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    Rekha

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    December 17, 2021 at 7:50 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2: Advantages and disadvantages

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    Nowadays social media is playing a significant role that overweighs face-to-face interactions, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of using social media by replacing personal interactions and provide a logical conclusion.

    The two main advantages of social media are the easy form of exchanging information and ideas along with the ability to communicate in real-time. Firstly, through social media, it would make to communicate any information with ease of sitting at home and also it would help in the situations where things cannot be conveyed directly and also, help people who are hesitant to speak especially for introverts. This way, they can easily eliminate the fear of talking to people directly with direct in-person communication. Secondly, this would allow real-time communication through various networks and communities instantaneously. For instance, if a person wants to communicate emergency information, they do not have to wait until they meet directly rather, they can communicate through social media so the message can be conveyed without any delay.

    However, social media does have some major disadvantages such as the increase in miscommunication and scope for building personal interactions and relationships. If the communication is done via social media such as like text or phone calls, there is a high chance of miscommunication if things are not explained in detail. For example, a husband and wife who lived in 2 different states have always communicated through texts and their intentions were not conveyed or expressed their feelings which created a lot of misunderstanding between them. Furthermore, this doesn’t allow in developing the personal relationship between friends, family, and colleagues. Face-to-face interactions would help in understanding each other’s thoughts and body language which will develop the scope of understanding each other and eradicate miscommunication. For these reasons, face-to-face interactions are more important than the flexibility of communication and exchanging information.

    To conclude, although social media has certain advantages like real-time communication and ease in exchanging thoughts, it has negative impacts such as the increase in miscommunication and lack of building personal conversations. Hence, I believe that these disadvantages overweigh the advantages.

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    Rekha

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    December 17, 2021 at 7:44 AM in reply to: Letter writing (noise from a restaurant)

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    Rekha

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    December 17, 2021 at 7:42 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2: Advantages and disadvantages

    Nowadays social media is playing a significant role that overweighs face-to-face interactions, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of using social media by replacing personal interactions and provide a logical conclusion.

    The two main advantages of social media are the easy form of exchanging information and ideas along with the ability to communicate in real-time. Firstly, through social media, it would make to communicate any information with ease of sitting at home and also it would help in the situations where things cannot be conveyed directly and also, help people who are hesitant to speak especially for introverts. This way, they can easily eliminate the fear of talking to people directly with direct in-person communication. Secondly, this would allow real-time communication through various networks and communities instantaneously. For instance, if a person wants to communicate emergency information, they do not have to wait until they meet directly rather, they can communicate through social media so the message can be conveyed without any delay.

    However, social media does have some major disadvantages such as the increase in miscommunication and scope for building personal interactions and relationships. If the communication is done via social media such as like text or phone calls, there is a high chance of miscommunication if things are not explained in detail. For example, a husband and wife who lived in 2 different states have always communicated through texts and their intentions were not conveyed or expressed their feelings which created a lot of misunderstanding between them. Furthermore, this doesn’t allow in developing the personal relationship between friends, family, and colleagues. Face-to-face interactions would help in understanding each other’s thoughts and body language which will develop the scope of understanding each other and eradicate miscommunication. For these reasons, face-to-face interactions are more important than the flexibility of communication and exchanging information.

    To conclude, although social media has certain advantages like real-time communication and ease in exchanging thoughts, it has negative impacts such as the increase in miscommunication and lack of building personal conversations. Hence, I believe that these disadvantages overweigh the advantages.

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    Rekha

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    December 14, 2021 at 6:47 AM in reply to: Task 2 (Problem/solution essay) : Traffic congestion

    Traffic congestion is one of the pressing issues in many urban cities around the world. Since everyone uses the transport system in everyday life to reach the destination on time, it is essential to manage the traffic. In this essay, we will go through the various reasons for the traffic congestion and possible solutions to eradicate the problem.

    To begin, various reasons might cause the traffic congestion, and the situation is not limited to slower speeds, increase vehicle queues, and longer trip times. Undoubtedly, one of the primary reasons is that people do not follow the traffic rules and regulations. As everyone tries to reach their destination without stopping at the stop signs and red signals which would result in traffic congestion and would not let any vehicle move towards any direction. Additionally, when traffic signals are not working and lack of appropriate signs especially at schooling and housing areas will also develop a similar situation. For example, there was a situation in Singapore in 2008, where a traffic signal was not working, and everyone was moving in their direction which resulted in the traffic jam and took more than 6 hours to clear it which also led 2 people to die as they were trying to commute to hospital in an emergency condition.

