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    November 27, 2021 at 6:43 PM in reply to: Formal Letter of Apology – GT

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to apologise to you for the mistake done by me in the workplace and its consequences.

    I feel deeply regretful and would like to request an apology from you for the loss of a potential client due to a lack of proper project tracking.

    I firmly believe that it is not a professional ethic to miss a timeline, however; due to medical constraints, I could not organize the events in a chronological manner which lead to the occurrence of this situation.

    I take responsibility for this mistake. Nevertheless, I promise that I would not reiterate this event even under critical circumstances by frequent follow up of our project deadlines. Furthermore, I have installed software that notifies our team about project deadlines in case I were to miss them in future.

    I am sorry for the inconvenience caused by me to the organization and I hope you would understand my situation.

    Yours sincerely

    Hari Kiran

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    November 27, 2021 at 3:39 PM in reply to: Task 2 (discuss both views)- Protecting environment

    The environment has been deteriorating due to the negligence of mankind. While some argue that the onus lies on government, others believe that it can be only protected when each individual feels it as a moral responsibility. This essay will argue both views in depth and finally share the logical opinion.

    On one hand, Government has the obligation to protect the environment since it has specific departments allocated to safeguard various realms of the environment. A good illustration of this is: Municipal department has the right to demolish buildings if the buildings were to be constructed by encroaching ponds and forestry. However, if the government abandons their moral duty, the common people have a lesser role to play to safeguard the environment. Therefore, the government should ensure strict implementation of guidelines in place.

    On the other hand, even if the government were to take a plethora of measures to protect nature, it cannot be maintained in the long run to the negligence of human activities. For instance, despite having waste garbage bins in the vicinity of restaurants, hardly do people throw refuse in them. As a result, the waste goes into the landfill and has detrimental effects for generations to come. Thus, the prevention of destructive measures by every individual is the first step to saving our mother nature.

    Taking both views into consideration, although it is the governments’ duty to protect mother nature, protecting the environment can only be achieved when each individual can act diligently. Therefore, the initiation from the public would only be a preferred alternative.

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    November 25, 2021 at 8:32 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    The enhancement of tourism leads to the dominance of the English language globally. According to some sections of people, the English language shall only be the means of communication. This essay will present a couple of advantages and disadvantages when only one language is spoken around the world.

    First and foremost, the availability of only a single language bestows us with a couple of advantages. Importantly, The presence of a single language enhances harmony and growth. Globally, if we were to have only a single language, this would lead to a diminished barrier to communication. As a result, there would be lesser discrimination across people owing to lesser cultural differences. A good illustration of this is: In the past, in India, bifurcation of two states occurred namely Chennai and Andhra Pradesh solely on the basis of language. Had we had only a single language, the states would not have divided and flourished together.

    On contrary, the presence of a single language also has got its share of disadvantages such as reduced cognition and diversity. For instance, it has been scientifically proven that knowledge of multiple languages has been attributed to enhanced cognition in people which we can be deprived of with the presence of a single language. Moreover, the presence of a single language closes the realms of diverse cultures.

    Taking both pros and cons into consideration, the presence of a single language imbibes a feeling of harmony and growth but on the other hand, we are deprived of higher cognition and varied culture.

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    November 25, 2021 at 2:08 PM in reply to: Problem solution essay (Internet)

    The Internet has significantly changed the methodology of communication. on the flip side, it has generated a new set of problems. This essay will address the problems associated with the usage of the internet and provide concrete solutions.

    To begin with, A couple of serious threats of communication through the internet are cited below. Firstly, there has been an alarming rise in cyber security threats across the globe via information sharing than ever such as hacking, phishing and spam attacks regularly. A good illustration of this is, According to the report by Hyderabad police, a whopping 1000 cases are registered on average by people about a breach of their security. Secondly, internet users have been diagnosed with insomnia associated with the usage of the internet. For instance, we would not have quality sleep if we were to use the internet one hour before and after sleep due to the decline in the quantum of melatonin produced in our eyes.

