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    June 7, 2021 at 3:11 PM in reply to: IELTS Academic Task – 1 – Diagram- 1

    Feedback: Need to work on specific feature & detailed information along with sentence types.
    Band: 2/3

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    June 7, 2021 at 3:04 PM in reply to: IELTS Academic Task – 1 – Diagram- 1

    Feedback: well executed, defined every information accordingly, a bit work required on specific feature of the diagram.
    Band: 2.5/3

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:38 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Feedback: Content is sufficient but execution again got failed, Really need to work on Sentence formation – (me & my family ‘Should be” My family & I) & also need to understand the use of “Having” as it should not be used in any condition with “Gerund Form”.
    Band: 1/3

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:34 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Feedback: Need to work on Introduction & required information as all thee bullet points were not approached accordingly.
    Band: 1/3

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:31 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Feedback: Approach is quite good, Found less use of Grammatical Range & also unnecessary Grammatical error –
    We’ll gonna have lot of fun – Incorrect
    We’ll have lot of fun-
    Band: 1/3

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Feedback: Very well executed & approached all three bullet points, Need to work on more complex sentences (Range).
    Band: 1.5/3

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:16 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Feedback: Introduction needs to be improved as the given information in the questing was not paraphrased accordingly in terms of sentence formation rest need to work on cohesive devises.
    Band: 3.5/6

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    June 7, 2021 at 10:07 AM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Feedback: Well attempt to approach every point required but execution got failed as Introduction needs to be improved along with rest of the cohesive devices & also work on sentence formation as per letter requirement, few grammatical errors were also found. Need rigorous practice on the format.
    Band: 1/3

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:25 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Approach is not as good as it should be through out the task & also A very limited range of structures with only rare use of subordinate clauses & unnecessary grammatical errors, less than 250 words are found & that too there is no relevant examples were found..
    Band: 1.5/6

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:20 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Really need to work on thought process & practice a lot to understand the pattern required in task 2, as found lot of errors.
    Band: 1.5/6

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:14 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: A very limited range of structures with only rare use of subordinate clauses & unnecessary grammatical errors, less than 250 words are found.
    Band: 1.5/6

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:11 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Need to work on relevant examples as found nothing & few ore complex (Grammatical Range) as well.
    Band: 2.5/6

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    June 7, 2021 at 12:06 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Lot of grammatical errors found & formation was also not there, need to work on “Grammatical accuracy, Sentence formation, & Unnecessarily Grammatical & errors”, Need to work on thought process a lot, the word limit should also not cross up to 280 words max.
    Band: 2/6

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    June 6, 2021 at 11:56 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Lot of errors in terms of formation and verb forms “Grammatical accuracy, Sentence formation, & Unnecessarily Grammatical & errors”, Need to work on thought process.
    Band: 2/6

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    June 6, 2021 at 10:02 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Really need to work on “Grammatical accuracy, Sentence formation, & Unnecessarily Grammatical & errors”.
    Band: 2.5/6

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    June 6, 2021 at 9:43 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: well tried but failed in execution, need to work on sentence types (Grammatical Range) as found very less instead compound and simple with relevant information.
    Band: 3/6

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    June 6, 2021 at 9:22 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Needs to work on unnecessary grammatical errors, sentence formation, linking words, & content along with the relevant example in general which was not found.
    Band: 3/6

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    June 6, 2021 at 8:57 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: contact could be more relevant as per question’s requirement with more linking words.
    Band: 4/6


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    June 6, 2021 at 8:29 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    Feedback: Introduction could be improved as the exact formation is copied instead paraphrasing, contact could be more relevant as per question’s requirement with more linking words.
    Band: 4/6

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    June 2, 2021 at 7:57 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Feedback: well attempt to approach the task, content should be more precise and cohesive & range of sentences could have been well utilised.
    Band: 2.5/6

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    June 2, 2021 at 7:53 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Feedback: Really need to work on introduction as it’s arduous to get the meaning out of it, rest grammatical accuracy didn’t work well.
    Band: 2/6

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    June 2, 2021 at 7:49 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Good going, need to improve grammatical accuracy, sentence formation & few more connectors (linking words) along with relevant example.
    Band: 3.5/6

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    June 2, 2021 at 7:45 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Need to work unnecessary grammatical & spelling errors & sentence formation.
    Band: 3/6

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    June 2, 2021 at 7:39 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Good attempt, but need to work on Introduction, cohesive devise & structure of sentences (Grammatical Range)
    Band: 3/6

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    June 2, 2021 at 7:37 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

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    May 31, 2021 at 6:07 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    Feedback: The answer has an appropriate introduction which the candidate has attempted to express in his own words. There is good coverage of the data and a brief reference to contrasting trends. The answer can be followed although it is rather repetitive and cohesive devices are overused. In order to gain a higher mark for content, Sentences are long but lack complexity. There are some errors in tense, verb
    form and spelling which interfere slightly with the flow of the answer.

    Band 6

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    June 2, 2021 at 6:45 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Feedback: Need to work on complex & cohesive devise bit more. Rest approach is good.
    Band: 1/3

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    June 2, 2021 at 6:39 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Feedback: Good use of linking words, well approached all bullet points, However, few sentence formation are found unstructured. Therefore, need to work on related words and execution of formation.

    Band: 1/3

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    June 2, 2021 at 6:33 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Feedback: Well attempt to approach every point required but execution got failed as Introduction needs to be improved along with rest of the cohesive devices & also work on sentence formation as per letter requirement.
    Band: 1/3

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    June 2, 2021 at 6:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -1

    Good work on information & execution of three bullet points.
    Feedback: Need to work on grammatical range and cohesive devise bit more.
    Band: 1.5/3

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