    However, there are solutions to eradicate this situation such as by enforcing strict rules and regulations by government bodies along with the periodic examination of the transport system of the city. People tend to be lenient when there are no consequences, by incurring tickets and fines whenever they do not follow the regulations. For example, the person will be cautious to repeat a second time whenever a person crosses the red signal or didn’t stop at the red sign. In addition, the government needs to set up a department that is focused to examine the traffic systems to ensure all the traffic signals and systems are working appropriately. In Japan, they have improved their entire traffic system and have noticed the reduction of traffic congestion from 48% to 5% in five years.

    To conclude, by enforcing proper regulations and strategies by government to the traffic system we can eliminate all the struggles that an individual in facing on roads.

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    Rekha

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    December 14, 2021 at 6:10 AM in reply to: Agree/Disagree (Reward or Punishment)

    In the competitive world, the education system has changed immensely, and the way children are targeted to achieve scores. There are better ways such as encouraging with rewards for better performance rather than enforcing and punishing them. In the below essay, we will discuss rewarding a student as a better way to encourage them to gain good scores and enhance their interest in hard work.

    To begin with, a person can achieve anything when there is a proper support system that encourages and motivates them to achieve the goals. Especially, during schooling, children need someone who always supports them to study more to achieve good scores and encourage them with rewards. For example, setting up targets to get good scores and presenting gifts as they achieve would result in a noticeable improvement on overall performance and growth in their interest to work hard more to get the gifts. There was a survey conducted on 50 students who are 8th grade, children who were rewarded has shown significant improvement in their excellence in their subjects when compared to other students.

    Whereas, when students get punished since they didn’t achieve the desired scores will discourage them furthermore. Abusing and insulting students in front of other peers or punishing them will demotivate and mentally weaken them. For example, there was a student in my class who was always been shamed for getting less scores by lecturers who felt heartbroken and committed suicide. Many children are mentally weak and cannot handle punishments which would result in the worst consequences. Hence, there are better ways to help students get more scores rather than enforcing.

    To conclude, it is always recommended to encourage children to achieve good ranks by rewarding them and supporting them in all the possible ways such as providing gifts, extra tuition classes, explaining them by one-on-one conversation rather than punishing them which has no benefit.

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    Rekha

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    December 14, 2021 at 5:26 AM in reply to: Task 2 : (discuss both views- Art )

    Arts is a wide range of human activity that withholds the integrity and culture of a nation. Some argue children need to be inculcated with art sessions from an early age whereas others think that would be a wastage of time and wouldn’t help with career. In the essay below, I will discuss both views as well as provide my view on why I think it is important for children to attend art classes during schooling.

    Many people assume that encouraging kids to attend art class will distract their focus on education. Especially, when a child allocates time on extracurricular activities such as dancing, painting classes, and learning musical instruments which requires them to take some time out of their daily schedule. Thus, many parents think it would be diverting their focus from core subjects and preparation time towards these art classes which will result in fewer scores. To add, there was a friend of mine who used to score 75% in every exam has dropped his score to 60% after initiating dance classes.

    However, some parents encourage their kids to attend the art classes at their school as they believe that their children would manage both education and extra-curricular activities. They believe that art sessions will enhance their mood, creativity, and works as stress busters from their hectic academic schedule. Furthermore, not every kid would be talented on the same subject, allowing them to explore various activities will allow finding out their strengths as well as the culture can be carried forwarded. For example, there was a survey conducted by Harvard University among 100 students who are at age of 10, children who were encouraged on their interest’s performance rate in their academics improved by 35% when compared to ones that were forced to study.

    In conclusion, it is essential to have kids allocate some limited time on arts along with their basic education which will allow them to develop their creativity and gain knowledge on arts which will be given to future generations.

