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    Shyam

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    August 5, 2021 at 2:42 PM in reply to: How to deal with Covid-19

    Epidemic came once in century undoubtedly, those countries who have handled them nicely with preventive ways are developed, on the other hand, who failed to deal are still struggling in health and wealth of their people. These days Covid-19 is main problem all over the world, it’s origin is Wuhan, China, it hits globally in January, 2019 and on a sudden many countries were indulged with Covid virus strain as it is mutating in different forms.

    Many people are thinking it is developed for biological war, whereas few thinks, it is only a hoax. So, my point is rather than wasting our time on origin of virus and purpose of spreading, we should deal with it together. In below paragraphs, I am explaining numerous options to handle Covid-19.

    Firstly, we all should follow world health organization guidelines because it is a specialized agency of the United Nations responsible for international public health. Coronavirus disease (COVID-19) is an infectious disease caused by a newly discovered coronavirus. WHO has shared some necessary steps to stop further spreading like use face masks, wash your hand till 20 seconds, use alcohol based hand sanitizer. Moreover, keep 6 feet distance with another person. Furthermore, avoid public gathering, hand shake and greet people with folded hands.

    Secondly, many scientists also suggest to eat healthy diet like food contains rich proteins, calcium and do some yoga and meditation, since it was observed, old people who were diabetic, heart patient, obesity and chronic diseases, had chance of more infection. Its symptoms are same as other flus have like cold, cough, fever with sore throat, so doctors also suggest if anyone feel such symptoms, they isolate themselves in separate room. However, some think it is not good to distinguish that person on the basic of mild symptoms.

    Even though some people don’t agree with scientist’s research, I think they did brilliant work in developing vaccine, suggesting preventive ways and how virus transmit. The virus can spread from an infected person’s mouth or nose in small liquid particles when they cough, sneeze, speak, sing or breathe, no evidence of food, water transmission. It can be killed at temperatures similar to that of other known viruses and bacteria killed in food.

    In conclusion, prevention is better than cure, if people will follow all preventive steps guided by their governments and doctors, we all together can defeat this Covid-19 virus.

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    July 29, 2021 at 7:21 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

    Many countries are facing numerous health problem, but obesity is main, which is mother of all diseases. In ancient times food was in scarcity, so obesity was associated with affluence. Now, in modern times, it is connected with lower socioeconomic status all over the world. There are many reasons for that, but the most valid one is processed foods, which are cheaper are not the healthy foods, nevertheless, it is incredibly popular. I shall suggest few ways in which the obesity epidemic can be mitigate.

    To start with, fast foods are beloved by all age group people in rich and poor countries, especially in developed countries it has huge popularities because high levels of development and more pay scale. People in these nations have preference of burger, french fries, soft drinks, pizza, hotdog and many others as well in all time meals, as these foods are ready to cook and eat.

    Despite of obesity issues, there are number of ways these countries can fight it more effectively. On the one hand, they can promote healthy foods like pulses, vegetables and fruits beside of junk food. In addition of this, they can increase tax and other charges of unhealthy snacks with lowering rates of healthy foods.

    Secondly, it can be managed with dietary education in school, collage and other institutes with merits and demerits

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      July 30, 2021 at 10:50 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (problem in many countries)

      Many countries are facing numerous health problems, since obesity is main, which is mother of all diseases. In ancient times food was in scarcity, so obesity was associated with affluent. Now, in modern times, it is connected with lower socioeconomic status all over the world. There are many reasons for that, but the most valid one is processed foods, which are cheaper are not the healthy foods, nevertheless, they are incredibly popular. I shall suggest few ways in which the obesity epidemic can be mitigate.

      To start with, fast foods are beloved by all age group people in rich and poor countries, especially in developed countries they have huge popularity since high levels of development. People in these nations have preference of burger, french fries, soft drinks, pizza, hotdog in all time meals, because of hectic lifestyle, moreover these foods are ready to cook and eat.

      Despite obesity issues, there are number of ways these countries can fight more effectively. On the one hand, they can promote healthy foods like pulses, vegetables and fruits beside of junk food. In addition of this, they can impose higher taxes and other charges on unhealthy snacks with lowering price of healthy foods, although it can be supervise easily with less effort, still people are not controlling.

