradually for medicine and household necessities, while food and clothing holds a major and significant proportion respectively for both the years.

    As it can be explicitly observed that, the budget on food products had declined about 9 percent in the last 16 years. On the other hand, there was a marginal fall in clothing by merely a percent.

    With regards to the remaining groups, both household goods and medicine increased slightly. In the year 1995, medicine comprised of a tiny fraction, while it increased slightly to roughly about one in ten in the year 2011. Similarly, household goods rose from about 9 percent to just over a tenth.

    In conclusion, spends grew in the last 16 years for medicine and household goods. While, a marginal fall was observed in food and clothing.

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    Aniket

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    August 26, 2021 at 4:14 PM in reply to: IELTS Writing Task 2 – Both Views + Opinion

    Few people argue that travelling abroad is a necessity to understand about a country. On the other hand, some crowd argue that information are readily available on a TV and the Internet so it is not much required. While travelling abroad can create meaningful experiences, on the other side it can save efforts of an individual through the means of mass media.

    As it is lucid that, visiting different nations can give deep and sound experiences. This is because, as someone visits a place they are more likely to get connected with the society. For instance, they learn and experience different languages, accents while asking there way to reach at certain destinations. Moreover, visiting local areas where there is no internet access and learning about one’s traditional culture. Overall, understanding values of that particular area.

    It is interesting to note that, since the introduction of the internet and advancements in the modern gadgets, all the information are easily available at our fingertips. As an example, one can use google maps 3D view, also different virtual reality devices can create a similar feel as you are at that place. Moreover, lot of blogs and you tube videos are available on the net which can be used as a learning medium about wide spectrum of things a nation offers and can save both time and money.

    In conclusion, although it may seem that, these modern appliances can save considerable time, energy, and cash but on the other hand, internet and TV has a limitation, not every places have it. Furthermore, for best experiences it is advised to travel, as it can leave fruitiful effects on an individual.

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    August 26, 2021 at 12:35 PM in reply to: Task 2 – Cause – Solution [Teaching]

    Teaching, as a profession had witnessed some considerable changes in the last decade. Nowadays, in numerous nations, only few people take interest in teaching students from secondary schools. Most crowd argue that salary and curriculum are the root causes for it. To examine this, the essay will focus on understanding the causes and work towards finding relevant solutions.

    One of the causes could be, the poor income given to faculties as compared to other sectors. Often, these days due to inflation prices of products are sky rocketing due to which people refrain themselves from teaching careers in secondary schools. Another possible reason might be that the curriculum is quite old and as a result, it becomes boring. For instance, in many countries there is loads of theory without any hands on that people often find it mundane.

    One possible solution is giving best appraisals to the teachers so that they can survive the inflation. Moreover, secondary schools can do so by hiring the experienced faculties and create a system of grades according to the experience of professors and that can help them decide the salary according to the market standards. Furthermore, addition of practical subjects along with the theoretical ones. A study shows that imparting practical education is fruitful than theoretical learning and aids towards better understanding of the subjects.

    To conclude, given the best facilities to people in all countries, who sincerely love teaching can overall improve the numbers of educators in the secondary school and may cross the intake digits as compared to other sectors.

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    August 26, 2021 at 10:46 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2 – [Opinion]

    The modern innovations had witnessed dramatic changes in the last few decades. Among, such inventions are the smartphones. Few people argue that these technologies are making humankind less socially available for one another. It may seem that cell phones connect people together, but the fact is, they do not.The essay will examine the reasons for the following opinion.

    Firstly, mobile phones made most people introverts from extroverts. Many people fear from real life conversations because they do quite few, conversations can only be seen happening with the family members in some cases. However, when there is some random person people often get nervous. One such example is fear of public speaking in people nowadays. In general, mobile devices have affected the conversational skills in humans by a large factor.

    Secondly, these modern devices have made people disconnected from the reality. Since the introduction of devices till present, the apps started flooding the market and mankind found it so much amazing that they are hooked to the virtual world. For instance, addictive gaming in phones have severely affected young children. Furthermore, entertainments applications in smart devices like netflix, prime video devised certain algorithms for personalisation that if a person starts watching any movies or tv series they are hooked to it and will converse less with anybody. Hence, lost into the virtual world far away from the real world.

    To conclude, mobile devices have hampered the people conversational skills, relationships and made them less readily available for one another. Altogether, losing the human touch.

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    August 25, 2021 at 2:53 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Languages are the means of communication in this world. Since the travellers travelled across different nations they also found new languages to socialize with the new groups of people. Most of the english speaking countries travelled around the world and left an impact on others homeland about western styles including english as well. While, having english as the only language can promote a unified culture with no hardships in understanding other language, on the other side it can affect the diversification of cultures in this world.

    As it is clear that, having a single language in our case as english, will surely bring down the communication gap. For instance, many non english speaking countries like Japan and China, find it very difficult to connect and follow along the ideas with the english speaking countries. Furthermore, it will reduce the grudges some countries have over other nations language. Like, some people often, make fun of others languages to make them feel ashamed about there own language. Moreover, having a one language can promote a sense of unity among other nations, as other nations will be able to follow along the ideas and will be less prone to misconceptions. Overall, bringing down the gaps in communication.