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    Rekha

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    December 13, 2021 at 10:04 AM in reply to: Task 2 (discuss both views)- Newspaper

    Some argue that reading newspaper is the most proficient way to learn the latest news and current affairs while others lean towards other media such as digital news, TV, and social media to hear the news. In this essay, I will discuss both views as well as why I think learning news through other media is better which is due to its accessibility.

    Newspapers represent the authentic way of presenting the latest news around the city and country. In addition, there are a lot of people involved who are experts who do research and validate the information before printing it. For example, information that’s available in social media or digital news doesn’t go through any process of authenticating the information which makes it uncertain for anyone to rely on that information. Whereas any newspaper company goes through the procedure which includes highlights, review draft, validation of the information, and language prior to printing it.

    On the other hand, digital media or social media made the current news instantly available throughout the world. Furthermore, a person need not wait to hear the latest news till the next day rather it is available immediately and with the comfort of home. Since everyone accesses the internet via mobile phones and laptops which are been heavily used throughout the day makes the news available instantly through the news feed, notifications, or by various applications. Not only social media but also the newspapers are digitally available which eliminates the time restriction to read the news and carry the newspaper.

    To conclude, due to the digital transformation around the world newspaper make it hard due to the less accessibility. So, I would prefer getting the news through social media due to its instantaneous availability and being available 24*7 without restrictions.

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    Rekha

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    December 12, 2021 at 7:36 AM in reply to: Task-1 (Letter writing) : Semi-formal letter to landlord

    Dear Mr. Sam,

    I am writing this letter to inform you and to seek your immediate attention about the damage to the house due to the snowstorm last night. Through which the electrical wires are damaged and also need to fix a couple of bedroom windows.

    Due to the heavy gust of winds with more than 20 mph and the heavy snow, electric lines outside the house are misplaced which is causing a power outage and I could see some sparks coming out of it. Since it is an old house not only power connections but also two of the windows are badly damaged through which the wind is flowing into the bedrooms.

    I request you to can immediate action and fix it as soon as possible because we are in the middle of the winter. It’s hard to maintain the room temperature as chilly winds are leaking into the room which would cause health issues and hard to stay for a longer time for us and especially my 2-year old son. Additionally, displacement of electrical wires may cause potential power outages which would make the situation worse.

    Therefore, please inform the electrician and carpenter to come and fix both the issues. I think they can take a look and suggest the right solutions to fix the issue.

    I hope you would respond soon and take prompt action.

    Yours faithfully,

    Renu

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    Rekha

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    December 8, 2021 at 7:56 AM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

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    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my iPhone worth 1300 USD dollars during my visit to Japan. Glad that I bought the travel insurance from your company with Insurance id #:123456 bought on 11/15/21 which I hope would help me recover the lost phone.

    To be specific, I lost my iPhone 13 pro max which I have bought just 10 days before my departure to Japan. The capacity of the phone is 128 GB and the color is Sierra blue color and also, I have protected it very well with an expensive all cover case worth $100 to protect from damages that might occur during drop-offs but I have not expected that I would lose it.

    Furthermore, I exactly don’t know when I lost the phone but I have seen it the last time while I was purchasing the train ticket after I was landed in Japan. After purchasing the ticket, I have settled down on the train with all bags but I didn’t find the phone in my pocket and that’s when I realized I lost it.

    As per the terms of the insurance, mobile devices are under coverage. So, I would kindly request you mail me the check of 1350 for my phone or replace it with a brand new phone with the same memory capacity.
    I look forward to receiving your response.

    Yours faithfully,

    Sam Pete

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    Rekha

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    December 8, 2021 at 7:31 AM in reply to: Task1 (Letter writing) : Complaint to retailer

    Dear Amazon,

    I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that the item I have ordered through your website arrived with broken pieces on the box which was arrived yesterday.

    I have ordered an iPhone 13 with 128GB through amazon.com on 12/11/21 to present it to my dad’s birthday. I was very excited when I ordered the product, but it was very depressing as all my plans have changed as the phone arrived with the broken screen and tiny glass pieces all over the box.

    Hence, I would like to request a full refund as per your policy and the product was damaged at the time of arrival. Therefore, I want the refund to be processed and sent to the original payment method which is visa credit card.

    In addition, can you please provide me the instructions to return the damaged product as you have multiple options such as pick-up, drop-off at UPS, or at FedEx store. At least if you can send the return shipping label to my registered email address sam@gmail.com, that will allow me to pack the product in the box and have it ready based on your further instructions.

