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    PRIYA

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    September 29, 2021 at 1:48 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: DISCUSSION+OPINION ESSAY- MEDIA AND ADVERTISEMENT

    In some people’s opinion kids behavior these days is getting impacted by the television while others believe that the impact on kids behavior by television is proportionally equivalent to the time they are watching it. I believe both are correct with their opinions because television has an impact on daily life of kids no matter how much time spent on it or what has been liked by them.

    To begin with i would like to highlight that television has a huge impact on our lives irrespective of any age group. Children at a small age they are tend to learn faster and they grab positive and negative both by watching television even in small time. Kids do not understand whatever is shown on television is not for real instead it is all scripted and they start adopting the things. For instance some of kids they love watching super heroes on tv and they believe those super heroes are for real and as result kids start acting like super heroes, they copy those characters and slowly it impacts their regular behavior also.

    Some kids who are on television for a longer time will certainly have a major impact on their behavior because its not just kids are learning from the super heroes they start living with them and kids start believing them as part of their lives. Good or bad habits of their favorite characters make a strong place in their mind and they are completely jeopardized. Kids might become more aggressive or more caring or many be they start to have a negative feeling for the parents or family because they are influenced by the television character they watch the most.

    In conclusion i would say television put a major impacts on kids behavior irrespective of any age or the time they are watching. What kids are watching also an important factor to hypnotize kids’s mind and in result it impacts kids behavior and thought process both.

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    PRIYA

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    September 27, 2021 at 1:53 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: TWO DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY- HEALTH

    Walking use to be considered as one of the best exercise for health still now a days very less people follow walking. There are several reasons to it which includes pandemic than emerging trends of gym and also the pollution outside. The awareness programs and more work on suitable infrastructure by government can certainly motivate people for walking.

    These days pandemic is the first reason people do not prefer to go outside for walking rather they prefer to follow home exercises and yoga to meet the fitness goals. Many qualified fitness trainers from gyms they have started online fitness program where they make people do exercise online and they promote their ads on social media very well hence that is another reason people stopped going out for walk.

    The pollution can also be another reason in several cities that people do not feel good as the air is polluted because of a lot of vehicles on road and there is no particular walking paths are constructed in every locality. Lifestyle changes also responsible for this. Going to gym ahs become a status symbol for youngsters and they do not prefer to got for walk whereas some are so busy with jobs work from home than taking care of kids and other family members they do not get time for walking.

    Walking can be promoted since beginning to young kids than they would have more awareness towards its benefits. The government should also take care to develop the suitable space for walking in every locality. The pollutions control measures should also be taken care by authorities in residential areas.

    In conclusion if we will have more awareness and the suitable area in our locality than i am sure people will be motivated for walking and this is every one’s responsibility to encourage kids and adults also the senior citizens to go for walk and they should look at it as a family activity also not only fitness activity.

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    PRIYA

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    September 17, 2021 at 2:40 PM in reply to:

    Dear Mr John,

    I am writing to you to seek your approval for a leave of 30 days regarding some unavoidable personal emergency.

    My father who has recently been shifted to Sydney from Melbourne recently is not keeping well and upon diagnostic we found he is suffering from hypertension which in result adding further more complications to his health. I want to take care of him by the time he is under treatment. As per doctor’s advice it will take almost 30 days in this process.

    Meanwhile when i am not physically present here than i will keep a track of my mailbox and will keep responding to all important client’s mails. I shall also keep a track of regular productivity reports to be sent on time and work is assigned to the respective team members.

    I have already given a full handover to Lisa to handle things in my absencr. Have also introduced her to a few clients online and she is happily ready to extend her support. We both will make sure the work is not getting hampered when i am not here.

    Looking forward for a positive response from your end.

    Yours Sincerely

    Andrew

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    PRIYA

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    September 16, 2021 at 12:25 PM in reply to: GT LETTER WRITING TASK 1- LETTER OF ADVICE

    Dear Ena,

    I hope you are doing good. I am writing to you in response to your letter last week where you had asked for my advice regarding some issues within your team. Being a team lead from last 2 years i have also faced similar issues in past so trust me it is nothing new when sometimes people go against you and they start disliking their supervisors.

    When i was in similar situation when i have got promoted as Team lead. The work pressure in IT industry is same everywhere. I was new and wanted to prove myself which as a result led to a lot of work pressure on team hence they started to feel negative about me.

    Gradually i realized it was me who was at fault, i had started spending more time with my team members and made them understand that what i am doing will help the whole team in future to grow and sustain in such competitive environment. There was an issue of alignment in our approach and thought process which i sorted out by sitting with them and spending time with them. Trust me it helped me to build that trust among the team and aligning up the team objectives.