    On the bright side, the solutions to the aforementioned problems are quite basic. Firstly, we can refrain from communicating via unauthorized web resources in order not to fall prey to cybercriminals. In addition, we can use standard antivirus software installed which negates any chance of cyber attack. Next, we can follow a strict sleep regimen in the interest of our health although it may seem a bit difficult in the beginning.

    Taking everything into consideration, although there have been struggles with internet usage by means of cyber attacks and sleeplessness, we can use appropriate methodology like a streamlined daily regime and appropriate security measures to counter the problems associated with internet usage.

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    November 25, 2021 at 12:40 PM in reply to: Letter to a neighbour

    Dear Shyam,

    Thank you for agreeing to take care of my place while I am away.

    Would you mind doing a couple of things for me during my stay outside? Could you feed my pet “Cherry” with timely food and frequently hydrate it owing to soaring temperature. Also, I would be thankful if you could also water the plants during morning and evening as they may wilt and ultimately die caused by dehydration.

    Please feel free to contact me in case of any unforeseen circumstances either at my WhatsApp number or voice call me. Even if I can’t lift the call straightaway I will respond after I get your voice mail.

    As a token of gratitude, I am overwhelmingly happy to surprise you with a gift. This gift also would be an exemplar of our friendship.

    I hope you will have a wonderful stay at my home. I look forward to seeing you soon!

    Yours always,

    Hari Kiran

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    November 5, 2021 at 7:28 AM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Forgotten Envelop )

    Dear Shyam,

    I hope you are doing well!!

    I had an amazing time during my stay in your home last year. I wholeheartedly would like to thank you for the hospitality and love that you showered on me as a host.

    Unfortunately, I forgot to take back my envelope from your home. Therefore, I am asking you to do me a favour by posting my forgotten documents to my place.

    I remember that I kept an envelope beside your dell laptop on the study table. Also, there is a table lamp to the left of the envelope. It was a blue envelope with my company logo “AET” written in white coloured letters written on it.

    Since I cannot report to my office without those documents, I am requesting you to do this help on a priority basis.
    I wish to meet you again soon!

    Warm regards,
    Har Kiran

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    November 4, 2021 at 2:35 PM in reply to: Opinion Essay – Media and Celebrities

    The media has the authority to share the private details of famous people. Can the media do this? I certainly do not agree with this statement. Let me bolster my viewpoint with a couple of examples and followed by my conclusion.

    To begin with, although the media has the right to disseminate information to the people, sharing unsolicited details of the personal lives of well-known people can damage their reputation and stress them out. For instance, Famous actor Sanjay Dutt had confessed that he was mentally upset when the media not only shared his personal details but his family was also under the scanner even before he was found guilty under the TADA case. Consequently, by the time he was released, his family’s image had been tarnished and they underwent immense pressure.

    Secondly, occasionally, the situations could go worse due to the unnecessary intervention into the personal lives of celebrities. For example, due to rumours circulated between love-affair of regional actors Tarun and Aarti Agrawal on social media, the latter resorted to suicide. Had the media put a restraint on this information, life would not have been lost. Thus, the situation got aggravated.

    To sum up, while media has the right to publicize information, it does not have any right to torment celebrities and attenuate the situations of the celebrities lives. Alternatively, it can take permission from celebrities to help the cause.

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    October 29, 2021 at 9:53 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing ( Agree/ Disagree )- E books & Modern Technology

    Few opine that E-books and modern innovations shall take the place of conventional things like newspapers and magazines. Will it happen? I certainly do not agree with this statement. Let me bolster my opinion with examples and my personal experience.

    To begin with, Although modern tools like E-books and magazines have been popular due to “the ease of use” it provides to the users, technology has not reached into every nook and corner of the world in order for it to take place of age-old things such as newspaper etc. For instance, while urban people take the advantage of e-books like kindle, rural people do not comprehend its meaning in the first place. Thus, rendering usage of e-books and the latest technology to a minimal extent.

    Secondly, despite living in an urban environment the elderly prefer to read magazines rather than acquainting themselves with the latest technology either due to the fear of learning something new or fear of embarrassment from their family. For example, my parents are comfortable following magazines in spite of me showcasing the advantages that digital paper can provide since they do not want to break their old habits. Had they switched to digital media, they could harness a large amount of information.