    I look forward to receiving your response.

    Yours sincerely,

    Sam Peter

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    Rekha

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    December 7, 2021 at 10:15 PM in reply to: Letter writing (noise from a restaurant)

    Dear Manager,

    I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the way your restaurant is playing music and the discomfort as a result of it. Through this, it is causing a lot of inconvenience and disturbance to me and my family along with the surrounding neighborhood.

    I would like to inform you that there is a lot of noise pollution occurring from your restaurant throughout the day and especially during the evenings and nights. Due to this, it is causing a lot of disturbance to me during my working hours not only me but also my kids who do study and prepare for their examinations are unable to focus. Additionally, I have my elderly parents at home who are suffering from heart diseases which are impacting their health.

    As a result, this is causing a lot of trouble to my family and also other neighbors, I request you to take immediate action to the persistence of the issue so that it would help everyone. I kindly request you and your staff to reduce the noise by keeping the volume under control and adding soundproof walls.

    If this issue continues, I want to warn you that I will be reporting to the local community office and to the police about the inconvenience which might get your restaurant closed due to the impact on the health and personal life of our surroundings. I am letting you know ahead so that you’re aware of the consequences if you do not take appropriate actions to control and maintain the sound as per the local ordinance that is less than 90 decibels.

    I hope you would take proper and necessary steps to resolve this issue as soon as possible to control further actions.

    Yours sincerely,

    Ram

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    Rekha

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    December 6, 2021 at 10:02 PM in reply to: Letter writing (Assessment)

    Dear Manager,

    I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the way your restaurant is playing music and the sounds out of it. This is causing a lot of inconvenience and disturbance to me and my family along with the surrounding neighborhood.

    I would like to inform you that there is a lot of noise pollution occurring from your restaurant throughout the day and especially during the evenings and nights. Due to this, it is causing a lot of disturbance to me during my working hours, not only me but also have kids who do study for their examinations and also elderly parents with heart diseases.

    Since this is causing a lot of trouble to my family and also other neighbors, I request you to take immediate action to the persistence of the issue so that would help everyone. I kindly request you and your staff to reduce and keep the volume under control and add soundproof walls.

    If this issue continues, I want to warn you that I will be reporting to the local community office and the police station about the inconvenience and getting the restaurant closed due to the impact on the health and personal life of our surroundings. So, I want you to be aware of the next actions if you do not control and maintain the sound as per local regulations which is less than 90 decibels as per the local audience.

    I hope you would take proper and necessary actions to resolve this issue as soon as possible to control further actions.

    Yours sincerely,
    Ram

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      Rekha

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      December 8, 2021 at 7:11 AM in reply to: Letter writing (Assessment)

      Dear Mr. Mayor,

      I am a resident of the Eagan suburb which is located under your ordinance, and I am writing this letter to request you to build a children’s park in the Eagan Area.

      As you’re already aware that there is a lot of growth in the area and the total population has increased tremendously in the past 5 years which has reflected the growth in the total number of children that study in Eagan High School from 100 to 450 in these years. There is no recreation area, picnic spots, or at least a children’s park in the community. I would like you to request to consider building one in the next year.

      Since most of the children, spend most of the day studying they would need a recreation area to relax and play with the children of their age from the neighborhood. As of today, there is no interaction among the children even though they are neighbors.

      Indeed, this would directly impact the physical and mental growth of the kids. This would provide an opportunity to develop and improve social, interpersonal, and communication skills as they interact more with children of their age.

      Not only for the kids this would also improve the local amenities and the development of the neighborhood. I hope you would consider my request and plan for a park in our community that will provide children an opportunity to get out of their routine.

      Yours sincerely,

      Sam Pete

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    Rekha

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    December 5, 2021 at 9:29 AM in reply to: Task1 (Letter writing) : Job for friend

    Dear Sam,

    It’s been more than 2 years since we met, and I really miss you and the time we spent together in Germany for more than 3 years during the under-graduation college days When we spoke last time, I remember you have mentioned that you are interested in applying for jobs in India related to your stream and I think I have found one for you. I have included all the details in this letter so you could decide on whether you would be interested to apply for it.