    I hope my personally tried and trusted advice will help you too to sort out the issue.

    Good luck

    Riyana

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    PRIYA

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    September 16, 2021 at 11:59 AM in reply to:

    Dear Ena,

    I hope your are doing great. It has been long to catchup with you. I am writing to you to share a great news with you. I have got admission in Columbia university for my masters. I will be in your city for the next 2 years and it sounds so exciting.

    I was looking for a small favor from you. My financial conditions are not hidden from you, luckily i am getting the tuition fee scholarship for this 2 years program but still there is a lot to do. I want to join a part time job so that i can bear my personal expenses and can also learn something in the free time.

    I want you to help me to introduce to a few job agencies who helps people to find the part time job. I will be free in the evening everyday around 4pm so anything after that would be ok for me. Since you are the one staying there from long time so i hope you can surely connect me and guide me to reach out to the respective online or offline consultants.

    Looking forward to hear back from you soon and yes seen you soon.

    Love and best wishes

    Sara

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    PRIYA

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    September 16, 2021 at 11:44 AM in reply to: PARAPHRASING QUESTION 1:

    According to many people’s point of view the social networking sites like Facebook and Instagram are leaving adverse effects not only on individuals but also on the society.

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    PRIYA

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    September 16, 2021 at 11:39 AM in reply to: PARAPHRASING QUESTION 2:

    The obesity issue is continuously increasing and putting pressure on the heath care system to cope up with all the issues related to health involved. A few people believe the physical education should be given more priority in the school’s curriculum.

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    PRIYA

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    September 16, 2021 at 11:35 AM in reply to: PARAPHRASING QUESTION: 3

    It has been noticed in few countries some people’s salary is exceptionally higher than others. Some found it is fine while some think it is incorrect, the earnings should be controlled by government and they should curb the amount for people to earn.

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    PRIYA

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    September 15, 2021 at 4:03 PM in reply to: GT LETTER WRITING: LETTER OF COMPLAINT

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to you to report an ongoing noise issue arising from the regular maintenance work going on at the super market since past few weeks.

    I am Susane an old resident of galaxy apartment in the welington street. There is an old super market next to my apartment which is getting refurnished and the construction work is going on from past 2 weeks.

    Although we also want the supermarket to get restart again it will be beneficial for all of us around the street but the unbearable noise from drilling machines, excavator’s noise along with continuous hammering sounds keep coming from morning 8 am until evening 6pm. This noise is disturbing my whole family mentally and physically.

    Me and my husband are working professional in IT companies, due to pandemic our jobs has been shifted to homes. Our two kids they also have online classes starting from morning to late afternoon. None of us can focus on our work due to a lot of distraction from outside further more my younger one has started reporting sever headache due to the noise of hammers and drilling machines.

    I would suggest if the working hours of workers can be shifted to starting from early morning until afternoon or even late evening they can work. Authorities can advice them to work during weekend to carry out the drilling and hammering work, or they can use the machines which make lesser noise.

    I am looking forward for a positive and prompt response from the council.

    Yours faithfully

    Susane

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    PRIYA

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    September 15, 2021 at 2:17 PM in reply to: GT LETTER WRITING: AMENDMENT LETTER

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing this letter to you to bring it to your notice about a wrong information published in an article on Sydney’s lifestyle and culture in your reputed magazine “Life style study” November edition.

    In this article you have mentioned that sydney’s underground film festival will be held on 9 september until 26 september however this information seems to be incorrect because the underground festival has been canceled by the concerned authorities owing to the ongoing pandemic and the news was made public through national news conference.

    Since i work with a national news agency so i know this information is correct hence this year there is no underground film festival. I would like to request you to please correct this information immediately as your magazine is one of the best seller and been trusted by many for relevant information related to traveling.

    Many people may plan to travel because of the article in your magazine, so it will be great if you can immediately do the changes in your e-magazine and also republish the correct information in the next edition which will help people to plan accordingly.

    I hope the corrective actions will be taken and we will see the amendments in the next edition.

    Yours faithfully,

    Riyana john

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    PRIYA

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    September 15, 2021 at 1:51 PM in reply to: GT LETTER WRITING TASK 1: LETTER OF ACCEPTANCE

    Dear Kim,

    I hope you are having a productive week. I am feeling delighted while writing it to you that you offered me Digital marketing expert job in your esteemed consultancy firm. Recently i came across a few articles on E-magazines about your company that you guys are planning to spend a lot on digital marketing to revamp your image online, which i find really hold a good scope for a reputed company like yours.

    However i regret to inform you that i will not be able to accept this job immediately as i already have my previous commitments. As you already know i have been working as a free lancer digital marketing consultant and i have a few projects going on with the fixed deadlines in coming months only. There are a few new products launch campaigning and a lot of other planning related to this going on.

