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    October 22, 2021 at 9:55 PM in reply to: GT Letter Writing Task 1: Formal Letter

    Feedback: Need work on sentence formation, Sentence types, & use of cohesive devices as found less.

    Band: 1.5/3

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    October 22, 2021 at 9:50 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (people want to become teachers)

    Feedback: Good attempt but need to work on Related words, sentence formation, Grammatical errors, & use of cohesive devices.

    Band: 2/6

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    October 22, 2021 at 9:46 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (people want to become teachers)

    Feedback: well approached with good use of cohesive devices, need to work on grammatical errors as found in Introduction, BP 1, & Conclusion. Try to avoid repetition as found “Less” word is used more than one.

    Band: 3.5/6

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    October 12, 2021 at 9:46 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (how to survive financially)

    Feedback: Content is not up to the mark, need to work on thought process a lot, sentence formation, related words, sentence types & cohesive devices.

    Band: 1.5/6

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    October 12, 2021 at 9:43 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (how to survive financially)

    Feedback: Good effort but found many grammatical errors highlighted in brackets in bold & repetitions of sentence type & words as well, need to work on sentence formation, cohesive devices, sentence types, related vocabularies.

    Band:2/6

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    October 12, 2021 at 9:34 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (how to survive financially)

    Feedback: Very well attempt with good use of content, need to work on conditional sentences cohesive devices as found less & related vocabularies, try to avoid repetition as “Student” word is used many times.

    Band: 4/6

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    September 17, 2021 at 9:55 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – International Sports Events

    Feedback: Introduction needs to be improved as per the requirements such as: Paraphrasing, Thesis Statement, and outline rest should be discussed in the following paragraphs. Need to work cohesive devices as found less instead simple structures and also try to avid multiple sentences in future.

    Band: 2.5/6

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    September 17, 2021 at 8:13 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Technology )

    Feedback: Approach is acceptable but it need to work on sentence types as found a similar structure multiple Times used in the discussion such as use of have and simple sentences apart from that need to work on example as it should not be e copied from any article, magazine, newspaper or any relevant data.

    Band: 2/6

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    September 17, 2021 at 7:18 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- OPINION ESSAY (BUSINESS)

    Feedback: Need to work on approach, sentence formation repetition of words and Cohesive devices and grammatical mistakes highlighted above in bold.

    Band: 2/6

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    September 17, 2021 at 7:08 PM in reply to: GT LETTER WRITING TASK 1- LETTER OF ADVICE

    Feedback: Approach needs to be improved as the requirement of 3 bullet points are not fulfilled. Need to work on connecters as Use of “And” is not used properly that caused incorrect formation.

    Band: 1/3

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    September 17, 2021 at 7:03 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    Feedback: Very well written. Approach is good with relevant content. Words and Cohesive devices are also well used. Need to work on examples and conclusion as there is no requirement to write example while concluding the discussion rest is good.

    Band: 4/6

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    September 9, 2021 at 2:33 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (how to survive financially)

    Feedback: Very good approach and good use of information to describe the areas, worlds are also fine. Good job keep it up. Just work on language a bit.

    Band: 4.5/6

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    September 9, 2021 at 2:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (how to survive financially)

    Feedback: Good approach along with relevant information, need to work on cohesive devices and related words to make an impact and on language to discuss as found simple one.

    Band: 3.5/6

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    September 9, 2021 at 2:14 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (how to survive financially)

    Feedback: Entire essay went wrong because of incorrect sentence formation & multiple grammatical errors. Need to re-write.

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    August 18, 2021 at 11:56 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    Feedback: Very well written, Good use of cohesive devices along with good content to describe the information, approach is good, need to work on unnecessary errors highlighted in bold.

    Band: 4.5/6

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    August 16, 2021 at 4:59 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Feedback: Content is acceptable but need to work on grammatical range a lot as found Future Tense was used in the essay as found many, and also need to work on essay structure to categorised the paragraphs accordingly.

    Band: 2/6

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    August 16, 2021 at 4:53 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Feedback: Good use of vocabulary along with relevant content, need to work on sentence formation means subject/verb/agreement as highlighted in bold along with few grammatical errors.

    Band: 3.5/6

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    August 16, 2021 at 4:44 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Feedback: Good approach with relevant content, just try to work on sentence formation as highlighted in introduction, in BP 1 and BP 2 work on examples as well.

    Band: 3.5/6

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    August 16, 2021 at 4:30 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Feedback: Content is good with good use of related words, need to work on sentence formation as highlighted in bold, linking words a bit to create an impact and to make long sentences.

    Band: 3.5/6

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    August 16, 2021 at 3:47 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Feedback: Introduction is acceptable but few unnecessary grammatical errors and repetition found highlighted in bold, need to work on grammatical range, related words and few more complex sentences.

    Band: 2.5/6

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    August 16, 2021 at 3:38 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Feedback: Approach is good, but need to work on sentence formation, spelling errors, preposition, punctuation, reverent content, language and more cohesive devices to link as highlighted in bold.

    Band: 2.5/6

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    August 16, 2021 at 3:29 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Learning a Foreign Language)

    Feedback: Multiple Grammatical errors with multiple repetition highlighted in bold, need to work on Grammatical range & cohesive devices as limited sentence types were used.

    Band: 2:6

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    August 9, 2021 at 3:00 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 – Agree/Disagree (International sporting events)

    Feedback: Very well executed with relevant content, try to use few more complex sentences, and suitable words to create an impact, try to avoid unnecessary grammatical error as found in BP 1 – in 1st line – Attract- not Attracts.

    Band: 4.5/6

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    August 9, 2021 at 2:34 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 – Agree/Disagree (International sporting events)

    Feedback: Well Written, just need to focus on few more cohesive devices and avoid unnecessary grammatical error.

    Band: 4/6

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    August 9, 2021 at 1:56 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Feedback: Good attempt, good use of content but need to work on sentence formation along with few linking words, try to use examples as found none.

    Band: 2/6

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    August 9, 2021 at 1:52 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Feedback: Good effort but preparation required based on this category and in essay writing as found personalisation not generalisation, need to work on all 4 parameters of writing part 2, as simple structure was used.

    Band: 2/6

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    August 9, 2021 at 1:46 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Feedback: Content is not up to the mark neither relevant, but effort is good. Need to work on the requirement of this category and essay writing to create an impact as no example found, repetition is used in future sentences.

    Band: 2/6

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    August 9, 2021 at 1:41 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Feedback: Good attempt, content is good, few more cohesive devices can be used to make long and linked sentence along with the grammatical range,

    In BP 1 – Since there is no language barrier, people do not get hesitated should be there along with sentence formation used in example as found less appropriate.

    Band: 3.5/6

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    August 9, 2021 at 1:33 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Feedback: Very well written, try to avoid grammatical errors as found in BP 1 & 2 singular & plural errors along with conditional sentence, good use of cohesive device, need to work on language a bit to score good.

    Band: 3/6

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    August 9, 2021 at 1:25 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Feedback: Content is not up to the mark as because simple language the essay didn’t make an impact. Need to work on the essay writing patter to discuss the points accordingly, sentence formation needs to be improved along with related words, cohesive devices should be used to link the sentence.

    Band: 2/6

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