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    Manveen

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    June 10, 2022 at 2:06 PM in reply to: Task 2 (Problem solution) : Brain drain

    The burning issue faced by under-developed countries is the upsurge in the migration of skilled workers in the search for a better lifestyle. The significant impact of this is on the young generation who remain untrained and leads to the lack of specialists in the vicinity. However, specific measures could come to the rescue like providing proper opportunities and imposing strict migration policies.

    First and foremost, it is intuitively obvious that due to this brain drain, the upcoming generation would surely not have enough chances to learn from experts. Nonetheless, people have to travel far distances in order to be benefitted from skilled professionals such as doctors. There is ample evidence about how individuals from small towns have to move to metropolitan cities for being treated by certain specialized doctors. Thus, it is plausible that this movement of skilled professionals shall be a great loss to the natives.

    However, some specific measures can help out to solve this burning issue like providing good civic amenities eventually leading to a settled life, and imposing high taxes to restrict immigration. To add, governmental organizations should work on setting laws and regulations which can support a person’s living in the local land, resulting in reduced migration. Hence, it is intro-controvertible that the described steps could solve the issue of migration to a certain extent.

    To conclude, many professionals like doctors, architects, teachers and so on, prefer to move to a richer country in order to achieve a well-settled life. This decision has many associated problems which the natives suffer. Nonetheless, government and other organizations should come together to mitigate this challenge.

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    Manveen

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    June 10, 2022 at 2:04 PM in reply to: Task1 (Letter writing) : Complaint to retailer

    Dear Sir,

    This letter is regarding my dissatisfaction with the Philips hair dryer, I bought from a website named Amazon on the 6<sup>th</sup> of this month.

    Firstly, I was expecting it to be packed well because of being in a higher price range; in the contrast, it reached me in damaged packaging. Secondly, as per the online description, it should have had three temperature control buttons, whereas one of them is not there. Lastly, it stops working in the middle of use frequently.

    Consequentially, I would be highly grateful to you if you could provide me with a refund of the entire amount in the same account through which I paid for the product. I am not in the favor of exchange as I have lost faith in this particular brand.

    It would be really nice if you dedicate the duty to picking this dryer to the same delivery boy as I live in a remote area and locating my house is not an easy task. Furthermore, an early pick-up will enable me to order another dryer as I am in urgent need of it.

    I expect vigilant action will be taken soon.

    Yours faithfully,

    Manveen

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    Manveen

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    June 3, 2022 at 1:56 PM in reply to: Task 2 (Opinion based) : Capital Punishment

    In today’s world, where crime is multi-folding, many believe that the death penalty is a better idea to have a peaceful society. Whereas, I discord this notion owing to the various reasons given below like everyone has equal right to live and many more.

    First and foremost, it is intuitively obvious that ending life would surely never give any chance of improvement to an individual, further leading to devastated families. To put it in other words, if a criminal suffers from a mental hazard or some certain circumstances due to which he committed the crime, it is astray to chastise him and not give him the opportunity to improve. Additionally, a death sentence is a punishment more for the relatives as they are left alone to struggle and face discrimination. For instance, numerous capital punishments are turned into life imprisonment where an offender has a chance to work on him. Thus, it is plausible that putting a full stop to someone’s life is not a reliable solution.

    Furthermore, knowing the end makes a guilty fearless which eventually leads to a disturbed society. To add on, a pathological criminal continues with heinous crimes without being bothered about the punishment as he knows he shall be hanged. All this could pave pay for a very insecure social circle where everybody would be scared to move out. For example, a murderer can keep hunting and slaying as he knows the punishment for killing one or more is same. Hence, it is intro-controvertible that other means of refinement ought to be opted.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing it is right to state that mankind is in danger due to the increase in criminal activities, that is why, many argue to adopt methods of eliminating offenders from the earth. However, I take a hold that everybody should have ample chances to be an ideal citizen and the capital punishment must be removed due to the reasons given above.

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    Manveen

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    May 31, 2022 at 1:27 PM in reply to: Task 1 (letter writing) : Course

    Dear Sir,

    I feel delighted of being selected by your prestigious college for the four-year degree program. However, I regret the selection of my subject due to which I am writing this letter to permit me the change in the present degree.