    Overall, because of limited technological reach and the inability of all the sections of people to make themselves abreast with state-of-the-art digital platforms current innovations can never make newspapers and magazines obsolete. Unequivocally, this essay argued my opinion.

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    October 20, 2021 at 9:25 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2: Advantages and disadvantages

    Social networking is replacing physical interaction in a major portion of society. After considering both pros and cons of this effect. I certainly believe that the negatives overpower the positive effect. Let me elaborate to bolster my viewpoint.

    On the one hand, social networking has amplified social interaction because of the features it entails. We can communicate with people from every nook and corner of the world with ease. Let me illustrate this with an example, social networking applications like “WhatsApp and google duo” have made improved seamless communication across the world thanks to these applications that enforced our networking. Thus, lead to economical and cost-effective communication.

    On the other hand, social networking has its own share of negatives, people have been preferring to communicate virtually despite having the opportunity to meet in person which is affecting the quality of relationships. As a matter of fact, humans have been biologically wired to share feelings by eye-to-eye contact rather than digital platforms but social media has been the barrier in order to carry out this kind of interaction . For instance, hardly do we see strong bonding amongst social networking peers which display that our true bonding has been diminishing.

    Taking everything into consideration, while social networking undoubtedly enhances one’s reach in communication, it also attenuates the quality of bonding. Therefore, I certainly believe that social networking has become a roadblock to meaningful relationships and we should limit it to the maximum extent.

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    October 19, 2021 at 9:08 PM in reply to: Essay Writing : Indirect “to what extent do you agree” question.

    Psychoanalysts over a period of time have understood that colour can influence people’s thought processes. So, it is important to consider colour coding when adoring locations like offices and hospitals. I certainly believe that colour can boost one’s well being and work efficiency. Let me bolster my opinion with reasoning and examples. Finally, this essay ends with a brief opinion.

    To begin with, we often see the colour code in accordance with the tasks we carry out. The colour reinforces our ability to work in an impeccable manner. For instance, doctors wear a white apron so as to maintain focus since white is an “exemplar of peace” because the undeterred focus is inevitable to carry out complex operations with surgical precision. Imagine how would the doctor feel if he were to wear a dark red apron. Thus, the white colour aids doctors in enhancing their work efficiency.

    Secondly, some colours are deemed to have a healing effect owing to their impact on our mental health. Therefore, some private institutes are harnessing this concept to amlify people’s health. For example, Nowadays, we often see a green ambience in numerous yoga centres as green symbolises the power of healing. Therefore, the green colour has a synergistic effect apart from regular yoga. Hence, improving people’s health.

    Overall, when colours are appropriately chosen at workplaces and mental institutes they can unequivocally enhance overall work efficiency and mental well-being respectively. This essay has agreed with the statement and justified with relevant examples and opinions.

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    October 17, 2021 at 10:40 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2 agree or disagree (too many choices)

    Some individuals claim that we have numerous options in the current timeframe. I strongly believe in this statement. Let me bolster my opinion with appropriate reasoning, relevant examples and a brief conclusion.

    To begin with, the Advancement of transportation facilities have widened the scope of commuting to various places now. In the past, our parents faced many hardships in order to commute and reach their destination due to the lack of adequate transportation facility since they had to rely either on the bus or auto so as to reach their office or home whereas we have a plethora of options to choose from. For instance, I can either choose to travel from Uber or afford to go on Metro rail by booking on mobile which not only saves my time but is also comfortable. Therefore, we have comfortable multiple transport avenues to bank on.

    Secondly, Sophisticated social networking has made our life a smooth ride. While our elders had to tend to the office to carry out their job we can harness the power of software tools to execute even the most complicated tasks in a much simpler manner. For example, We can attend the office or work-from-home by the application of sophisticated tools like Microsoft Teams, Zoom, etc. Therefore, It is difficult to imagine how the work-life could have been, had the pandemic hit a decade ago thanks to technological advancement that has been providing us with multiple options.

    To conclude, the availability of sophisticated transportation and technology has endowed us with a myriad of opportunities which our previous generation could not enjoy.

