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    Mohit

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    November 25, 2021 at 6:27 AM in reply to: Letter- Building Company

    Dear Mr. Manager,

    I am writing this letter regarding the new project, that is proposed by your company in the area of Govindpuram Ghaziabad.

    One of my friend , who is working in your company , has told me about your project, and I have also read about the same in the local News paper, named as “Dainik Jagran”.

    Having known about your project , I am feeling very glad and hoping that, as this project is scheduled near by our neighboring land, and will bring many more development here.

    There is one major area, which is still lying as untouched , that there is no playground , and due to which our children are often stay at home , so I want your company to develop a park for children as well. If require , our housing society is also ready to to contribute for this development. Please discuss the matter with in your company and come back with positive note.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully

    Mohit Jain

    Secretary , Atharv Housing Society.

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    Mohit

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    November 10, 2021 at 9:06 PM in reply to: Opinion Essay [Customer Reviews]

    Most of the people want to check the quality of the product before buying and the best way to check the same is the reviews , available on intranet. Does customer feedback really plays an important role in making a purchase? Well , I have experienced that yes it plays. This essay will discuss the utility of customer reviews.

    Almost all the people , in modern age of internet , check the reviews of a product before making a decision. This practice is being followed not only in modern age but also since inception. today the feedback are retrieved from internet while earlier it was being taken through mouth campaign. The feedback is the real life experience of the exist customer , which discuss about the quality of the ware and if the experience is good then obviously the quality would be perfect. Thus we can underscore the usefulness of customer reviews.

    Secondly, consumer reviews also divulge the company’s various policy like: After sale service, Return policy or warranty policy etc. It is very rudimentary thing that most of the people always prefer to buy a brand . For them product comes later and that is the very point when brand policy become more relevant before buying the item and here customer reviews , again play a vital role. they do not consider their purchasing as an expense but an investment and thus go very selectively and will not hesitate to reject even a brand if the reviews do not gratify their needs, therefore once again the importance of customer review is grounded

    Eventually , when ever a person think about buying goods or services , he always prefer to have an idea about the quality of the product and the goodwill of the company. He is going to invest his hard earned money in a product and will definitely enquire about the product and other than customer feedback no second way can be much effective. Thus, unequivocally, the triumph of customer feedback, in buying a product is proclaimed

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    Mohit

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    October 31, 2021 at 9:38 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 – [Crime]

    In many countries , despite off a historical downfall in serious crime rate , the feeling of security amongst people is all time low. This behavior of people is astonishing the Government of those country. Well, this essay will caste the glimpse on the reason of such strange reaction and will provide the suitable treatment to deal with .

    In many country , a noticeable decline in crime rate has been perceived , however contrary to it, the feeling of security amongst the citizens has not been improved but decreased to the minimum. The main reason behind this is that they have faced a very wide torment by the criminals and due to this, they are not ready to believe upon the figures are being shown as low crime rate. They are considering it as a short phase of piece and being afraid that the crime, like wise the sea waves, will definitely return back into the city and thus their consternation can not be ignored.

    Nevertheless , to eliminate their pondering and to resurrect their faith in law & order some major steps need to be taken. They are scaring more not off the crime, but off the criminals so the criminals should be punished before the citizens. It is illustrated further that the criminals who are currently behind the bar should be battered , as they have not committed the crime in their hide-outs, by the police in front of the subjects. This action by the government not only will restore their faith in Law & order but also will be an epitome for others criminals , that who so ever will commit the crime , will be chasten like this. Thus their moral will be rejuvenate and they will feel more secure than ever.

    <font face=”inherit”>Eventually, in spite of a bottom crime rate , the past experiences of people are not letting them to have a breath of sigh and for wining their confidence , the government must punish the criminal </font>specially<font face=”inherit”> before the victims. </font>

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    Mohit

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    October 25, 2021 at 10:06 PM in reply to: Opinion Essay – Space Travel

    Now a days , In developed world , there is a rivalry between the government to explore the space and accordingly a lot of money is being expensed out . Do space exploration is a need of today? Or, Is space exploration simply a wastage of money? Well , I, myself is one of those, who believe that the space exploration is a trust worthy work which should be continued.