    I, the undersigned, am a student in the first year of Electrical Engineering Batch 2022. I began my course a month back on the 22nd of April 2022 after being enrolled in the second counseling that happened on the 15th of March 2022.

    It gives me immense pain to reflect that I do not feel interested to pursue Electrical Engineering, maybe because of my inclination toward architecture. Initially, I had no other choice than to go with the selected degree as there were no seats available in other departments. Recently, I came across the news about the availability of admission in a few other fields; therefore I decided to write to you.

    I would be really grateful to you if you could allow me to switch my course to Architectural Assistantship, resulting in pursuing my dream job of being an Architect. Nonetheless, I feel this decision will benefit me in long run. Along with this, I would like to request to adjust my already paid fee in the new selection as I am not in the position to pay the amount again.

    I hope my request would be considered.

    Yours faithfully,

    Manveen

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    Manveen

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    May 27, 2022 at 2:02 PM in reply to: Task 2 : GM foods (agree/disagree)

    With the upsurge of population, speculations are made that it would result in hunger. Therefore, man has to interrupt nature and create some genetically modified versions of food. It has been a debatable issue whether we should go with genetically engineered foods, whereas I strongly agree with this notion owing to the reasons described in the following essay.

    First and foremost, it is intuitively obvious that this man-manipulated food could provide various monetary benefits along with health. To put in other words, less input in terms of money would be required to get a higher yield, resulting in saving money. Secondly, a person shall be benefitted from the nutritional value, he is missing, while not intaking certain foods. There is ample evidence that scientists are struggling hard to grow this GM food in order to fulfill the requirement of the vitamin by the people. Therefore, it is plausible that these scientifically grown eatables could be highly beneficial.

    Additionally, the long-term benefits associated, like it could make the growth of plants regardless of climatic conditions and availability throughout the year, are of utmost importance. To add on, the genes given to the fruits and vegetables gives an artificial atmosphere to grow in an unsupportive environment resulting in being available in unfavorable months as well. For an instance, people living in urban areas have started mixing the breeds of plants and grow plants even in their terrace gardens. Hence, it is intro-controvertible that the use of GM foods is a boon to mankind.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing it is clear that the increase in births is rising concern for the scarcity of food forcing people to find solutions. One such help can be the use of genetically modified foods and I fully agree with its consumption due to the above given justifications.

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    Manveen

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    May 25, 2022 at 9:24 AM in reply to: Problem solution essay (Internet)

    In this techno-advanced world, the advent of the internet is both a boon and a bane. On the one hand, it has led to the development of mankind, on the other, it has paved the way for the issues that man never thought of. Some grave troubles associated are online looting in adults and behavioral issues in teens. However, these can be mitigated with secure browsing and vigilant parents respectively.

    To begin with, the major concerns of the people these days is the change in the thought processes of kids and being exploited by fraudulent online. Firstly, children go for unfiltered surfing which results in making them stubborn or sometimes arrogant. Secondly, talking about adults, they fell into rattrap of web-based frauds resulting in loss of money. There is ample evidence about adolescents watching vulgar on YouTube which persuaded many for rapes. Therefore, it is plausible that this new technology has many deficits associated with it.

    Every problem has a solution; the disturbing problems created by the internet can be cured with a reliable security system and vigilance of guardians towards the young minds. To add, awareness of the terms and conditions of every deal online is a must to save a person’s hard-earned money. Furthermore, the youngsters ought to be taught about the difference between ethical and unethical glimpsing over the net. For an instance, numerous working parents have got the software installed in their children’s systems that disables the content that is age-inappropriate. Hence, it is incontrovertible that the given measures can be some good solutions.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing it is clear that the internet has been a great asset in the way it helps people. Conversely, there are some unignorable problems related to monetary loss by elders and sudden mood swings in youngers. Although, serious steps mentioned above, can resolve these problems

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    Manveen

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    May 18, 2022 at 1:28 PM in reply to: Task1 (Letter writing) : Job for friend

    Dear John

    Hope this letter of mine reaches you in good health. I am glad to inform you that as inquired by you several times, there’s a vacancy in the local library of my town.

