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    Aanchal

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    May 10, 2022 at 5:10 PM in reply to: Task 2 (Education)

    There are two opinion regarding goal of educations, some view that it should be used for the growth of society while others believe that education is primarily for fulfilling their dreams. From my viewpoint, it should used for uplifting our country and by working for people. This essay will discuss that both view points rationally and provide logically conclusion.

    There are people who strongly believe that academic teachings should be used for the betterment of people around us. Learning about moral values and ways of improving life of people, these ideas are the primary stepping stone of education. Firstly, lessons of spirituality, empathy, honesty taught during schools or colleges, make an adult valuable for future as it makes society a emotionally a better place. Secondly, it teaches humankind how they can make earth a better place to live by being mindful about consumption of plastics, maintaining proper hygiene, optimum use of resources etc. In order words, mentally strong and self-aware people make a better lives for others as they know importance of living in healthy environment, thus, all this is achievable by education.

    Others believe that qualification and degree are meant for acquiring our goals. It’s makes individual independent and lead a prosperous life is the only desire of humans . Education is emphasized upon children because it allows them make their own money without being dependent on government or parents. If they have a strong financial base then only they can think about other areas there life such as relationships, shelter, materialistic needs etc. For instance, Abraham theory of needs says if primary goals like food, money, clothes are fulfilled then only they will think about relationships, owning a house etc. That’s why education is path which leads to fulfills our desires.

    In nutshell, there are two set population one has a opinion that education is meant to live for others and others feel that its used to achieve our own ambitions. If we are born in society then it’s our duty to contribute to people, this is cost which everyone should pay and education is tool which allow it to happen.

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    Aanchal

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    May 4, 2022 at 6:14 PM in reply to: Essay 3

    The cases of obesity are increasing globally among teenagers, but some people believe its government duties and others believe its parents who are responsible for it. In my opinion, both of them are equally responsible for it. In this essay, there will be a logical explanation of both views along with a conclusion.

    Government plays a major role in regulating the health of their youth. They should take measures such as putting unhealthy food on high taxes and introduce exercise compulsory during their school. By increasing the tax on junk food there price also rise as a result they become expensive and unaffordable. In other words, children can’t regularly spend their money on fatty foods or drinks. Also, including physical activity when they are in premises of institute they engage in exercise and learn ways to work upon their health. For instance, half an hour of physical activity during there assembly daily can be good action taken for their students and it is improving there health out of compulsion.

    Caretaker should also be held accountable for deceasing fitness of their children. They should educate there offspring and engage them is some form of physical activity. Teenagers are spending there most of their time guardians, it’s parents responsibility to teach them about importance of nutrition, portion size and how unhealthy eating pattern and lifestyle are affecting there physical and mental health. Parents have major role in the shaping the lives of there little ones, hence, they should use this role wisely by involving them in exercise. In order words, they should instill necessity of workout for leading long and disease free life.

    In conclusion, some people stand with the viewpoint that government is held answerable for deteriorating for there youth obesity, others hold guardians responsible for it. Both parties contribute to poor health to growing children, they should do effort from there end to make future generation fit and active.

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    Aanchal

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    April 29, 2022 at 7:36 PM in reply to: Letter 2

    Dear sir/madam,

    After having seen your article in your travel magazine last weekend which wrote about various places to visit in Kurali and entry fee. I saw some error in the provided information.

    You mentioned in the article about Rose garden that carnival is held twice a year and there is also entry fee for visiting that place. However, carnival is held once a year and entry is fee for all the visitors.

    Thus, I would request you rectify the mistakes as it will affect the tourists because it will disappoint them and they won’t able to see the carnival for which they have arrived. Also, money they spent on trip will be wasted. Above all these mistakes it will hamper the goodwill of our country and state.

    I would request to make up for the mistake which you have done. A fresh article should be published stating error committed and mention all the correct information. So that the trust of audience stays intact.

    If you require any information, feel free to contact me.

    Your sincerely

    Aanchal

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    Aanchal

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    April 27, 2022 at 7:03 PM in reply to: Essay:Positive or Negative development

    These days supermarkets selling all those items which are majority of time imported from other nations rather supporting local sellers. Pricing and resources can be one of the few reasons for buying products from overseas. This essay will provide logical reasons and negative development of such activity and how it will affect our growing economy.

    There are many reasons why walmarts are providing variety of products to customers because buying products from outside countries has become economical and they are providing those products which cant be produced in their own homeland. Firstly price plays an important role when it comes to imports, sellers will purchase those commodities which can be bought at low rates. In other words, businessman will sell those goods which have a profit margin as buying products at cheap prices can be sold at high prices. Secondly when goods are bought from overseas lack of resources is also one of the major reasons. For instance, sometimes there isn’t enough capital, equipment, land, or climatic conditions which are required to produce those items as a result sellers have to buy from other countries. Blueberries, avocado, raspberries are commonly imported items.

    As a result selling commodities from other countries affects the economy of the country and affects local producers. In school, we have read about export and import. When the country’s trading is dependent on imports it shows the major portion of money is spent in other countries which to employment and development in those countries. Furthermore, it hampers the growth of local businessmen or producers.

    In conclusion, the rise in imports has given consumers the opportunity to have a variety of items but has affected the economy of their own homeland. Thus, serious actions should be taken by the government by increasing taxes on imports and providing subsidies to local producers.