      Secondly, it can be managed with dietary education in school, college and other institutes teaching merits and demerits, additionally by organizing seminars with lucid presentation. Other than this, government can take help from well-known personalities to promote healthy diet, yoga, walk and meditation, which will give sudden effect on their follower’s mind.

      In conclusion, it is clearly visible “health is wealth”, still people are rushing toward money in spite of health, thus this lifestyle adversely affecting them.

  • These days many people are attending speaking classes, whereas other are giving preference to grammar. Grammar plays vital role in personal and professional life. When a person use grammar in writing and speaking it usually make it lucid and provide the basic foundation also give confidence. Proper use of grammar and cohesive device make the structure with meaning of the sentence.

    • It is always debatable, that during schooling, grammar should be in curriculum or not. As people think if anyone knows vocabulary and able to pronounce those words, not necessary to understand grammar rules. These days many people are attending speaking classes, whereas others are giving preference to grammar. Grammar plays vital role in personal and professional life. When a person use grammar in writing and speaking it usually make it lucid and provide the basic foundation which also give confidence. Proper use of grammar and cohesive devices make the structure with proper meaning of the sentence.

      Grammar has wide range like noun, pronoun, adjective, tenses, active, passive and many others, when we use these grammar rules in our writing and speaking it shows variety. In addition, with better expression of words and thought process using simple, short even complex sentences, nevertheless, some people are not attempting these in daily routine.

      When it comes to speaking, people not pay much attention on grammar, but in writing it gives sudden impact on reader’s mind. People who did not learn grammar in school are not much confident in writing but they are good speaker. It does not mean being a good speaker, you do not need grammar. Since, they are following many grammar corrector applications in writing letters over email and documents as well. Many are learning grammar rules in spite, they do not have enough time.

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    July 25, 2021 at 10:07 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Feeling of competition)

    In these days, people are polishing children’s mind as competitive, whereas others are thinking, it should be cooperative. This habit is always debatable, which one will be fruitful for their overall, personal and professional growth.

    In my opinion, winning or passing attitude in any competition always give lucid presentation, but this tendency should be in positive thought as healthy competition brings supreme performance from all participants. However, much they can. In addition with this attitude, they give finest and innovative ideas. Furthermore, there are many other merits of being competitive, it enhance their toiled up ability to stand first in everywhere. It also inculcate their confidence. They are more likely to be self achievement and fulfillment with balanced and peaceful mind. Moreover sense of the completion is need of hour, since their childhood to adult. For example- competition in entrance exams, jobs, science and innovations give top-notch output keeping in aim as good yet to come.

    On the other hand, many think children should be cooperative rather than competitive, as with leading tendency and thought process, parents are nurturing them with selfness, loneliness even they are not teaching them basic edicate, which itself is hazardous to society. With this social nature they can teach them, how to be humble, polite, team-worker, tolerance even caring for their environment and surroundings as well. In today world, competition is everywhere even for new born babies, everyone seeing their children as future leader who will lead others. A person whose heart is full of jealous never can hold good for themselves, family members and others as well.

    <font face=”inherit”>In conclusion, both have their own values but parents should teach their children, how to be impartial in </font>competitive and cooperative, none should be overrated.

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    July 25, 2021 at 3:40 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (using computers)

    As today era is of technology, many children are fascinating more toward to console devices like desktop computer, laptop, tablet and many others to enhance their analytical, imagination and critical thinking skills, whereas it is nullified by many educational institutes. As long hours usage of these portable devices at early age will have negative impact on their mind. This essay will discuss merits and demerits of such device with example on young generation mind.

    Nowadays, students are addicted to electronic gadgets as it is used to run their online classes. While schools are appealing to run on computers and they are spending many hours, in addition students are learning coding in extra time as well, furthermore many of them have designed apps using AutoCAD, open sources software, and those students were bestowed by institutes. Although technologies are replacing human works in all the industries with dramatically changes. A student, who has knowledge of portable device has preference over the others. It has been observed that they have strong grasping power and are a quick learner, which makes them to learn and adapt to the changes swiftly. Many students are seeing themselves as future technical personalities like Bill Gate, Steve Jobs, Rob Warmolds and Jeff Bezos, who started computer in childhood and developed own platform, which is now accepted by all over the world to run their venture, these celebrities are setting an example for new comers. With early age device learning, they are becoming smart and, moreover, they are intelligent.

