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The line graph represent burglary of motor vehicles that took place in Great Britian, Sweden, France and Canada over the past 10 years. Overall, it is noticed that Great Britain have highest robbery per 1000 vehicles between 1990-1991.
To begin with, in 1990 Sweden, France and Canada had indicated the numbers of theft per 1000 car were between 5 to 10, while in 1991 Sweden had zero cases whereas France and Canada pointed 5700 and 5500 cases of robberies. Although in 1992, Sweden had experienced a constant numbers of burglary cases, while France and Canada figures slightly dropped down by a small fractions. It was viewed in the period 1993 and 1994, the figures was consistent but in 1995 the robbery cases in Sweden, France and Canada raised slightly.
Sweden touched approximately 13000 cases in 1996, whereas France and Canada registered cases shrinked about 5500 and 5200 respectively.Since, year 1997 to 1999, Sweden surpassed the robbery cases rate. However, Sweden outraced France and Canada by reflecting more than three time cases . France on other hand, plummeted from 5700 to just 5200 cases.
In the end, Great Britain registered excessively high theft cases in 1992 and 1996 as compared with other three nations. Great Britain in 1993 and 1999, experience a dipped in robbery of cars, while in 1999 Sweden climbed approximately 14 per 1000 cases.
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The diagram represents sea water treatment plant that undergo various process starting from screening the water at an early point and on other hand transporting the treated water to different users.
To begin with, sea water first undergo the process of intake screen, while this process helps to avoid damage to aquatic life. Moving further, the same water is passed through big pump and reached flash mix for further mixing with other elements like polyluminum chloride oxidants. After this process, water passed through flocculation chamber and simultaneously, passed to settling Basin. According to the diagram, water stopped for some time in the settled tank so that water and other particles get separated, thus this process is a time consuming process in the whole plant. Eventually, the filtered water pass through the pump for further mixing with chlorine and through long pipe it reached filter membrance where water collected and passed through disinfection process which is the final stage for water treatment, while in the disinfection box, chlorine, lime or ( sodium hydroxide)and fluoride are mixed together to protect the water from unseen infections. At the end, the purified water supplied to faucet in various households.
Overall, the diagram depicts the stages of water treatment from intake screening in the beginning and purifying water in the end.
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The global media has become a growing segment across global because of its demand and influence among society. However, there are majority of people who are interested in reading local news because they might think it is different to digest, is that so? This essay will consider both points and then present an opinion.
To begin with, citizens are keen to listen upcoming news and events that are happening within the country to get a glimpse about the situation in nearby areas and enhance their horizon for taking business, investment, political decision. For instance, if a person wants to invest his income in public funds, he can create a good opportunity by investing in valuable companies which he had read before. Similarly, in the Covid-19 pandemic where people are not allowed to move out, media has played a critical role in communicating the case updates and state-wise new policy implementation to general public.
However, reading and listening international news had changed the prospective as it explained about a country crises, environmental impact and cultural diversity across the globe. For example, after Afghanistan conquered by terrorist group, other nations have tightened its security force to protect their nationality. However, on other hand international news sometime creates awareness about environment issues that has impacted different countries. For instance, first time in the history Canada and its nearby nations experience heat wave that had indicated the signal of global warming in upcoming years. This news has led new initiatives and allows people to think about their society.
In conclusion, news is a vital mode of broadcasting information and creating awareness among society. In my opinion, acknowledging international news could expand your knowledge bank and would help to understand the new trends with is moving at an accelerated pace.
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The pie chart illustrates a higher degree education finished by Canadian students in the aged groups 25 and 35 (as described in chart 1) and 45 and 55 (as shown in chart 2). Looking from an overall perspective, social science and arts had dominated the education sectors by qualifying the degree programs in both the age group.
Firstly, in the age group 25 and 30, it is readily apparent that social science and art had covered almost a quarter of student who holds a higher education degree in Canada, whereas, administration, science, maths, and computer students hold with 19% and 18% of degree respectively. However, Nursing, humanity, MBA, and other fields totally contributed 18% of degree holders with was a tiny fraction among others groups. Subsequently, engineering had about 9% degrees students and on the other hand, education field holds 15% degree in post-school qualification.
Secondly, in the age group 45 and 55, it was interested to note that social science,art, and administration nearly had one-third of degree holder students in Canada. Similarly, Engineering, Science, maths, computers, and education also hold nearly one third of students in higher education. However, Humanities and nursing was 5% and 11% whereas, MBA and others were at 3% and 3% in finishing a degree program.