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    Aanchal

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    April 22, 2022 at 7:56 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 (Competition vs Cooperation)

    There are people who believe a growing children should have a sense of competition, others believe teaching children cooperation is more important as it allows them to function well in their life. In my opinion, I believe children should focus on cooperation so that they serve society. In this essay I will provide Both the view points and logical conclusion.

    People emphasising on competition because they see it as a source of upgradation of knowledge and growth. As When an individual is Competing against the other person, they work on their weakness and analyse the strengths of competitor. For instance, in competition people develop skills which they couldn’t developed when they had no competition.

    However, other view that cooperation is key to peace of mind and self-awareness. When a child learns to work in teams, all of them grow together. Also, there is no mental stress. For example, studies have shown those who are working with people are emotionally intelligent as result they contribute to uplift society.

    In conclusion, people keep on working themselves in competition, whereas, those who cooperate lead a more peaceful life. However, mental health should be top priority and same should be taught to children so that they lead healthy life.

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    Aanchal

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    April 19, 2022 at 6:49 PM in reply to: IELTS TASK 1, Letter writing

    Dear Mr. Mehta,

    I’m Anjali from house no 21 from 2nd floor, I’m writing to complaint about my neighbour Mr. Bansal (house no- 22) as he is disturbing people on 2nd floor.

    You know that how hectic our lives and nights are the only time when we can relax and rejuvenate . However, Mr Bansal’s few habits are annoying to all those who are living on 2nd floor. From past 10-15 days he has been listening to music on a high volume which is abrupting our sleep. Even after expressing our anger and stress he is causing us, he still hasn’t rectified his actions

    His antics has left us sleep deprived as a result we are cranky and unable to concentrate at work.

    Hence, I would request you take action immediately. I would suggest to hold a meeting stating there should be no late parties, no loud music or anything which will disturb the sleep of people. If somebody doesn’t adhere to these rules then fine shall be imposed on them.

    I am looking forward to hear from you.

    Yours faithfully

    Xyz

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    Aanchal

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    March 30, 2022 at 7:43 PM in reply to: Task 2 (Is it a positive or negative development): Shopping

    Shopping has become a source of entertainment for people all over the globe. It has originated since the rise of youtube. There are many people who find shopping to be thrilling and therapeutic whereas others find it wastage of money. In my opinion, shopping should be done mindfully and there should be balance between pleasure and budget.

    On one hand, there are certain set of people who buy items or objects entirely for a sense of joy and to please themselves. Buying commodities of any kind releases endorphins which are, happy hormones in them. It’s said that nowadays lot of people are buying to release their stress as a result it improves their mental health for a time being. Ever since the rise of online shopping and youtube lot individuals are buying for experimental purposes, for instance, designing their room, styling their clothes etc, all these activities has become their hobby or means of entertainment.

    On the other hand, there are people who consider shopping as hoarding or waste of money. This set of population strongly believe buying those products which aren’t required are wants than needs. They buy items out of impulsivity or temporary happiness. For example, during stressful situations to avoid pain or grief we find ways to overcome them as a result buying or shopping becomes their source of escape.

    In conclusion, doing shopping for their source of entertainment or to feel good is great but to some extent. It shouldn’t reach to a point where you are buying mindlessly.

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    Aanchal

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    March 30, 2022 at 2:34 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 (both views) : Packaging

    There is a conflict between two sets of people regarding who is responsible for excessive use of packing in products, they are sellers and manufacturers versus customers. Manufacturers and sellers are creators and consumers buy products eventually which are available to them whereas consumers are the one who influences the supply of products. In my view, both parties bears equal responsibilities. If unnecessary packing isn’t produce it will not be wasted and consumed and if consumer take a conscious decision of not buying those products which involve a lot packing then producer willn’t use lot of packing for there product.

    On one hand, sellers and producers are considered accountable for reducing the amount of packing required for selling commodities. Manufactures are the one who are making packing material from scratch, if the material isn’t made than there is no wastage as well. For instance, if goods are sold with the least packing in the market than consumers are left with no option but to buy them. Consequently, it will be beneficial for the environment.

    On other hand, consumers are held responsible for buying goods which has a lot of packing. Nowdays, people love all those fancy or extravagant packagings which makes products more desirable. Excessive packing are considered trendy and worthful, as it leaves an impression that the product is of high quality. Consumers are buying without putting much thought as to how these are impacting the environment. Consumers should realize that they are one’s for whom goods are made. If they would buy products mindfully then manufacturers will manufacture goods with least packing.

    In conclusion, sellers and consumers have a positive relationship, if demand increases then supply increaseS and if demand decreases then supply decreases. Both of them are wheels of a cycle who can together go long way and missing of one the wheel would disrupt their functioning.

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    Aanchal

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    March 30, 2022 at 1:01 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 (both views) : Packaging

    The supermarket and manufacturers versus customers who are responsible for excessive consumption of packing. Manufactures and sellers produce goads as customer demand, whereas consumers buy product which are available to them. In my view, both parties bears equal responsibilities. If unnecessary packing isn’t produce it will not be wasted and consumed and if consumer take conscious decision of not buying those products which has lot packing then producer willn’t manufacture lot of packing.

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