    Some people argue that ‘the Government of developed world’ is , just to gratify their own ego , is spending hard earned money of taxpayer in an formidable task. This is, further illustrated by them that the wealth and resources, are being used in an unnecessary competition , can be used to feed millions of people. Many Children not only can be lifted from poverty line but also many premature deaths , which happen in dearth of treatment , can be prevented. Thus wasting of money in space exploration ought to be stopped and so the argument is got underscore.

    While, on the other hand many people believe that space exploration is a matter of nations pride and should be kept continue . they always give precedency of space exploration over all other things. It is encapsulated further by them that as there are lots of perils like : Comets, asteroids hovering in the blue sky which may cause , if not taken properly, damage tp our environment and sometimes to our mother earth. By space exploration such stray invaders can be encountered proactively and therefore the utility of space exploration is grounded.

    Eventually, it is true that space exploration is an exorbitant task , but it protect the earth as well. Space exploration can be perfectly denominated as an proactive approach , which , as our duty, ought to be continued and therefore the triumph the space exploration is proclaimed.

  • Many people are extremely influenced in buying the things after seeing advertisement, While others consider it as sham. Do advertisement really have an effect on people’s mind? Well, I am convinced that yes, they have. This essay will discuss both of the view points and will caste the glimpse on the usefulness of advertisements.

    Many people of the society , outweigh the effect of advertisements out-rightly , and deny its various effect on people’s mind such as motivating them to buy the product. they illustrated further that because a person is quite educated and well aware not only about his need, but also about his purchasing power. No outside force like advertisement , can increase neither his want nor his income. So he will not buy the items by being influenced with advertisements . Thus the role of advertisement , in enticing a consumer for buying the items is chastened ruthlessly.

    While, on the other hand , many people like me believe that advertisement has a profound effect on , not only on a consumer’s mind but also on their purchasing habit. this was encapsulated further that as there are a plenty of advertisement , and many out of them are certainly suits to consumer’s want and need, and accordingly they create impression upon them and leads them to buy the items of the specific brand. Therefore the supremacy of advertisement on consumer purchasing habit is underscored.

    Eventually , from the above we can conclude that as advertisement are well designed , supported by pompous music and visualization , have a great impact on consumers mind. They descend in-depth of the human and thus play a vital role in their buying habits. Therefore the significance of advertisements in buying habits is proclaimed .

    @abhinavmohan3 please

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    Mohit

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    October 20, 2021 at 9:37 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2: Advantages and disadvantages

    Since the vary presence of social media , a drastic change, in Society , is being noticed. Many people arguing that our face-to-face interaction is being replaced by it and it will certainly damage the society . Does they are arguing a write thing ? Or, it is scarcely a hallucination? Well I am the person, who believe that yes this will adversely effect the society.

    Now a days, many people are queuing in support of Social Media as they believe that this is very beneficial for the society. The same is illustrated further that by using the platform we are exchanging our views, greeting & wishing ; to each other with out visiting their place, and thus saving not only the time but also the money. Thus the supremacy of social media is underscored by them.

    While, on the other hand many people are considering it as a demon who is eating up their relationship which was developed by putting hard effort and that too over a period of time . The same is attached with the survival of human race by reading the countenance of the other one ,and only then the feelings of joy or grief can be assimilate. And social media is hitting out on that vary point only . Therefore the precedency of social media is denied by them out rightly .

    Eventually , No doubt that social media has made our communication easier but it can carry the words only and not the emotions, and human ,in depth, is nothing else but a statue of feelings only which are necessarily require to build a society. Hence from the above the triumph of disadvantage of social media over the advantage is concluded.

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    Mohit

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    October 19, 2021 at 9:13 PM in reply to: Essay Writing : Indirect “to what extent do you agree” question.

    Many places , now a days , like: offices, hospitals and many others are being adorned by the colour patches. This is, according to many psychologist, because colours have a great impact on people’s thought process. Well , Do colours really have an impression upon the thoughts ? I , my self , am very much convinced that yes, they have.