    Now, turning to the details of what might go wrong. Firstly, it can severely affect the diversity of the current world. People often love diversification as it aids in learning one’s culture and connection with there ancestral life. Also, a single literature for the world seems boring. Literatures, like poems, music, art, and craft often brings joy for there learners and among others as well, which will be lost if we have a unified language for all. The variety that every culture contributes to the society is very important afterall.

    To sum up, a language of one for all can benefit to the society through its approach of togetherness in relationships around the globe. On the other side, it can take away different lifestyles and trends one is able to impart from other languages.

  • The charts depicts the money expend and generated for children’s charity in the particular country USA for a single year, 2016. Overall, it is conspicuous that there are approximately 6 revenue streams as opposed to the expenditures. Moreover, the collection of amount collected from different sources are slightly greater than the spend amount.

    As it is presented in the pie chart, the donated food accounts for 86.6% while other income, government grants, and investment income covers only a tiny fraction. Moreover, community contributions constitutes (10.4 percent) than program revenue which makes up only a small portion (2.2%).

    In terms of expenditures, the spends were more on program services holding a very large proportion. On the contrary, fundraising, management and general holds only a small fraction.(2.6% and 1.6% respectively).

    Overall, it could be plainly viewed that total amount collected through the income model is roughly around 53.5 million while payouts accounts for a total of roughly 53 million.

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    Aniket

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    August 24, 2021 at 1:08 AM in reply to: Academic Report Writing

    The time graph illustrates the free hours expend by elderly people on five different activities in the specific country United States from 1980 to 2010.

    Overall, the hiking activities had rocketed in comparison to other pastime. Moreover, reading had seen quite ups and downs over the period given.

    As from the chart it is lucid that between 1980s to 2010, the hiking activity rose considerably from a fifth to four fifth. While surfing the internet stood at approximately 5% in 1980s and there was a marginal growth just above one in ten by the end of century. By the start of the 2000s it surged significantly and reached half by the end of 2010s. On the contrary watching television remained roughly around three fifth at the start of 1980s until the end of 2010s, while there was a peak observed around 2000s to less than 3 quarters. The theatre dipped over the given timeframe from half to 30 percent in a decade, then there was a slight increase till end of the next decennium around 40% and remained just above it by the end of 2010s. Moreover, the reading which stood exactly at 30% in 1980s climbed to two fifth in next ten years than slipped back to one fifth in 2000s, then over the next decade soared dramatically to more than half.

    Lastly, we can conclude that all the activities remained approximately between 45 percent to four fifth by the end of 2010.

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    Aniket

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    August 23, 2021 at 11:51 AM in reply to: IELTS Academic Writing Task 1/ Graph Writing – Bar/Column Graph:

    The bar chart depicts the different sectors of education with the enrolment figures of girls per 100 boys in the year 1990 and 1998 respectively. It was lucid that the developed countries has outperformed the developing countries in all three modes of education, and also easily achieving the target in tertiary education sector.

    Categorically speaking, the figures for developed countries had steadily increased from primary to tertiary crossing the target 5 times and around 0.12 percent per 100 boys, in the year 1990 and 1998 respectively. With primary education being the lowest roughly 5 or 4 less than 100 in both the years correspondingly. Moreover, secondary education was approximately close to 100 in both years.

    The data for developing countries suggest that only in case of primary sector, they were able to cross above the 80 limit per 100 boys, while in case of secondary education, only in 1998 the figures climbed just over 80, with eight less than eighty in 1990. On the other hand, the tertiary was the worst among all with exactly 3 quarters in 1998 and less than three quarters in the year 1990.

    Overall, the general trend suggests that only developed nations were able to achieve the target, while developing countries had not seen a good rise in any of the sectors and remained under the target.

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    August 15, 2021 at 10:06 PM in reply to: IELTS Academic Task 1: Distances Travelled Bar Chart

    The chart depicts the distance patterns of people in kilometres on the weekly basis for 5 modes of transport over a decade (1990 – 2000). It can be clearly seen that the use of commercial transports buses and rails had a major impact for large distances travelled, in comparison to the other means of transport air, motorbike and bicycle.

    The data suggests that the dependency of bus was more in the decade than any other facilities for transportation gradually increasing from 40 km to just over 42 km. It is worth noting that the trains were also not behind with approximately 35km in 1990 with a marginal increase roughly around 38km.

    It is interesting to note that the dependency over bicycle has declined significantly from almost 5 km to nearly 2km. Now turning over the details for motorbike and air, the bikes usage had seen a marginal fall from around 7 km in 1990 to just under 5km in 2000. On the other hand, flights had seen a climb from 1 km to 5 km in the next 10 years which is worth noting.

    <font face=”inherit”>Overall, we can conclude from the illustration that the use of transports </font>soared<font face=”inherit”> by 10 km i.e from (100 to 110)km. </font>

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