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avoid a comma before usage of ‘but’
error: women
use the term -purchase/e-books
error :there are several benefits
NOTE:Well tried/work on minor grammatical errors
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use terms: adversely being affected
error: concern
note: work on constructive sentences/add more terms
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Use the term opine instead of believe
avoid quotation marks
note:well tried/good framework used/work more on synonyms
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avoid a comma before ‘but’
add: interaction mode/platform
use the mentioning of example at the end of the body paragraphs
NOTE: Work more on details and examples alignment ./add more terms
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add :to it
form an outline statement without the usage of ‘i’
mention: several opportunities
avoid unwanted capitalization in some places
NOTE:well tried/work on minor grammatical errors /add more explanation to the body 2
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error: used commonly
mention:give suitable reasons
avoid using examples in the middle of explanations/use it at the end
mention opinion in the intro para
work on adding more points and add more terms/avoid minor errors
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avoid a comma before usage of ‘but’
error: women
use the term -purchase/e-books
error :there are several benefits
NOTE:Well tried/work on minor grammatical error
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avoid using the term ‘we’ /do not use personal pronouns
error: social platforms like
reaching out easily/globally
use the term-in today’s era
NOTE: Avoid using unnecessary capitalization/work more on minor errors
well tried
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Add :native places
error: although there are several
avoid using the term ‘we’
avoid using personal pronouns for explanation like we/him/he/his./she /.her
grammatical errors noted: do not add a comma before ‘but’
NOTE: Work on the layout of explanation/add suitable terms and avoid personal pronouns
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use terms like-from my perspective/as far as I am concerned[to mention opinion]
error: online platforms quite popular
avoid giving an example in between explanation/form an example at the end of the body paragraph for justification’
body para 2 the last line is incomplete
use terms like-it is believed that
NOTE: work on minor grammatical errors/develop a habit of proof reading and work more on connectors
work only on one sided explanation /as the question demands for it
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use :on a regular interval/daily basis
instead chatting-add communicating
note: well tried /but work on a more structured content with descriptive information and elaboarte explanation in body paragraphs
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Avoid using a comma before ‘because’
do not mention countries as an explanation in the explanatory part-use it for examples
avoid mentioning terms like we
avoid spaces between paragraphs-use space in a structured way
If an opinion is already mentioned in Introduction part-you can avoid it in the conclusion part
NOTE:Work more on content layout and add suitable synonyms to it
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avoid a comma before the usage of ‘but’
use term as-mitigated
mention-I strongly agree
avoid using etc.-instead use ‘and so on’
use terms like-contributing such aids
note: the content is well explained/but few places unnecessary capitalization is mentioned :avoid them/work on adding more synonyms to the statements
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minor errors noted: plays/builds/nowadays/these resources
spelling error: economic growth/recruit/foreign/creates/benefit
use capitalization for places
avoid giving a comma before ‘but’
avoid using a personal pronoun in body paragraph.
use connectors to begin body paragraph 2 [on the contrary/on one hand/moreover]
add connectors like -to conclude at the end
note: add more constructive sentences/work on spelling errors and focus on adding connecting terms
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i[use both expression of greetings Sir/Madam for formal letters]
ii[recent purchases] iii[I had ordered] iv[after I had unpacked the package I found out that/I was highly disappointed with the services and quality assurance from the company]
v[it is my humble request to ] vi[looking forward at the earliest response]
vii[yours faithfully]
work more on grammatical errors /use range of lexical terms to explain points and work more on practicing variety of topics.
keep writing!
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i[avoid a comma before usage of but] ii[avoid any kind of attachment details or documents mentioning in the letter like this]
iii[yours faithfully-formal letters]
work more on explanatory sentences and highlight more points to frame the content with appropriate. sentences. Grammatical errors needs to be taken care of and work on task response n terms of content length/add more of lexical words to have a balanced explained content
well tried.keep writing!!!
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i[which i had purchased]
ii[I had ordered it online]/iii[use capital I while representing the answer]
iv[the sound system started troubleshooting/functional disruption/]
v[has been sent for any repair or customer support] vi[or else I have to take]
vii[yours faithfully,] add full name
errors noted in grammatical range and too many incorrect tense structure while forming sentences/work on well explained sentence range and synonyms.
well tried-work on the errors!keep writingi[which i had purchased]
ii[I had ordered it online]/iii[use capital I while representing the answer]
iv[the sound system started troubleshooting/functional disruption/]
v[has been sent for any repair or customer support] vi[or else I have to take]
vii[yours faithfully,] add full name
errors noted in grammatical range and too many incorrect tense structure while forming sentences/work on well explained sentence range and synonyms.
well tried-work on the errors!keep writing