    On the other hand, overuse of such technological instruments and spending countless hours particularly for students may bring numerous problems such as neck pain, migraine, body’s posture, strain to brain and eyes as they emit radiations. It is observed that students who are spending more hours on screen are less social and having behavioral changes as well. Many parents don’t want their children to attend classes on screen. However, schools are closed for offline, as it’s uses are impacting their concentration and study even communication skills as well. Especially, they are giving priority to online classes, rather than walking to institutes, with this they are not exposed to outer world.

    In conclusion, comparing all above states, it is necessary to learn computer in early age to survive in the competitive society, but it should not overuse, as it tends many problems physically, mentally and socially.

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    July 7, 2021 at 7:51 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

    In recent times, pet ownership has become common, many children fond of spending time with their pet dogs and cats. Pet related injuries have heated debates whether it is healthy or not, as it may spread dangerous virus. In this essay I will explain both points with ideas that having a pet is beneficial or not.

    On one hand, having a domestic pet like dog, cat, rabbit, fish, cow and horse is beneficial for children, they usually care for their furry friends in many ways like grooming, feeding, therapies in case of illness even taking them to a walk. With all these young children learn about responsibilities for other animals and people as well by the time children become impartial and overwhelmed. It is found that those children are spending time with pet are delighted and magnanimous. Few studies show infect children living with pets have more immunity as compared to others.

    On the other hand, some children have toxic pets as – snake, spider and monkey, which itself is dangerous for them, they can hurt, sometimes they can kill them, in some cases little children can bit their pet, by this pet can hurt them. This causes a pet to become angry and attack young ones. Additionally, household pets may spread diseases like allergies and food poisoning because they carry dirt which contains various bacteria, pathogens and virus. However, a little bit of parental supervision is more than enough to take care of these problems. But it’s probability is very less so that it can be ignored, if domestic pets are not vaccinated from the virus which is in their mouth, the virus is mixture of cancer, other viruses and etc.

    In conclusion, pets have more positive and less negative impact on children, they become mentally and physically strong, I am assuming if some law for toxic pets imposed by government can help.

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      July 7, 2021 at 9:33 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 2 (Keeping pets is good)

      In recent times, pet ownership has become common, many children fond of spending time with their pet dogs and cats. Pet related injuries have heated debates whether it is healthy or not, as it may spread dangerous virus. In this essay I will explain both points with ideas that having a pet is beneficial or not.

      On one hand, having a domestic pet like dog, cat, rabbit, fish, cow and horse is beneficial for children, they usually care for their furry friends in many ways like grooming, feeding, therapies in case of illness even taking them to a walk. With all these young children learn about responsibilities for other animals and people as well by the time children become impartial and overwhelmed. It is found that those children are spending time with pet are delighted and magnanimous. Few studies show infect children living with pets have more immunity as compared to others.

      On the other hand, some children have toxic pets as – snake, spider and monkey, which itself is dangerous for them, they can hurt, sometimes they can kill them, in some cases little children can bit their pet, by this pet can hurt them. This causes a pet to become angry and attack young ones. Additionally, household pets may spread diseases like allergies and food poisoning because they carry dirt which contains various bacteria, pathogens and virus. However, a little bit of parental supervision is more than enough to take care of these problems. But it’s probability is very less so that it can be ignored, if domestic pets are not vaccinated from the virus which is in their mouth, the virus is mixture of cancer, other viruses and etc.

      In conclusion, pets have more positive and less negative impact on children, they become mentally and physically strong, I am assuming if some law for toxic pets imposed by government can help.

  • Sports have been best source of entertainment for the people all over the world. All countries want to organize international events like Commonwealth games, Olympics, the world cup of football, cricket or other sports as well. These occasions can assist to boost economy, culture understanding and religion of hosting country in a tiny period. In this essay I will explain both parts with meaningful instances.