    The post is for an Assistant Librarian in the St. Albert Library of Aeronautic Sciences, situated at the heart of London. The job requires you to work for seven hours a day and help the Librarian to keep record of the books newly purchased as well as the ones which have been issued to the members.

    It feels to me that you are the most suitable person and would be surely selected on the basis of your qualifications. In addition to it, the experience of your internship in Turkey’s library would add on points to your resume. They are in need of someone who could not only work patiently but also possess inter-personal communication skills therefore making you fit in the position.

    Let me explain the process of appyling, you need to share your latest curriculum vitae along with xerox copies of all your educational and experience certificates through an email that is albertlibrary@gmail.com. Lastly, do not forget to apply before 22nd of May 2022 because no application would be accepted after the mentioned date.

    Give my love to your parents. Hope to see you soon.

    Yours lovingly

    Manveen

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    Manveen

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    May 18, 2022 at 10:53 AM in reply to: TASK 2[OPINION BASED TOPIC]FOOD

    In this modern era, consuming junk food is becoming the latest trend which surely has adverse effects on the consumer. Although there are numerous people who ignore the troubles created due to this food, I fully agree that intake of food, not cooked at home, has long-term issues.

    First and foremost, it is intuitively obvious that not eating home-cooked eatables not only makes a person lazy but also dependent. To put it in other words, an individual finds it easy to order food instead of cooking it which makes him lethargic. Additionally, if someone doesn’t prefer to cook continuously, he becomes more liable to others. For example, many students studying abroad are seen buying food on daily basis due to which they are never used to making a meal for themselves. Thus, it is plausible that this habit can create serious issues in a person’s life.

    Secondly, this dangerous food can also lead to many severe health diseases and obesity. To add on, a person becomes a couch potato and gains so much weight that consequently it becomes difficult to reduce at later stages. In addition, one can be struck with an incurable ailment. For instance, it has been observed in recent data recorded by the Scientific Research society that the deadly disease of cancer is increasing due to the high intake of fried food prepared in re-heated oil by restaurants. Hence, it is intro-controvertible that prolonged complications could occur because of these unhygienic edibles.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the
    aforementioned writing, it is right to state that the consumption of meals from
    outside the home’s kitchen is multiplying every day. All this is detrimental in
    terms of health as well as the culture of humankind.

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    Manveen

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    May 17, 2022 at 10:11 AM in reply to: Writing task 2 (Direct/Two-parts question)

    People, these days, are struggling hard in order to provide a rich brought-up to their offspring. Some believe that fulfilling the child’s demands and agreeing upon everything asked by him is good, whereas I stand with the other half as all this could make the kid more demanding also he would not value things. Not only this, it could also have long-term deficits where a grown-up child could have behavioral issues and would also be inclined towards materialistic things.

    First and foremost, it is intuitively obvious that agreeing upon everything will make the kin adamant about his needs also he will show less or no importance towards the things. To put it in other words, once a child understands that the parent would show agreement over all his ethical or unethical demands, he starts forcing the guardian for every little thing and would never utilize it properly. For instance, numerous kids have been seen bored playing with newly bought toys because they know they would soon get another.

    Moreover, all this could show its after-effects even when the child gets into teenage or adolescence where he would not be social and disrespect every relationship. To add on, a person would not be able to adjust himself to a society where he has to accept many things. Additionally, he would not respect any relation. For example, recent news was heard where a son murdered his father only because he refused to get him his desired car.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing it is clear that giving a yes to everything longed for by a child can surely make him stubborn in his demands, in addition, he would lose interest in the longing soon. All this could have un-ignorable results where an individual loses his interest in human relations and stays busy in his own philistine world.

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    Manveen

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    May 6, 2022 at 1:37 PM in reply to: Task 1 (letter writing) : Head office

    Dear Mr. Singh

    I am an employee working as an Assistant manager in the hospitality department of your company. This letter is to request you to allow me to work in the Head Office, London for half a year.

    Let me explain the reason of this choice, I feel that being employed here since 4 years have been a great time but there are few areas where I need to put on more efforts. And I believe staying at the headquarters would give me enough of exposure to explore my skills in a better way.

    I ensure you that all the assigned tasks would be accomplished before I leave. Also I would like to suggest my friend’s name to work on my position who could handle my job tasks very well. I would always be a phone call away in case of any need.