    Colours , since inception, are being used to entice the people and silently motivate them to be more productive. This was illustrated further by a group of study in which a office space was painted with White colour, shaded with Pink. Upon observation of 6 months it was found that the productivity of the employee has been increased by 20 percent and the fuss, between the manager and worker has been reduced significantly. Therefore the colours therapy on human behavior is underscored.

    Furthermore, Same type of improvements were encapsulated in a hospital, when the roof of the hospital was painted with White colour , having stars pasted under it, and the wall was painted, specifically by Sky-Blue colour, and the flower pots were made settle along the walls. After 6 month it was noticed that the patient , admitted to these rooms , shown 150 percent increment in recovery and that too consuming a bit less medication. Thus the colour therapy again gets ground.

    Finally , Colour has an emotional effect on human being, and can motivate a person to not only improve his productivity, but also help to get rid of critical diseases. Hence , unequivocally the supreme effect of colours on human race is proclaimed.

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    Mohit

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    October 12, 2021 at 9:48 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing: Big Salary

    Job satisfaction of the employee is something which can make a company to touch the sky. But what contribute more in job satisfaction? whether it a big salary package ? or something else? Well, this essay will caste the glimpse on role of big salary for job satisfaction.

    The supremacy of a lucrative salary package, in job satisfaction , can not be ignored by anyone and this is the most attractive factor in any segment, which alone is capable enough to pool the talent towards an organization. It is illustrated further that an employee will have to accomplish the various need of his offspring and ménage , and if he is not able to make sufficient earning , then very soon he will become irritate and will start to look for a change.

    Secondly , the precedence of good remuneration is always considered a big factor amongst the human capital. The salary is the only thing which assure an worker about his future. in other words , if he receives a good payout , which is sufficient enough for not only to meet his daily requirement but also to be deposited in saving account, his gratification towards the job would be more vivid.

    Finally , from the above it may be derived that an employee works for the money and if he do not get a good stipend then obviously he will loose the interest very soon and will start to search for a job, And unequivocally the attrition from a company signals about the un-satisfaction amongst the employee. Thus the role of tantalizing salary package in job satisfaction is proclaimed.

  • Many person of the society believe that nature has given a wonderful sets of skills to man while other emphasis that woman are naturally more utilitarian than man. Does a man really possesses more expertise than a woman? Well, this essay will caste the glimpse on the competitive skills, a man has over the woman.

    Many people advocate the supremacy of woman as compare to its counterpart man. They are mesmerized by the wonderful skill like ,multitasking, which a woman possesses. This is illustrated further by them that a woman not only have a inbuild quality to handle the household work, including nurturing of kids , but also has an extraordinary power to cop up the work pressure at office . Thus the superiority of a woman is grounded by thenm

    While, on the other hand, most of the people are convinced about the precedency of man. They are agree that a man , being a natural effective creature , are more efficient than a woman. This is encapsulated further that a man is blessed with the most effective super power ‘wisdom and physical strength’ . By the help of these two super power a man can achieve any task which seems even impossible in the beginning. Thus the competitiveness of a man is established by them.

    Eventually , there is no doubt about the multitasking skills of a woman , but a man has been given more skill than a woman by the nature which overweigh the woman skills, and unequivocally gives a upper hand to a man and thus the superiority of a man is underscored.

    @Abhinavmohan Sir , for your evaluation please.

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    Mohit

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    October 4, 2021 at 9:36 PM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

    Dear John,

    I am writing this letter into bring in your kind attention about the suitcase , which was lost in the flight no AR120,

    The suitcase was of the VIP brand, having the colour as white . It was wrapped in a gray colour suitcase- cover and A lion mark was printed on both side of the cover .

    I suppose as i was having 3 offspring with me and they all were hungry ,despite off, I was in hurry to catch the connecting flight , I took them into a lounge for buying some food and there, I suppose the suitcase was lost.