It is crystal clear that students who had completed higher education were more in 25 and 30 age group (515,600) with comparison to students in aged group 45 and 55 (213,400). The chart also observed that science, maths, and computers had increased 18% student, whereas, in aged group 45 and 55 the percentage were 10% which was lower in another chart.
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The pie chart represents monetary spending of expenditures and receiving revenue from different sources of children’s charity in USA for the year 2016. Looking from an overall perspective, offering from eatable items and program services had incurred the maximum charitable money in revenue and expenditures within one year.
Firstly, community had contributed a small majority of amount i.e. 10.4% whereas investment income, government grants, and other income covered 0.8% which identified as a tiny fraction of donations. However, Programs brought 2.2% of revenue in 2016 respectively. Secondly, program services had spent 95.8% of his charitable income, while fundraising, management and general payed 2.6% and 1.6% from the total amount.
It is crystal clear that the expenditures were segregated
in three parameters with spending of total 53.22 million dollars, whereas revenue
on other hand was collected from six different sources amounting to 53.56
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The line graph represents leisure time spend by older people in reading, hiking, theatre, watching Tv, and surfing the internet in the United states for the last 30 years.
Overall, the graph depicts fluctuation at the beginning of the period but at the end, the figure fell between 45-60%. However, watching TV was among the most favourite way of time-pass through the tenure.
In the early stage, surfing the internet was not popular amount groups with only 5% of people were using the platform but subsequently, in 1990s and till 2010s it had shown a steadily increased with half of the audience attraction. Moreover, reading on other hand went through a huge fluctuation with 30% initially and closed at 60% which was almost double over the period.
In addition, hiking was the only activity which had indicated a tremendous jumped started with 20% in the beginning and attract the majority of elder people in 2010s. Furthermore, theatre marked 50% in 1980s and dropped down at 30% in 1990s and again maintained steady growth in the remaining years. Watching TV was a highly viewed activity in 1980s and 2000s but it had plummed down in 2010s.
The charts depict a crystal clear image of hiking being the most lovable activity in 2010s compared with other activities.-
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The bar chart illustrates number of females enrolled in comparison with males students in primary, secondary and tertiary education for developed and developing nations between 1990 and 1998 respectively.
Overall, it is clearly observed that developed countries had outraced developing nations in all the educational sectors. Furthermore, higher education had excelled in girls admission in developed countries by achieving the target margins.
Firstly in 1990, developing counties indicated a raised of 83 females in primary education whereas other two sectors had shown a dropped in numbers with small majority. Subsequently, in developed territory the figure was 95 and 98 in primary and secondary but in tertiary it was noticed a slightly increase in number of girls per 100 boys.
Secondly, in 1998, tertiary had climbed the target with 112 students more than men ratio in developed countries but on the other hand developing countries had plummeted by nearly one third. In primary and secondary education the numbers were at 87 and 82 in developing nations and 96 and 99 in developed nation.
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The chart provides information about distance travel by an individual per week on different modes of transportation in the UK from 1990 and 2000.
Overall, it has noticed an increase in figure had shown a drastic change over a period, hence as a result bus and rail outraced bicycle, motorbike and air in covering interval by person per week. The chart clearly shows that there is huge demand of public transport in 1990 and 2000 respectively.
According to the graph the two leaders has captured the majority of share approximately by 40 km and 35km in 1990 and about 42km and 38km in 2000 respectively. Bicycle has touched 5km and motorbike gradually shown an increase by 7 km in 1990 whereas on the other side, air has reached its low point at 2 km in 1991 compared to other mode of transport.
Secondly, Bicycle dipped down by 2 km in the year 2000 and Motorbike and air rose by 7 km and 10 km over the period. Well bus has few like rocket in 2000 by 42 km and reached its highest point leaving rail behind by just tiny fraction.
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In recent years, excessive production of waste such as domestic, Electronic, sewage, agriculture, biodegradable, clinical, and construction wastes have detrimental our environment. Further, these changes nor only impacted the society but also created trouble for species living in water and land.
Nowadays, waste management has become a critical issue across globe, due to which it has led the society and government to think about repercussion. In my opinion, accelerating population in the nation has triggered increase in rubbish. Today, the world has 8 billion population which generation massive tones of waste every year which is dumped in nearby landfill. For instances, India which is second largest country in producing wastes because of population growth. Hence, the waste is collected in landfill and only 20% waste is recycled in the station and rest 80% dump in the landfill areas.