    Firstly, when a country host such sporting events, it always stimulate economic growth and tourism of that nation as it attracts crowds from other countries. When such events occur the world media also gathered on a platform, which also helpful to promote gesture of organizing country. That hosting nation is also funded by world bank to improve infrastructure. For example – Many years back Commonwealth games were held by India. We gave a strong message to world that we were also capable for successful managing such events. During the Commonwealth games in Delhi, game village layout was designed and developed with the support of top-notch designer, now with proper fair, economic management they are using domestic players.

    Secondly, the hosting nation has the opportunity to showcase their culture and tradition to impress the foreign nations and this will attract even more tourists in future. Like – Indian Premier League is best example, many foreign players are participating in cricket games. They are learning more about our tradition, culture and festivals. Recent tweets and messages by them on Diwali on social sites are amazing example of understanding and appreciation.

    In summarize, it is acceptable to welcome such event for country growth and reputation on world level. But few people thinks in-spite of hosting global games, government should focus on developing infrastructure for people, educate them because in these events media presents destructive image of that country, which itself is huge loss for developing countries.

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    June 23, 2021 at 9:13 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Teenagers and Crime)

    Now-days all countries are encountering problems of crimes by teenagers other than in past years. Teenagers crime ratio are increasing rapidly in modern life style. It is tremendously stressful as teenage is wonderful time of life where they should busy in building a career and secure future. There are many reasons for increasing crime ratio in teenagers. In this essay, some reason for problem and with solution will be discussed.

    Teenager’s crime is not country specific. It is all over the world. It does not matter country is developed or developing. Crime rate is only observed in countries where healthy families does not exists. Children coming from functional family are less likely to get involved in crime. They have fear of authority will naturally deter from indulging in this sort of activities. Families are single main cause of these delinquencies. Children became problems for societies with higher rate of divorce. In these cases children came to one parent, single mom or dad. The chronic absence of single parent have all huge emotionally stress on them. Other is higher living standard with out financial support. Teenagers are becoming fond of precious items as mobile, watch, branded clothes even motorbikes as well. Some of them are going to club with paying steep cost. To full-fill their desire and maintain status they commit crime by robbery, drug supplier and others as well. Another main reason is glorification of violence in films and electronic media. All of these can influence the impressionable mind of a teenager. They might even arrive at the conclusion that it is fashionable to be a criminal.

    To tackle these issues, parents can play vital role for them and societies. As they are main responsible. They should avoid family breakdown at any cost being a role model. They should mentor their children specially in adult with kindness and love. Parents should have a healthy environment to their child in all ages. They should closely monitor their children activities in school or playing ground as well. When children is busy with his studies and extra-curricular activities he is unlikely to have the time to nurture criminal tendencies. Even government can play some impact with enforcing strict law on crime with more youth centers and good job opportunity. There are many other ways to overcome teenage age crime on other hand too. If these action are taken now, situation should be prevented from deteriorating further.

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    June 23, 2021 at 8:27 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing (Teenagers and Crime)

    Now-days all most all countries are encountering crimes by teenagers other than any in past years. Teenagers crime ratio are increasing rapidly in modern life style. It is tremendously stressful as teenage is wonderful time of life where they should busy in building a career and secure future. There are many reasons for increasing crime ratio in teenagers. In this essay, some reason for problem and with solution will be discussed.

    Teenager’s crime is not country specific. It is all over the world. It does not matter country is developed or developing. Crime rate is only observed in countries where healthy families does not exists. Children coming from functional family are less likely to get involved in crime. They have fear of authority will naturally deter from indulging in this sort of activities. Families are single main cause of these delinquencies. Children became problems for societies with higher rate of divorce. In these cases children came to one parent, single mom or dad. The chronic absence of single parent have all huge emotionally stress on them. Other is higher living standard with out financial support. Teenagers are becoming fond of precious items as mobile, watch, branded clothes even motorbikes as well. Some of them are going to club with paying steep cost. To full-fill their desire and maintain status they commit crime by robbery, drug supplier and others as well. Another main reason is glorification of violence in films and electronic media. All of these can influence the impressionable mind of a teenager. They might even arrive at the conclusion that it is fashionable to be a criminal.