    As my travelling was insured along with all the belongings , so I request to please arrange the reimbursement for the lost suitcase.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you for an early settlement of the claim

    Yours faithfully

    Mohit Jain

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    Mohit

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    October 1, 2021 at 7:51 AM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: OUTWEIGH ESSAY- FOOD

    In the modern life , fast food is being preferred amongst a wide section of people and now has become a daily routine meal for many. While the other still emphasize on the regular meal. Do the fast food can really be a good substitute for the regular meal? Or will it be proved worsen either ? Well, this essay will caste the glimpse over the disadvantage of fast food.

    A wide section of the society has become the crazy for fast food, and has accepted its supremacy over the main meal. They further illustrate it that most of the fast food are ready to use and can be cooked effortlessly. The world is swirling fast so the things aligned to its should also maintain the same pace otherwise we all will be sprayed and thus the fast food is being justified.

    While on the other hand , many people advocate the precedence of regular meal. Main meal is always full of nutrition and nothing can be as good as the regular food. They encapsulate it that regular food, as it does not loose its minerals and vitamins, is always good for health and should only be in our diet. Only a healthy life can lead us to success . Thus the regular food is being grounded.

    Eventually , I always found my self on the side of healthy food and unequivocally the healthy food is regular food, while the advocacy of fast food is nothing else but a stubborn argument. I strongly agree that even, the fast food should not be a part of our dietary system.

    @abhinavmohan sir , for your evaluation please .

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    Mohit

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    September 30, 2021 at 7:58 AM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    ‘The supremacy of English language is due to the tourism’ , is a topic which is being discussed a lot now a days . Many people believe that this is paving the path for English language towards the only language in the world. Whether, for the human kind , will this be beneficial or not ? This essay will discuss on both side and finally will caste a glimpse on the disadvantage of one ruler.

    ‘A major part of the society’ was made convinced that the English language is a wide spread language amongst the world and tourism is making it even an international language. They illustrate it further that any where in the world , amongst the human being, the language should not be a bar and any one should be capable enough to fluently communicate with each other , this will help to human being not only in finalizing the business deal but also in dissipating the various discrimination. Thus the importance of only one language is being justified.

    But on the other hand , many people oppose the idea and claim that the prevalence of only one language will triggered many other hitches. The same is encapsulated that local person can not be as fluent in one language as the native can , so the precedence of one language not only will make them feel inferior but also will cause the raze to the prosperity, exists everywhere , and so will lead to another language based discrimination. Therefore the existence of only one language can not be grounded.

    Eventually , the conclusion can be derived that the languages carry the sentiments of the local people and represent the greatness of their culture. The idea of having only one language can not be considered as a good for the society and should not be favored either. I strongly oppose the same.

    @ Abhinav sir, four evaluation please

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    Mohit

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    September 29, 2021 at 9:30 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: OPINION ESSAY- EDUCATION

    A lot of experiences, pertaining to the studies materials , are being done in our country , but the nucleus of all the experiment has now become that either all the subject need to be included in the curriculum or students should choose the subject according to their strength and interest. Well this essay will glimpse upon the importance of deciding the subject by the student, by their own.

    ‘A graduate should has the knowledge of all the valuable things which they will face while paving the way of their successful carrier’ is the quotation , oftenly quoted by the supporters . And they also emphasis it by illustrating further that a science graduate is not going to make his carrier in the field of science only. There may be the demand of commerce graduate in market , which will certainly prevail the commerce graduate and then he would have no other option, but to be left behind. Thus the necessity of teaching all subject are justified.

    ‘Junk of all is master of none’ ,on the other hand , is quoted by the opponents . They believe that students can do wonder, if they are allowed to choose the subject of their own interest. The path of the success is always open for the masters. Illustrating the same they speak that as the student is the only one who know its own interest better then any other and an independence choice for the subject , he is going to studied , will be proven like ‘icing on the cake’ and he , by focusing on his key area , can make his own path of success. Thus let them choose their carrier by their own.

    At the end of the discussion , I also make my self convinced that student should has the right to choose the subject, they are going to study. As they are well versed about their grips, and sufficient aged to decide their carrier , they will definitely make their way to get success.