Undoubtedly, Government is playing a vital role in eradication the critical issue by implemented new strategy and plans. For example, Sweden is the only country in Europe which has launched zero waste policy by municipal corporation to resolve the crucial worriment of the people. Government has introduced latest technology and sophisticated techniques for waste collection and depletion across cities and approximately 90% of waste is recycle in the dump fields. Eventually, citizens of Sweden are also knowledgeable about waste segregation, therefore, their support has increased the speed for implementing the policies and plans.
In conclusion, rubbish management system is pivotal for the atmosphere, hence working together as a team can drastically bring the change to make our ecosystem friendly and safe place to live.
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In the fastest growing economy people are running to fetch their goals and utilizing the technology in the most effective way due to this it has increased the ratio of unhealthy lifestyle. People are not spending time toward themselves, hence increases the problem of anxiety, stress, overweight, joint pain, and cardiovascular diseases.
Nowadays, obesity is one of the biggest epidemic disease in rich countries which has led tremendously health problem among people due to which they are undergoing for medical treatment. According to the reports, around 70% individuals are facing overweight disorder by overeating or long sitting hours work which has encouraged an inactive lifestyle globally. Majority of people are addicted to comfortable lifestyle such as excessive usage of cars for short travel whereas it has impacted their daily lifestyle.
In order to overcome this problem, few initiatives have been taken by private fitness organisation to revolutionize the fitness industry, in fact the approached has generated a good source of income for new ventures. However, countries like Australia, Europe, USA and presently India are adopting the fitness change and implement in their society to broaden the mindset of individuals. Furthermore, in my opinion people can also move forward and avoid using cars for short duration and shift themselves toward walking or cycling. Undoubtedly, this method will help them to start a holistic life.
To summarise, it is important to follow an active lifestyle by bringing change in our daily habit, thus will support to overcome the problem of overweight.
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In this competitive world, everyone has put their toes on work to achieve something great in life. Some believe, encouraging the competition among children will develop them overall. While other believe, leaning and working together which enhancing their capability and social skill. In my opinion, competitive is vital part of our life to attain our goal and would be beneficial if started at the initial age.
Firstly, children should educate competition as it will helps them to fight battle in life or career. Healthy Competition would develop their thoughts and motivates them to bring out best from their performance. For instance, Football player “Cristiano Ronaldo” who started his journey from small town in the Europe and achieved success just by facing competition and leaning from his mistake. Competition mindset will bring self-dependent in individuals and established an innovative mind over the period.
Furthermore, there are few disadvantages of an active competition. Young children undergo stress and anxiety at early stage because of immense education pressure, due to which they become non socialize and introvert human being. For example, selection in the prestigious colleges have overburden the children for sustainable life in future, however, this myth and parental pressure has affected children’s life and health.
In the conclusion, I would say competition is good as it helps you to face the world. Moreover, every child has different approach and objective in life. Competition should be inbuilt in children but in a creating way, so that they can love and enjoy the path.
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Nowadays, Criminal offence is a major issue across the globe. Although, people believe punishing criminals for a long duration will decrease the offence. However, others believe skill training and earning will enhance their efficiency and responsibility for the family, also (will) improve their social image. This essay will explain both aspects in detail with an enclosed conclusion.
To begin with, researchers have found most of the prisoners are recaptured because of regular crime, due to which they stay long in prisons. In some countries, long term imprisonment punishment, frightened (Frighten) the criminal because of strict rules and regulations. For example, UAE, a famous country for managing the crime ratio believe in clear justice. As a result, a person has committed (commits) a crime, he/she should be in prison for lifetime or killed by the police officers depending upon the crime.
On the other hand, European countries where criminal rules are imposed differently. For example, installing an ankle monitoring system for prisoners. This will allow (allows) them to work freely and the wrong movement subsequently, sends a radio frequency signal to police for further action. This feature has declined the crime rate because criminals are imposed to work hard and learn new skills. Countries like India, China, and Africa where crime ratio is higher, hence government (is) are training prisoners in (to) developing (develop) skill and earn livelihood for families. Work like cleaning, computer knowledge, electrician, plumbing, cooking food, cutting wood, and handmade utensils manufacturing are done in jail to earn a basic income.
In conclusion, the government should implement strict policy along with a work plan to reduce crime all over the world.
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In recent years, adolescents are exposed to computer especially at an early age. Further, child researchers claim it is good for their mental development but subsequently decreases their social and physical development. This essay will examined the advantages and disadvantages in three parameters of children psychology- cognitive, social, and behavioural.
To begin with, According to Oxford University professor, playing computer games will show a direct link between children’s behaviour and cognitive development. Playing Games will accelerate children’s ability to visualise images in three-dimentional space, this will not only developed their thought process but helps them to understand the future growth path.