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    October 17, 2021 at 9:42 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2 agree or disagree (too many choices)

    Some individuals claim that we have numerous options in the current timeframe. I strongly believe in this statement. Let me bolster my opinion with appropriate reasoning and relevant examples.

    To begin with, our parents faced many hardships in order to commute and reach their destination due to the lack of adequate transportation facility since they had to rely either on the bus or auto so as to reach their office or home whereas we have a plethora of options to choose from. For instance, I can either choose to travel from Uber or afford to go on Metro rail which not only saves my time but is also comfortable. Therefore, we have multiple avenues to select and utilise.

    Secondly, Sophisticated social networking has made our life a smooth ride. While our elders had to tend to the office to carry out their job we can harness the power of software tools to execute even the most complicated tasks in a much simpler manner. For example, By the application of sophisticated tools like Microsoft teams and Whatsapp we can accomplish our job in the comfort of our home. Besides, It is even hard to imagine how the work-life could have been, had the pandemic hit a decade ago. Therefore, technological advancement has been providing us with many options.

    To conclude, the availability of sophisticated transportation and technology has endowed us with a myriad of opportunities which our previous generation could not enjoy.

  • There have been a plethora of memorable incidents in my life, If I could cherry-pick one amongst them, it would certainly be the day when I first took on-stage for public speaking. It happened two years ago when I had wanted to go for public speaking and as a result, desperately surfed for various platforms. Fortunately, I bumped onto a great platform called “Toastmasters International”. Although I wanted to speak during the meetings, my introverted nature had always hindered me from going onto the stage and express myself. However, I made up my mind, mustered all my courage, and spoke for a period of 1 minute. That day, I went through a roller-coaster ride of emotions. I could feel my heart pounding. Nevertheless, as soon as I completed my speech, I felt as if I was on cloud nine. By and large, I learnt one lesson through that experience “the only way to go out, is to go through” we need to believe ourselves and take a step even if we are not sure about it. At the end of the day, we may either win or learn a lesson, we are always in a win-win situation!

  • Some opine that men are gifted and superior to women. This essay will argue how and why men seem to have an edge over women but on the other hand, it will showcase that this is an ancient thought process.

    On side of the story, Men are physically and mentally robust enough which makes them more competent. As a result, they are more agile and can handle stress. Furthermore, these attributes endow them with an advantage over women in attaining the set goals. For example, Historically, if we delve into the data of quantum of successful people from various domains such as sports, science, art, business, etc, men always outweigh women. On the surface, it seems that the inherent qualities of men are certainly empowering them to be more successful.

    On the other side of the story, mens’ success story over the decades undoubtedly, has been due to the fact that women have not been allowed to explore various realms due to old-fashioned customs, especially in developing countries. In the past, women were neither blessed with deserved education nor were allowed to participate in extra-curricular activities. Consequently, they couldn’t fare well in the various fields. Had women been given adequate opportunities, they would have been equally qualified to men. For instance, Nowadays, According to Forbes magazine, we see that women are equally capable to men. Hence, mens’ inherent qualities have less to do with their competency.

    To summarise, this essay argued that people who think that women are inferior to men is only a wrong notion. In my viewpoint, women couldn’t compete with men in the past due to deprived opportunities rather than the inherent qualities of men. If we were to provide enough opportunities to women on par with men, they too would do wonders!

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    October 12, 2021 at 9:45 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing: Big Salary

    It is often considered that, having a lucrative career provides more satisfaction than a job that gives a sense of fulfilment. I strongly disagree with this notion. This essay bolsters my statement.

    To begin with, money can provide material fulfilment but not self-satisfaction. Nowadays, we see affluent people visiting meditation instructors and psychiatrists people to relieve stress. The most common reason being the inability to handle stress despite having lucrative salaries. Had money being the index for happiness, they wouldn’t have done this. For instance: The majority of my friends have left high paid jobs and started following their passion in order to have a sense of fulfilment.

    Secondly, job satisfaction propels career growth in the longer run. when we love what we do, it stimulates our true potential and motivates us to do greater things. For example, The famous meditation instructor “Vishen Lakhiani” has divulged in his landmark book i.e., how he became a successful person by leaving his monotonous job and followed his heart to become a millionaire. In spite of facing a plethora of hurdles.