    To tackle these issues, parents can play vital role for them and societies. As they are main responsible. They should avoid family breakdown at any cost being a role model. They should mentor their children specially in adult with kindness and love. Parents should have a healthy environment to their child in all ages. They should closely monitor their children activities in school or playing ground as well. When children is busy with his studies and extra-curricular activities he is unlikely to have the time to nurture criminal tendencies. Even government can play some impact with enforcing strict law on crime with more youth centers and good job opportunity. There are many other ways to overcome teenage age crime on other hand too. If these action are taken now, situation should be prevented from deteriorating further.

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    June 21, 2021 at 6:48 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    Activity and games are immunity booster for children. Both outdoor activity and computer games have their advantages and disadvantages. But from my point outdoor is more strengthening and fruitful in spite of computer games. Below I will explain my thought.

    As modern era is of technology and children are bending more toward games like free fire, puzzles and word match dictionary and many others. No doubt, games on the gadgets are enhancing their IQ also making them aggressive as well, which itself is dangerous. But parents can keep eyes on them at home.

    On other side outdoor activity has numerous advantages. Children and adult who play outdoor games like cricket, soccer, badminton, basketball teach them teamwork with coordination, swimming, lawn tennis and chess are individual and strengthen their concentration. Children who plays any games have better fitness as compare to those are not part of any physical activities. With outdoor games they are disciplined, learn teamwork, punctuality, no laziness(prompt in action), socially active as well. Outdoor activity provide them good environment, fresh air and also maintain good health. But children safety, harassment and kidnapping are main concern in outdoor activities.

    At end, outdoor activities are more fruitful to make them strong mentally and physically. Rather than spending time on games on computer we must motivate new generation for outdoor games.

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      June 23, 2021 at 6:11 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

      These days many children are glued to their computer and cellphone. It is not a positive development because when they spend many hours of whole day playing games on computer, tablet or gaming console, they will develop many health problem even may develop behavioral changes. In my view, it is more beneficial for children to spend time in outdoor activity or games rather than gadgets.

      Outdoor games are good for children. They make them strong and fitter. Children who play games are healthier. They are also less likely to involve in anti-social activities. Outdoor games need more individual performance and team as well. When children play games like cricket, soccer, basketball learn social and management skills as how to work as a part of team. When they play lawn tennis, badminton, chess and swimming improve itself with eye, hand with mind coordination. All indoor and outdoor games always works as a immunity booster. It also has less drawback with fear in parent mind about children safety from kidnapping, injuries and harassment.

      On the other side, children who spend the whole time indoors will most probably spend overwhelming hours in front of the TV, mobile device or computer. It may lead to several health problems like eye-sight, anger, aggressive, obesity and diabetes. These children may also find it difficult to interact with others. Also, Internet has many unexpected inappropriate material, when they spend a lot of time on their computer, they are more likely to be exposed. All of these factors can have an adverse impact on their physical and psychological well-being. But today era is of technology so it is also fruitful for them to learn about computer.

      To summarize, it is not hard to see that there are several benefits to engaging in outdoor activities. Parents should not allow children to waste their whole time on electronic devices like computer, tablet, mobile and kindle. Parents should motivate their children for outdoor games and less on technology over computer as well.

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    June 17, 2021 at 7:42 PM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

    Dear Sir/Madam

    I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my watch when I went to Shimla trip with my family to celebrate Christmas and New year. Luckily I renewed its insurance before heading to trip.

    I have lost my digital watch of Apple brand with series 6. It has GPS and cellular enabled. It’s diameter is 44mm along with long blue strap. It was gifted by my wife on 10th anniversary. It has some health along with office related folders and applications. It also has some personal details like photo, activity records.

    As I remember I had dinner over there in a top-notch restaurant’s terrace but that time it was with me. I left to my hotel and on the way their was rukus and that road was fully packed. It might be I have lost it there.

    As I was precious to me and new in brand and it was covered in travel insurance and personal accidental and damage insurance with your company only. For your reference I am attaching police complain report and invoice, insurance copy along filling claim form.

    I am looking forward to receive full amount.

    Thanks

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    June 17, 2021 at 7:21 PM in reply to: Prevention is better than cure-Opinion Essay Question

    Before this pandemic developing countries government leaned toward to defence. But these days every country has increased financial budget of health and education system. Now governemnts also know if they educate their people how prevention is fruitful than cure. In below para I will elaborate more about disease outbreak, road and machinery safety.