    This position is in a local company called “GA motors” which is located 5 miles from where I live and the role that was posted was titled “Business Analyst”. This role involves you creating various documentation such as business, functional and technical requirements, acting as a liaison between the business and IT, setting up meetings, preparing meeting notes and most of the work involves the usage of a computer.

    When I read the job description, I felt this would suit you well based on your major at the college. Not only about the educational background but also your communication skills, abilities to understand the business needs, writing skills, and negotiation skills would definitely be an advantage and required skills for this role. Additionally, your grasp of the English language would make your job easy and well-suitable.

    I have read about this local newspaper, but I was able to find the online application on their website for you and you should be able to apply for it through their online site and go to the careers and select the job id-254 for this specific role. If you find that any difficulty, you can also try to find it on the LinkedIn site if you could search through the title and company name.
    I hope all these details would help you to apply for this position and feel free to ask any questions or if you need more information on it.

    Your’s lovingly,

    Renu

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    Rekha

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    November 25, 2021 at 8:06 AM in reply to: Essay advantages and disadvantages ( Children )

    In the last two decades, most of the younger generations and newly wedded couples are not willing to have kids and are delaying the kid’s planning. This accompanies both merits and drawbacks by having the kids at the elderly age. The below essay provides supportive information on both sides of the view.

    Most importantly, for any individual, before they plan the children they need to be financially, emotionally, physically, and mentally be ready for it. In particular, if a person is not financially independent and doesn’t have enough savings then they would be struggling to provide all the necessities to the newly born kid and has to go through so much mental pressure to provide them. Furthermore, there would be a lot of expenses when a baby is born, to support the child in all the ways an individual needs to think about the financial settlement before planning kids. Along with that, even before having kids, a newly married couple has to spend some time for themselves to understand each other and develop the connection between them. This would allow them to learn, explore and accomplish the goals that both of them would like to achieve before taking up the responsibilities. Because once they have the kids, it would be difficult to travel for a longer time and also to perform any adventurous sports.

    Despite the advantages, some drawbacks are associated with the delay of having children. As a woman gets older there would be more fertility issues and in the development of the egg. To explain, fertility in women is high at the age of 18 to 24 and if a couple is planning later than that, then they need to prepare themselves for the incurred complications. In fact, in recent times the abortion rates in every country have increased at least by 30% when compared to 10 years ago and also, 20% of the babies are born with health issues. Not only the fertilization problems but only this increases the generation gaps between family members. In the early days, parents have to have children in their early 20’s so by the time the children are yet their age of marriage they would be in their 50’s, and they can support them in all the ways. But now, when a couple is having their kids in their late 30’s by the time their kids are getting married, they are in their late 60’s where parents would not be physically and mentally fit to support their children in any way.

    To conclude, even though there are some pros and cons in having kids in later life. I think the advantages overweigh the cons, every individual needs to be completely prepared in all the ways before planning children because that is when they could take proper care of children both emotionally and financially.

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    Rekha

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    November 24, 2021 at 4:59 AM in reply to: Letter- Building Company

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    Dear Manager,
    This letter is with reference to the new construction site that’s being developed in Sriram Nagar. I am one of the residents that reside 0.2 miles from your construction site and I want to discuss a few things with relation to the construction plan.

    Firstly, I would congratulate you on the inauguration of your new construction plan and I happened to go through the post that was published last Sunday in the local newspaper “Times India” where you have announced it. Even though the post was published on the bottom of Page 8, you guys made the post very attractive which caught my attention to read the details.

    Most importantly, the building plan and the community structure were quite impressive in the publication which explains all the world-class amenities that you are planning to provide such as a swimming pool, fitness center, aerobics center, coffee shop, 24×7 security system. The water recycling system was so notable that made me write a letter to you to appreciate the effort of reusing the water.
    However, I want to ensure that you have planned well on the sewage system because if the pipelines are not well built, then the water would flow towards the low-level areas. I am concerned about it as my house is built in that area around 10 years ago. Not only the sewage system but also I would like to know the number of floors that you’re planning to build because it was not mentioned in the article, as my parents are diabetic and sit outside my home to get the natural light as per doctor’s advice. If you are planning to construct a large apartment which is more than 5 floors that would be a problem for me and my family. Since there is some missing information that was posted last week. Please publish a new post in the newspaper next week with entire the details or please reply back to my letter.