    In short, while money can garner material satisfaction, it cannot provide true happiness which can only be gained by job satisfaction. Besides, if we are perseverant while following our passion, we may face challenges at the initial encounters; however, we can do wonders in the longer run. Therefore, I prefer to choose job satisfaction over a big salary.

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    October 4, 2021 at 9:41 PM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Lost Item)

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to inform you with regard to the laptop backpack that I lost last week and expecting insurance amount as per the insurance norms.

    My backpack consists of a Dell Inspiron laptop which is black in colour, it has a storage capacity of 100 GB. Besides, we can make out the laptop easily by the unique river theme wallpaper on the laptop.

    I may have lost it while was submitting my boarding pass. I had turned hasty and as a result, hurried up and got on to the flight. Later did I realize that I missed it.

    I would appreciate it if you would provide insurance amount as per the company’s norms.

    Looking forward to your reply.

    Yours sincerely,

    Hari Kiran.

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    October 2, 2021 at 4:55 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Write about the following topic.
    Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

    Which viewpoint do you agree with?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Some consumers opine that advertising entices them to purchase things that they don’t require while remaining convey that procuring new products is indispensable. The essay does convey how advertisements reveal about the products which improve our standard of life but do not mislead us to buy unnecessary things.

    On one hand, considering our busy lifestyle it is inevitable for everyone to rely on advertising to buy things in order to live a comfortable life. As a result, we must depend on advertisement in order look for a range of products to save our time and efforts. For instance: In the past, I had had sleepless nights due to mosquitos prevalent in my vicinity. As a consequence, I couldn’t concentrate on my work and personal life. Luckily, I came across an advertisement on Amazon about a retractable mosquito net and instantly ordered it which not only saved me from mosquito bites but was also convenient to use. Had I not known about the mosquito net thanks to “Amazon’s advertisement” I wouldn’t have had sound sleep. Therefore, it is evident that advertisements would enhance our quality of life.

    On the other hand, there are a plethora of advertisements which force us to buy things that are optional. Generally, we tend to fall into the trap of a barrage of advertisements and end up buying dispensable things. For example: I get disrupted when my insatiable friends frequently replace their undamaged mobile phones owing to deceitful “Big sale” advertisements even if the mobiles have been bought recently. Indeed, it is a wasting of their money and time.

    In conclusion, while advertisements enhance comfort by marketing the reliable products it also has the nature to grip the consumers in buying optional things. Besides, it is our emotional decision that misguides us but not advertisements. Therefore, we need to meticulously choose the right product by taking a rational decision rather than an emotional one.

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    October 2, 2021 at 4:51 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Advertising)

    Write about the following topic.
    Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

    Which viewpoint do you agree with?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
    Some consumers opine that advertising entices them to purchase things that they don’t require while remaining convey that procuring new products is indispensable. The essay does convey how advertisements make us know about the products which improve our standard of life but do not mislead us to buy unnecessary things.

    On one hand, considering our busy lifestyle it is inevitable for everyone to rely on advertisements to buy things in order to lead a comfortable life. As a result, we must depend on advertisements so as to choose a particular product from a range of products. Consequently, saving our time and efforts. For instance: In the past, I had had sleepless nights due to mosquitos prevalent in my vicinity. As a consequence, I couldn’t concentrate on my work and personal life. Luckily, I came across an advertisement on Amazon about a retractable mosquito net and instantly ordered it which not only saved me from mosquito bites but was also convenient to use. Had I not known about the mosquito net then, through “Amazon’s advertisement” I wouldn’t have a sound sleep. Therefore, it is evident that advertisements would enhance our quality of life.

    On the other hand, there are a plethora of advertisements that coerce us to buy things that are optional. Generally, we tend to fall into the trap by a barrage of advertisements and end up buying dispensable things. For example: I get disrupted when my insatiable friends frequently replace their undamaged mobile phones owing to deceitful “Big sale” advertisements even if the mobiles have been bought recently. Indeed, it is a wasting of their money and time.

    In conclusion, while advertisements enhance comfort by marketing the reliable products it also has the nature to grip the consumers in buying optional things. Besides, it is the emotional decision that misguides us but not advertisements. Therefore, we need to meticulously choose the right product by taking a rational decision rather than an emotional one.