On other hand, modern use of computers shows a detrimental effect on children’s social development. For instance, a recent study shows excessive use of internet decrease children friendships and family relationship and as a consequence, it has lead them into depression, loneliness, obesity, and anxiety.
In conclusion, a systemic research needs to be executed to help or aware parents and policy makers to minimize negative impact and maximised positive impact of computer in children’s life.
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Nowadays, Children are habitual of using computers for a long duration since their childhood. However, “According to the Children Welfare Society “spending long hours on computers will make them introvert individuals and also give them an unhealthy lifestyle. I will provide my views on the advantages and disadvantages of children using technology with a logical conclusion.
The first advantage is the ongoing demand of the IT Industry, Parents are engaging the teenagers to learn coding at an early age of their life. US is the big example to evidence this statement, leaders like “Steve Job” and “Bill Gate” who starting coding at the age of 5 and motivate teenagers to bring innovation in IT Industry. The benefit of using computers will help them to understand the new trends and opportunities and can uplift their career.
On the other hand, spending long hours on screen has harmed teenager’s health. For example, as per the Ministry of Health, India children are suffering from obesity, anxiety, and backache problems (between the age group 7 to 19 years) due to spending a long time on screen. It has been also observed teenagers waste their time on the internet by chatting on a social platform, watching videos, shopping that mislead them to attain their objectives.
In conclusion, using computers is good for children as it enhances their skill and knowledge but subsequently, can impact their health, if used excessively. As a result, health ministries globally implementing new fitness policies to overcome our billionaires from the unwanted trap of technology.
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The diagram illustrates the process of generating electricity from a turbine near the sea wall.
In the first phase, the sea wave entered the column chamber with accumulated air, however, the forced air creates a positive pressure difference that helps to pass through the turbine in an anti-clock wise direction. When a turbine moved fast it will start generating electricity in the bank situated in sea cliff.
In the last phase, sea waves move in the opposite direction along with flowing off atmosphere air through the column in the same direction. This process of producing electricity is seasonal depending upon the high air pressure in sea waves. The idea of producing light through a renewable source of energy is highly effective and cost-friendly.
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Advertisement is an ongoing promotional strategy adopted by companies to entice customers for procuring products and services.There is a revolution in the advertisement campaigns wherein, people are attracted toward the charismatic products which they don’t demand off. Although, non-profit advertisement such as launching a new product, awareness campaign enhanced our standard of living.
Nowadays, the huge demand for advertisement is on a digital platform (Youtube, Facebook, Google, Instragram). For example, Soft drinks like Pepsi, Coca Cola, and RedBull every year project a campaign that manipulates the perception about a drink, hence create a utility to purchase the unwanted commodity. Now due to artificial intelligent, companies are using the conventional approach of selling their product on the digital platform. For example, I browse a laptop randomly on google, after few days company display a different variety of laptop that I would interesting in purchasing. This scenario will create unnecessary demand in my mind for purchasing a laptop.
In addition, the advertising agencies are evaluated based on the unwanted demand created in the market. For example, Zomato the largest food ordering online app that has evolved the Indian market of food with his tagline ” Don’t worry about tasty food when Zomato is here” this has impacted people psychology for ordering food if still not hungry.
In conclusion, I believed advertisement is good to create awareness among people but on the other hand, it can create a undesired demand in the society.
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It is illustrated that humans and pets stay together which is good for children. However, people think it is dangerous and harmful. Domestic animals and humans have lived together since ancient times, thus, I agree with the opinion that keeping pets at home is satisfactory for children.
Pets are mostly lovable and best companion that human has in this universe. All over the world, pets have made a remarkable position in families as their love and devotion with owners is extravagant and memorable. I have personally noticed the same, my child who is 1.5 years old loves a dog and cats. I can see my dog and my son play together and even sometimes eat on one plate, their bonding and affection to each other is inexpressible. In this era, where people are depressed and anxious, pets are the only domestic animal which can understand human psychology and try to make us happy and calm.
Secondly, In my opinion, domestic animals can be dangerous and harmful for children. The reason behind this that they give you so much love which sometimes causes infection for children. Once in a year, when dog fur peals out that spread massive hair which leads to an unhealthy life for children. For example, when I was 10 years old, and visited my friend’s house in India. While entering the house I saw a dog that was not able to move because he was suffering from a skin disease. He was staying alone and no children were allowed to meet him.
In the conclusion, Keeping pets at home is good but we should give them a healthy and caring life and as they give to us.
