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Feedback: Need to work on thought process to work on the relevant information, focus on more sentence types as found less and related words to make an impact, no example found as well.
Band: 2.5/6
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Feedback: Very well executed & god use of related words, rest try to avoid silliest grammatical error: “Cultural and social intermixing occurs” & use few more linking words in 2nd para such as: even though, however, while, firstly etc.
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Feedback: Good approach, content is acceptable, but introduction & 2nd para need to be improved & described in a precise way, words are less than 250..
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Feedback: Lot of grammatical errors & sentence formation errors found, Kindly work on them, no proper execution found neither content is up to the mark.
Band: 1.5/6
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Feedback: Kindly work on the approach & requirement of letter, didn’t seem as a letter format.
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Feedback: Really need to work on the requirement & the parameters as instead approaching bullet points irrelevant information was exaggerated till 229 words as it should be up to 280 max. Sentence formation is not up to the mark as found in introduction.
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Feedback: Really need to work on the requirement of bullet points & sentence formation along with grammatical errors: “so we all family members”, “most of our guest were travelling”, “a travel company which provide”
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Feedback: Good effort to justify all three bullet points. Need to avoid grammatical errors: “I was completed”, “from last 2 years.”
& Cover at least 150 words & work on the requirement of task 1.Band: 1/3
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Feedback: Really need to work on the format of task 1 & structure.
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Feedback: Good effort to justify all three bullet points. Need to avoid grammatical errors: “I have recently worked in Radison Hotel for the
past 5 years”,
& Cover at least 150 words.
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Feedback: Very well executed, justify all three bullet points with relevant information. Need to avoid grammatical errors: “I am writing to you express”, “My duties includes”, “from last six months”
& Unnecessary spelling errors (fulfill).
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Feedback: Very well executed & approached with good use of vocabularies, just try to cover and discuss the topic up to 280 words only. Rest is fine. keep it up.
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Feedback: Very well executed but information exaggerated a lot as it should be covered in max up to 280o words, also unnecessarily spelling error “necessitates ” found, no relevant example found as the one is used seems memorized & also work on word repetition “Overpopulation”.
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Feedback: Need to work on thought process as the there is no relevant information found, no example, sentence formation is also not up to the mark that caused grammatical error “children playing outdoor games get to learn a
lot of things” children playing outdoor games get to learn a
lot of things, & also use more complex sentences instead limited structures.
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Feedback: Need to work on sentence formation, linking words, & unnecessary Grammatical errors such as: “some people claims”, “Those kind of criminals kills”, “these kind of criminals”,
no example found.
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Feedback: Simple language is used with limited sentence types however the content is good but execution got failed, few Grammatical errors found such as:
“some of them believes” , “who are earning well but still engage”, “The country will be developed if number of people will be well educated and they would have enough earnings to fulfill their basic needs.”
Need to work on these things rigorously.
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Feedback: Need to work on cohesive device, sentence formation, Grammatical range as less you use of sentence types found without any relevant example used & also work on word limit as it’s 227 words only instead 250+.
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Feedback: Very well executed information, approached both the points, need to work on few more impactful vocabularies & linking words, & also work on sentence formation “so that person who had committed the crime and others should learn that these heinous acts will make them suffer dreadfully that discourages them from doing so”, and also work on word limit.
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Feedback: Content is good but execution got failed as lot of formation errors & unnecessary grammatical errors found with no relevance shared as an example. Need to work on this also work on word limit as well as it should not go 280+.
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Feedback: Approach is acceptable, need to work on execution, sentence formation, few more linking words, impactful vocabularies and also avoid unnecessary spelling errors also work on word limit as well as it should not go 280+.
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Feedback: Really need to work on grammatical range & grammatical accuracy as lot of grammatical errors & less use of sentence types found. also work on word limit as well as it should not go 280+.
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and also try to avoid such examples, as it’ll be marked as memorized from the article.
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Feedback: Approach is good, content is also expectable, try to avoid repetition of information as found in 1st para 2nd line & 2nd para 1st line about the “Offenders” rest in intro “Crimes of all sorts are on the rise” this needs to be improved. Need to work on word limit, sentence formation, & few more impactful vocabularies.
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Feedback: Content is good with good use of related words but need to work on approach as both the points “Some & Others” couldn’t be seen mentioned rest use few more linking words to make an impact.
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Feedback: Well tried, Approach is good, need to work on sentence formation, sentence types, & impactful related words.
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Feedback: The approach is good, focused on every information required. Need to work on introduction/ overview and also work on more sentence types as found few repetition.
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Feedback: Well executed, information was used categorically, Need to work on related words to justify the overall trend.
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Feedback: Need to work on tenses as required to explain these information mentioned in the tables also work on specific feature.
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Feedback: Content is acceptable but execution got failed due to inappropriate explanation. Need to work on related words & more sentence types.
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Feedback: well attempt, but due to Grammatical errors found in first line & seconds paragraph as well regarding singular/plural, caused a lot.
Band: 1.5/3