    I hope you can understand the concerns I have with regards to the large construction that’s happening very close to my residence.

    Your’s faithfully,

    Sam

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    Rekha

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    November 24, 2021 at 4:53 AM in reply to: Task 2 : GM foods (agree/disagree)

    The world population is tremendously increasing which is arousing the issue of how to feed all the people, there is a lot of debate between government officials and local people on who is responsible to ensure everyone has enough food to consume. Few people debate that it is GM foods organization responsibility to provide the best solution in order to fix the problem. Whereas, the essay below disagrees with the statement of having one single organization come up with a plan that affects the entire world.

    Undoubtedly, one single company called “GM foods” cannot fix the problem of feeding the world population. It definitely needs the government’s involvement and has to work with each other. Government has to propose and implement the plans which help in generating more food and enhancing the agricultural methods. In fact, the government has to come up with schemes that encourage farming such as providing necessary loans with low-interest rates and equipment that would develop the make the farming easy and knowledge on the latest cultivation methodologies to the farmers. For example, the Vietnam government has promoted cultivation by giving zero percent interest loans to all the framers in their country and they have noticed significant growth in cultivation from 25% to 62% within 5 years. Not only one single country but every country has to develop similar programs so that there would be more cultivation of food which in turn provides enough food to all the people with the growing population.

    Clearly, we need to build similar companies like GM foods that could help in resolving the issue. If we are dependent on a single company then we would be more dependent and if that company is facing some hardship in the transportation of goods or with financial crisis then the entire population of the country would suffer from lack of food. Hence, if we have multiple companies that produce and deliver food then we would not be dependent on a company and people can have more reliable options to receive the food. Therefore, more industries that supply food materials need to be developed all over the world.

    To conclude, I would definitely disagree with expecting GM foods to provide the most feasible solution. It’s the responsibility of both the food companies and government to work and co-ordinate with each other to resolve a problem like this which would impact the entire world.

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    Rekha

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    November 19, 2021 at 7:49 AM in reply to: Problem solution essay (Internet)

    Due to modernization and technological development in the world, the availability of the internet has made it extremely easy the way data is being exchanged and utilized. Whereas, along with the benefits it came up with significant risks. The below paragraphs provide evidence of the problems and solutions associated with information sharing over the internet.

    First of all, due to the vast amount of data that are available in the internet, it is increasing the hacking numbers per day and cyber threats. For example, a few months ago there was a major cyber-attack on the government website that exposed all the military information of the country. Not only the government official websites but also many other commercial and technological companies are encountering this issue. Along with that, due to too much availability of information over internet causes the risk where a child can access potential harmful sites. One of the examples of such harmful sites would be porn websites where children can easily register and acknowledge their age. This would definitely affect their thoughts, development, future, and eventually to society.

    There are some solutions to the problems discussed in the above paragraph by taking necessary precautionary measures. Government and organizations need to have a strong IT security system that could review the architecture and protect their internal data such as by using strong passwords, encrypting data. In addition, the government needs to pass necessary cyber security rules and regulations that would tighten these cyber-criminal attacks. Furthermore, it is important for parents to ensure that kids are not accessing porn sites and track their usage and the websites being used.

    To conclude, as there are both pros and cons for every development that’s happening in the modern world, it is an individual’s responsibility to use it ethically. However, by following the right guidelines and appropriate actions it would be a powerful tool for everyone to use.

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    Rekha

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    November 18, 2021 at 7:05 AM in reply to: Opinion Essay [Customer Reviews]

    With the recent technological advancements, everyone is leaning towards buying products online based on the client’s feedback. I strongly agree with the above statement and think that customer evaluation plays a prominent role in the products that are purchased through the internet.

    First of all, I truly believe that consumer’s comments would make an online purchaser’s life easy to make decision. As it provides the information that the buyer is looking for is readily available through the reviews as it contains one’s opinion on the product which explains whether the product has met their expectation or not, details on the quality, and the rating given to a product. This would not only expose one’s feedback but also the consumer would get all the required information such as the quality, durability, information on material, cost comparisons which would finally make it easy to make the decision. Furthermore, making online purchases would save a lot of travel time, energy, cost, and within the comfort of home.