    I really wanted to join and work with you, if by the december you people get a suitable candidate than go ahead or if you can wait for me, i shall keep you updated if at all i am free before december.

    Thanks again for having that confidence to offer me this job. I wish to hear back from you soon.

    Good luck

    Riyana

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    PRIYA

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    September 14, 2021 at 1:39 PM in reply to:

    Dear Miss Haina,

    I am writing to you as want to make a request for a temporary job transfer for me from Toronto to Newyork (USA) our head office for a period of six months.

    My younger sister who has been studying journalism in Newyork university from last 4 years. This year suppose to be her final year and her exams are suppose to be held in december but unfortunately she met with an accident and there is a major fracture in her backbone. My sister can not travel back here as it’s going to take a long time in this treatment also she doesn’t want to compromise with her studies as it’s her 4 years hard work and her career on stake. She needs my help to take care of her during this tough time hence i am requesting for a six month transfer to our headoffice.

    Our headoffice in newyork is very much close by the house my sister stays in and it will be very easy for me to join office everyday and in between i can also take care of my sister and can help her in such difficult time. I have explained responsibilities here to Mr. Xavier who is very much willing to help me in this period if at all needed anything he will represent on my behalf physically while i will be available online from our headoffice and also from home.

    Looking forward for your extended help and support in this matter. Hope to get an approval from you soon.

    Yours sincerely

    John

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    PRIYA

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    September 14, 2021 at 12:47 PM in reply to: GT TASK 1 LETTER WRITING: LETTER OF APPLICATION

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing this letter to you with regards to an advert I saw in times now on September 11. You are looking for volunteers who can help to run a wellness campaign at the Devid’s old age home. I am very much willing to work with you in this social cause by helping those elderly homeless people.

    Being from a joint family I personally feel the value of having your own grand parents, how much they love their grand kids and in return they expect only love and care nothing else. I wholeheartedly want to help such people and really want to earn their blessings only along with doing something for my society’s welfare.

    I have a few friends and relatives who are from medical background and some of them are doctors, certainly my contacts will help us in planning and execution of this wellness camp. I can also ask for some charity from my office friends as well as from some more social contacts to buy some first aid kit for the old people which we can distribute them during the campaign.

    I am eagerly looking forward to get this opportunity to become part of this noble cause. Please update me soon.

    Yours faithfully

    Nehaa

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    PRIYA

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    September 14, 2021 at 12:43 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: OPINION ESSAY- EDUCATION

    Adolescents should pay more attention towards the subjects in which they have more interest, this is thought process of few people whereas few still believe that they should pay equal attention to all the subjects during school days. I also believe that the school going children must pay equal attention to all the subjects in place of focusing only on few subjects.

    School’s education builds a strong base for the children. It is children’s responsibility to focus on each and every subject which will help them in future. Strong base will help kids in making a better future decisions as to in which subject they are good or which one they do not have interest.

    I have seen some children who initially do not like science or mathematics because they have a fear as it is considered as on of the toughest subjects but once they start focusing on basic formulas and they learn basic concepts thoroughly than gradually they start liking these subjects and find it easy also they might make a career in the same field.

    If they will not give to those subjects which they do not have much of interest than without giving time they will not know and they will not be bale to explore themselves in that specific subject which might be very interesting for them in future. Even though if they do not proceed with few of the subjects they never liked or they could not understand well but if they know the basics than as it is said knowledge never gets wasted and it may help in future. This will also give a confidence also in future to face any situation well in future if it is related to those topics or subjects they did not like but they know well what was it about.

    I would like to conclude here as focusing only to those subjects you like may not be good for your children’s future while paying equal attention to each subjects will help them to increase the knowledge repository which will help them in future.

  • It has been noticed that few people these days have started relying on online solutions for their medical issues. In my opinion it is not advisable to be completely dependent on technology for the health issues.

    It is very crucial to take care of your health related issues very seriously however treating some medical condition through technology can be life threatening. Internet these days is full of unverified information on different portals. Some portals have just gathered the information on the rising health issues and dropped on their portal but it the causes and the symptoms for any disease may warry from person to person.

    We can use internet for selecting the best doctor in the town by checking the reviews on the internet. We can compare the services offered by the hospitals and the therapist. Social media has emerged as one of the best information center during this pandemic for checking availability of medical resources such as beds, oxygen supply and the other medical supplies.

    So in a nutshell i would like to conclude the technology is still the best place to find out the contacts or references for medical supplies, and also to find out other medical services. The technology is a boon for accessing any information at any point of time from anywhere but internet can not replace doctors, the medical conditions can not be treated by technology, we will have to consult doctors the medium to reach that doctor could be online but the treatment will be given by doctor only.

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