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    Mohit

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    September 23, 2021 at 7:39 AM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: TWO DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY: ART

    The world is a group of Culture and the cultures, in its nucleus , are having ‘Art’ so the development of world is basically the development of ‘Art’. Needless to mention that at present, contracting the ‘Art’ amongst the wide population has now become a subject which require pondering.

    <font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>There would be no exaggerate , if we say that the ‘Art’ is the mother of the culture. It not only carve the culture but also nurture it. All the cultures are nothing else but a </font>developed<font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> shape of ‘Art’ only. For Example , </font>Indian<font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> culture is totally a bunch of various ‘Arts’ like , how to live , how to rule, how to marry , how to judge, and so on. By observing the </font>Indian<font face=”inherit” style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> culture we can easily say that the culture is a evolved phase of ‘Art’ only.</font>

    But as the ‘Art’ has been evolved into a culture therefore the main stream of population do not consider it as a part of their life style. In a hasty life, if the ‘Art’ can be made a part of livelihood , then it would be more captivated. For example ‘Chanting of Mantra’ is an ‘Art’ and is an essential part of various occasions, which, in return, generate the money to the enchanter, and hence this Art is famous amongst the people . So adding the art with the livelihood can make them as popular as other things like Science and Sports .

    In conclusion , the Art is an inevitable part of the culture , this is the Art who played an important role in our evolution and has made us a disciplined society and I strongly recommend the penetration of the Art into peoples’ livelihood . By adopting this method, we may resurrect the Art .

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    Mohit

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    September 17, 2021 at 8:58 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- OPINION ESSAY (BUSINESS)

    The expansion of super markets , may outweigh the tenuous local community business. Many people believe that the big malls are a short of death warrant of street shopkeeper. I strongly disagree with the statement.

    Super market is a short of whole sale market , which were even existed before. Since beginning, people have propensity to buy from the whole sale market, which are now appeared as super market. For example people used to prepare the list of the wanted ware and then go to the whole sale market and then purchased the goods from there. Yes, the small purchasing are used to be done from the local market. So the existence of supermarket will not do any harm to local business community.

    Secondly, local business market community , has a strong relationship with the customer, and many of the customer who are in want of credit , purchase the goods from them only. For example , many of the local customer finish their salary in the first 10 days of the month only, and after word in any need of things they always rely on credits which, of course can be lended by the local shopkeeper and that too on the basis of face value only, therefore it will be very hard to root out the local business community.

    Finally , the challenge, facing by the local business community from Supermarket is not a new one. based on their accessibility to the local customer and their relationship with the customer will not let them forsake from the market.

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    Mohit

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    September 13, 2021 at 9:10 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – International Sports Events

    There are in India people are discussing about the hosting of international sports. many people are in favor of organizing the International Sport while the others are opposing the event.

    conducting international level of sports at our country is a matter of pride . On one hand it increases the reputation of the country at international level and on other hand it gives lot of opportunity to create employment. Many people like , event organizer gets employment. The fans of the player also visit the country for boosting the morel of their player and visit the many parts of the country as well. For example the Olympic game were played on our land in 1972 which our country managed very well. This not only gave us a new identity but due to the games , millions of foreigner had visited and thus dramatically our tourism industries was grown upto the maximum. There for the international games should be hosted in the country.

    On other side , the poor county like ours , waste lot of money in organizing the games. The big amount of money is spends in the sports , can be fulfill the need of food of thousands of people for a week ,if get used for the welfare of poor instead. The funding of many stopped projects ( pending in want of money ) can be induced. For example “Asian games” played in 2020, had cost Rs 20000 Crore while, by using this large amount of money, for public welfare 50 hospital, 100 school and 1000 house could have been build. The figures as mentioned above are self explanatory for using the money in Public welfare instead of organizing international events.

    As for as my opinion is concerned , I strongly agree to hosting big events like International game in the country as the same not only polished the image of the country but also caused the inflow of foreign currency. By inviting the big events we may boost our economy which in result will give the employment of thousand.

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    Mohit

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    September 17, 2021 at 9:15 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- OPINION ESSAY (BUSINESS)

    okay thank you Sir,

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