    In contrast, if a person plans to buy the product in-store that would accompany a lot of hassle in various ways. For example, the person would need to travel to the store to buy the product which includes effort, cost, and time. Not only but also if they change their mind or opinion returning the product would be difficult. Whereas, online shopping would eliminate the disappointment of the product as the reviews already provided some idea on the expectation of the product. In addition, return requests are easy and the purchaser can do the comparison of the same product on various sites based on the shopper’s comments.

    To conclude, I would encourage people to make an online purchase through the analysis done by the previous consumers. As the data provided under the review session delivers all the data that a purchaser is looking to buy a product.

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    Rekha

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    November 18, 2021 at 6:14 AM in reply to: Letter to a neighbour

    Hi Sam,

    Glad we were able to meet last weekend and had a great time outdoors before winter hits. I really appreciate you for offering support to take care of my pet while I am away.

    As I have already informed you, I would be away for a week and need your help in feeding my dog with food and water every day. Additionally, I want you to pick up a package that would be delivered in two days.

    Mostly, I will be reachable through my mobile number if in case it is not available you can reach out on my husband’s number. If there is any emergency or need immediate attention, please call my brother at 612-222-8888 who lives 5 miles from our community.

    Thanks again for all the help and support as you always do. Once I am back from the trip, let’s plan to go shopping as I want to buy your desired gift as a token of appreciation from my end.

    Yours lovingly,

    Red

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    Rekha

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    November 18, 2021 at 5:48 AM in reply to: Letter – [Correcting Information]

    Dear Editor,

    I am writing this letter with regards to the article, I have recently had a chance to read that was published in your Times India multi-national magazine on September 10th,2021. I have recently had a chance to read the article that explained the Tourism in the city “Tana” and detailed explanation of the preparation that’s required. I strongly oppose the content that refereed the location is not safe at any time of the day.

    To begin with, I would kindly request you to update the information that was printed on the article with accurate information. As everyone in the city is well aware that Tana is one of the cities with the highest security measures and safety that are followed in the state. I am not sure where you have received the wrong information, but I argue you to update in next month’s edition.

    Not only that your newspaper is the medium to gain knowledge and provide information but also it is very important to provide the facts and truth to the public about any kind of data that is being produced to the people. In addition, it would impact make a huge impact on the policies that are being implemented in the city as well as spreading out the inaccurate information that would impact the tourism, business, and opinions so it is essential for you to update the old content of the article with the update accurate information.

    I will look forward to the upcoming magazine seeing the same subject with the revised version.

    Yours sincerely,

    Sam

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    Rekha

    Member
    November 11, 2021 at 8:16 AM in reply to: Task 2 (discuss both views)- Protecting environment

    Many people debate on whether the government bodies or an individual be withholding the responsibility to protect nature. I strongly believe that every individual in society should be respectful and preserve the resources in order to protect the nature as government solely cannot implement the change.

    The administration should be responsible to pass the rules to safeguard the nature habitat. Government leaders should allow citizens to enroll in the schemes to plant 10,000 trees per year. For example, in 2006, in the New Zealand survey, they have implemented a similar program to reduce pollution and protect the ecosystem and within 2 years of continuous effort, they have seen a 10% of reduction of air pollution in their environment. In addition to that, the ministry of environmental sciences and pollution control board by enforcing all the vehicles to pass the pollution control check every year that checks the emission of carbon monoxide gas emission from automobiles.

    Every individual in society owes to mother nature by being responsible for the usage of natural resources. There are various methods to support the government in protecting the atmosphere by not cutting down trees for personal and commercial usages and planting trees in their home and community surroundings. Protection of the environment cannot be implemented solely by the rulers there is also equal responsibility on every person. Everyone has to follow the necessary pollution checks as enforced by the government parties and play their responsible part to the society.

    To conclude, I believe every individual has to support government administration to safeguard nature and also play the responsible citizen role in order to protect their surroundings.

    @falak – Please review

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    Rekha

    Member
    December 7, 2021 at 10:20 PM in reply to: Letter writing (Assessment)

    Hi Falak- Yes, I posted on the wrong page.. I have posted that in the correct page

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