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Feedback: Overall good approach, but execution is not up to the mark as future tense was used a lot that has resulted repetition of the structure, Introduction could have been more precise & informative, need to work on sentence formation, related word, Grammatical range & accuracy.
Band: 2.5/6
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Feedback: Well written with good content, need to work on range as found less, specific feature to describe the chart.
Band: 2/3
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feedback: Very well executed with specific information, but need to improve introduction a bit, & grammatical range as well.
Band: 2/3
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Feedback: Try to follow the pattern required in task 1 based on “Overview, Overall, & Specific Feature” as it seems it’s missing.
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Feedback: Content is less to justify the information as major points were not introduced about the diagram to generate the electricity neither comparison was found.
Band: 1/3
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Feedback: Well attempt but need to work on Overview & Specific feature as the information is not explained properly.
Band: 1/3
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Feedback: Good attempt, Need to work on pattern requires in task 1 as specification is not up to the mark.
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Feedback: Content is not up to the mark neither enough to evaluate as it’s less than 250 words. Need to work on all 4 parameters of writing.
Band: 1/6
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Feedback: Content is not up to the mark, as limited content along with range of sentences used along with repetition of sentence structure found in 2nd paragraph.
Band: 2/6
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Feedback: Content is not up to the mark, as limited content along with range of sentences used along with repetition of sentence structure found in 2nd paragraph.
Band: 2/6
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Feedback: Content is good, try to control unnecessary grammatical errors, as no relevant examples also found.
Band: 3/6
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Feedback: Content it not much to evaluate however the approach is good, sentence formation needs to be improved as limited range found as no relevant examples found.
Band: 2/6
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Feedback- Approach is good but formation is not up to the mark, content is also not appropriate to frame impactful sentences, no relevant examples found.
Band: 2.5/6
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Feedback: Good approach but execution got failed due to incorrect formation in sentences with in valid example, content it also not up to the mark.
Band: 2.5/6
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Feedback: Well formed essay, need to work on more cohesive devices with more related words, no example found as well. Introduction needs to be improved as out line sentence is not appropriate.
Band: 3/6
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Feedback: Well written essay using relevant content with impressive examples, need to work on unnecessary grammatical errors & sentence formation highlighted in bold along with impactful related words & also avoid the repetition found multiple times “at early age” to boost the score.
Band: 4.5/6
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Feedback: Good use of content with range of sentences, need to work on unnecessary grammatical errors as found multiples highlighted in bold & impactful related words to boost the score. Rest was fine. Keep practicing.
Band: 3/6
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Feedback: Well attempted with good use of cohesive devices, content is good, just need to work on unnecessary grammatical errors due to incorrect formation used highlighted in bold. Rest keep it up.
Band: 4/6
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Feedback: Very well executed with good content, good use of range and words as well, need to work on sentence formation a bit to make an impression along with relevant examples as found none.
Band: 4/6
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Feedback: Very well written but execution got failed because of some unavoidable sentence formation & grammatical errors highlighted in the bold in the written essay. Need to work on these mistakes & on projection.
Band: 3/5
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Feedback: Good attempt, but need to work on sentence formation as it could have been more effective to create an impact, rest few more complex sentence should be used along with few more related words, Kindly look after the word limit as well as it’s less than 250.
Band: 2.5/6
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Feedback: Well executed with limited content, but execution got failed as few repetition were found with few grammatical errors due to incorrect formation. Need to work on these areas to get higher band.
Band: 3/6
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Feedback: Very well executed with good content, good use of words & sentence structure. Need to work on example as found incorrect formation that caused grammatical error.
Band: 3.5/6
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Feedback: Well attempt with good content but execution got failed as the content was not organised accordingly & sentence formation caused a lot, need work on formation a lot, no relevant examples found.
Band: 3.5/6
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Feedback: Good effort to attempt, but content is not up to the mark as it seems personalise & limited not generalise & out of the box, used limited range in sentences as well as in vocabularies, need to work on the pattern of this category & on the requirement of essay writing as no relevant examples found.
Band: 2/6
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Feedback: Well attempt, Content is acceptable but should be precise enough to make an impact in terms of language as well, need to work on more connectors, sentence formation to avoid grammatical errors, & range of vocabularies.
Band: 3/6
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Feedback: Limited content used describing in simple language with simple words, need to work on projection with wide range of sentence structures & vocabularies in order to get good band score rather roam around & sentence formation to avoid unnecessary grammatical error .
Band: 2.5/6
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Feedback: Well tried, overall content is acceptable but not up to the mark to make an impact. Need to work on sentence formation, Grammatical errors, & Grammatical Range means more sentence types.
Band: 2.5/6
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Feedback: Well executed with good use of grammatical range, however, few sentence formations went wrong and turned out to be a negative impact on essay, again examples have to be generalised not based on any data or survey.
Band: 3.5/6
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Feedback: Content is good, projection is not up to the mark as normal sentences are used, Need to work on few more sentence types & related words as found less & also sentence formation in order to create an impact. Example has to be in general not from any relevant data as 1st example found copied.
Band: 3/6