    Few years back, only few seminars were conducted by authorities about road safety like wear helmets on two wheeler, drive a car in own lane, follow signpost and use zebra crossing and it worked in tremendous way.

    It is truthfulness that people who did some preventive measure in this pandemic like maintaining social distance, used alcohol based sanitizers, not doing gathering and wearing a mask were safe and restraint this disease and other side who show frown not take prevention pay a huge loss physically and financially like paid large amount in hospital and were bankrupt.

    Although some people argue that it is totally waste of money, time and overload on budget, so rather than doing these should construct hospitals. People will not understand these preventive methods as these are long-term beneficiary.

    So in conclusion, small preventive steps can help us from big problem. And government should focus on small seminars, advertising, hording with showing affect of diseases as they did on tobacco, H1N1, cancer and smoking with displaying image or lung, mouth. These give sudden impact on people mind.

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    June 10, 2021 at 9:44 PM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Dear Norman,

    I hope everything is hunky-dory at your end. Since it is very long time we are connected in-person. As you aware I am completing 10 golden years of marriage anniversary. So on this occasion I have a get-together party in Milan hall which is near to my residence. And I have invited some bosom buddy. With this we all will meet and recall our past quality time we spend jointly.

    If you are planning to reach there by public transport, I would suggest metro will be approachable, as this venue is clearly visible and very close to last metro station of blue line in north direction. And your personal vehicle will be more flexible and suitable as you can come to my home and I will guide you further.

    And one another point do not worry about accommodation, the party hall is very spacious and we already booked guest room over there. As other our mate also staying for few days. As they planned for sight seen, water park and visit for zoo as well.

    I am eagerly waiting for you.

    See you soon.

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    June 8, 2021 at 9:58 PM in reply to: Essay Writing – 8 (Freedom)

    In modern history, people have more freedom to relocate to another country for their work. Now days many foreign companies are inviting talented people to shoulder them. It is becoming more feasible with use of technology and transportation.

    A good illustration of this is communication technology, people are selected over the call it might video or audio. But with few applications like – skype, Microsoft team, zoom, g-talk and what’s app business account. Recruiter’s are opting video call. Even though people are happy to relocate in another country as they have opportunity to explore new culture, environment, tradition, languages even education system. It is fruitful with financial aspect.

    But it also have some drawback they usually get disconnected from family, friends and relatives in sweet and sour time. They have only one option which is video call.

    Is it good not to be with them. No doubt it is bad but for few it is good as they can help them financially in tough time.

    As people are showing more interest toward middle east countries and accepting their living methodology. In my final view it has disadvantage as people are disconnected with local trend it can be spiritual, religious and culture as well.

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    June 7, 2021 at 9:37 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    In many countries crime ration are increasing day by day rather than going down. All countries want to be crime free and adopting different -different way to control and to be crime free. Many of them have strict punishment all depends on crime – like putting prisoner in bar for long duration it could be till last breath or for few years or in some crime hang till death.

    In my opinion crime is crime whatever it is, to control all countries should categorized crimes. If it related to women, child harassments and few others like murder. All these type of crime should be in life time behind the bar or hang them for example as we know gulp countries have strict punishment for crime so crime ration is very low there. People are thinking twice or many times before committing such activity.

    As now we are in technical world crime also changed, same way we can also control it and currently many countries are using it. Like increasing patrolling of security personal, installing CCTV cameras. One of best option could be we should tell our young generation and kids about crime and what should do or not. We can do it in another way by counselling them.

    We are noticing some youngster want to rich in short while and they are commiting crime. For them government should organize some counselling and seminar.

    I am sharing one incident one of my friend lost his mobile when he was going to his office in evening shift, some one found that and misused like made many calls to threat and asked for money and same time my friend made a police complain. It became very difficult find out that person. And finally with the help of technology police trace the device location and catch him and put behind the bar.

    As we have top-notch technology and it can play a vital role to control crime. Even small social activity, theater show, some moral education and our old age people can help us to make better society mainly crime free.

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    June 18, 2021 at 1:04 PM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

    So it mean, only need to write 3 paragraph.

    1st about topic intro like concern

    2nd – issue/discussion/ description

    3- final suggestion/ solution/ any feedback type

    Am I understanding it correctly?

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