    My humble request is to you to help me with a recommendation letter which could pave my way for this journey of 6 months. I would be highly grateful if my stay could also be arranged in the company’s campus.

    I hope my request would be accepted.

    Yours sincerely

    Manveen

  • The advancement in transportation has led to the migration of people to different countries either for learning or earning. A plethora of individuals prefer sending their kin to alien lands for advanced studies, this essay shall delve deep into the pros and cons of this movement.

    First and foremost, many parents choose a foreign study for their children in order to attain better opportunities and to have a settled career. To add on, the students emigrate due to lack of chances in terms of future aspects, also to have a green pasture. For example, a student abroad has to work while balancing his studies which provides him enough exposure that helps him in taking his career to new heights. Hence it is intro-controvertible that the abroad study provides many benefits.

    On the other hand, this relocation also leads to brain drain as well as many health issues. To put in other words, numerous students have moved out of their places for the first time for which they have to be out of their comfort zones as a result their health suffers. Also, the resettlement of a young generation is a loss to the country which could further lack professionals in coming times. For an instance, many learners have been seen in depression due to homesickness. Therefore it is fair to claim that studying in a non-native place has some un-ignorable deficits.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing, it is right to state that the dispersion of students for higher studies can provide secured careers and ample opportunities but on the other hand can be a cause of ill-health as well as loss to the nation.

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    Manveen

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    May 5, 2022 at 9:17 AM in reply to: Essay advantages and disadvantages ( Uniform)

    For ages, Uniform has been an irreplaceable part for all and sundry, starting from the school uniform to workplace dress. Although a group of employees might feel bored wearing it every day and the dress might be worn out, the sense of professionalism and equality is much more essential.

    On one hand, the same clothing worn by all the employees shows a professional attitude as well as non-discrimination on any basis. To put it in other words, an institution gives a well-organized lookout when all wear the same. Along with it, there is no space for segregating the workers as per any social criteria. For an instance, employees in particular dress-up are easy to approach by the customers too. Hence it is proved that uniformity in attire is a must.

    On the other hand, some people feel that wearing the same clothing every day gives them a sense of boredom and the apparel too turns faded and wearied. To add on, a few jobholders feel that the change in dress might give them more willingness to go to work. Also, putting up the same clothes every day might frazzle the fabric. For example, at numerous places, the employees are getting two different dresses to be used on alternate days. Therefore, wearing identical clothes is disliked by a few.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing it is right to state that every coin has two sides like some individuals consider a uniform dressing as a burden and disapprove of it whereas the others feel that not varying outfit adds to their professional ethics also gives equivalence to the workforce.

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    Manveen

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    May 4, 2022 at 2:56 PM in reply to: Task2 (Essay writing) : Office design

    In this fast changing world with the rapid growth of technology, the way of working has been affected too where many organizations have opted to have a common workspace in place of personal cabins.Although this notion has its own pros and cons, the following essay shall prove that the advantages surely overweigh the disadvantages.In this fast changing world with the rapid growth of technology, the way of working has been affected too where many organizations have opted to have a common workspace in place of personal cabins.Although this notion has its own pros and cons, the following essay shall prove that the advantages surely overweigh the disadvantages.

    First and foremost, being engaged without walls gives opportunity to be more productive to the employee and helps employer to have a better check on the workers. To put it in other words, employed in group gives hike to more ideas hence generates creativity amongst colleagues. The manager gets an easy access to observe the workers’ performances if they work outside their cabins. For an instance, every individual performs way better if he knows there is an eye over him. Therefore, working outside cabinets is much more reliable.

    On the other hand, functioning while sitting together can be disturbing for a few and may also hamper a person’s privacy. To add on, when people sit next to each other they frequently start talking much which distracts their assigned task. Also, numerous jobholders prefer to work alone in their own comfort zone which is not possible without having closed working space. For example, a plethora of employees copy malpractices from their colleagues while being closer to them. However, vigilant surveillance can definitely overcome these issues.

    To conclude, after agglomerating the aforementioned writing it is right to state that operating alone may be beneficial for some but generally the open working areas serve much more assets compared to the four-walled structure

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