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    September 29, 2021 at 9:42 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: OPINION ESSAY- EDUCATION

    Many subjects have been taught in schools since ages. While some opine that younger one ought to focus on every subject, remaining believe that students should give importance to subjects that they are fond of. This essay will emphasis on the importance of learning every subject. Also, throws light on pursuing specific subjects. Eventually, I will state my opinion.

    On one hand, as we are living in the time of dynamic transformation wherein change in rapid technology demands for expertise in multi-disciplinary fields. As a result, it is always advisable to have basic knowledge in every field. Therefore, we must learn every subject in school which serves as a foundation for future learning. For instance: Although I was keen of science, I also studied Mathematics, statistics, I didn’t realize the value of those subjects then however; being a scientist I have to apply the principles of both Mathematics and statistics at present in order to evaluate my experiments.

    On the other hand, learning all the subjects consumes bulk of our study time which we can harness in concentrating on subjects we are interested in. Besides, we are unsure whether we would continue studying the subjects that we are not interested at in future. For example: I had to learn Sanskrit in my intermediate which I never came across until now. Alternatively, I would have invested that precious time in focusing on other subjects.

    Overall, having a knowledge about multi-disciplinary subjects would be of help in future. However, studying irrelevant subjects can be counter-productive. Considering both points of view I still believe, that learning all subjects is preferred choice because it enhances our horizon of thinking. Besides, we may not understand the value of every subject in school life.

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    September 28, 2021 at 7:36 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: TWO DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY: ART

    Art is heart and soul of every culture across the globe but only a fraction of people admire it. As a result, majority of people have shifted their interest towards science, technology, and business. This essay portrays the rationale behind this perception. Besides, an attempt to find the pragmatic solution for this situation is presented.
    First and foremost, parents and teachers educate their children to pursue subjects like science, technology and business in order to have a lucrative career. Furthermore, children are compared with wealthy and successful people from science, technology and business stream. Therefore, their wards grow up thinking that, in order to be a successful person one must only take up science, technology and business subjects. For instance: Since my childhood, people from technical and business streams like Bill Gates, Ambani, etc only have been depicted as exemplar of success. Therefore, this has been engrained in my mind to the extent that I could not think of any other stream but Science or Engineering in my schooling.
    In order to motivate people to shift their focus towards art, it should be introduced as a compulsory subject. Because of this, parents and academicians would realize the value of the subject. In the same way, younger ones would realize its value. This foundational impression stays with them for lifetime. For example: I still remember the science exhibition conducted at my school. However, no significance was given to art. I assume, had art also been exhibited like science exhibitions, many would have fascinated the subject. In other words, the stream would be marketed in a better way.
    In a nut shell, children should be taught to understand the value of arts by parents and teachers since their young age. Moreover, exhibitions and live events must be promoted from schooling for better reach in order to rake in interest in the field of art as well.

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    September 17, 2021 at 9:24 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- OPINION ESSAY (BUSINESS)

    Nowadays, supermarkets have mushroomed in majority of places languishing the street vendors. Automatically, local communities are unable to surmount the competition and dwindling. Let’s delve in order to predict the future of local communities.

    First and foremost, there has been an interdependent relation between local businesses and local consumers for ages. However, people have been forsaking them because of propensity towards grandeur of supermarkets. But, when we contemplate both the things from business perspective the commodities are similar and more often than not economical when compared to supermarkets. Besides, they provide better consumer requirement as they are adept at understanding us in a much better way.

    The other side of the the fact is that supermarkets are also crucial because we get expansive items under a single roof. They are working round the clock to provide this flexible service to the consumers. Thus saving our time and effort to buy products. For example, the acquisition of goods, availability of wide range of products like dry fruits to frozen food items. Furthermore, billing and parking are more systematic and consequently; less unpalatable.

    To conclude, we must support tenuous local communities in order not to exacerbate their current situation when we get same things in both places and maintain the timeless relationship. Nevertheless, we can visit supermarkets due to specific reasons like saving our time and efforts. We need to strike this fine balance, eventually both are businesses and need our support so as to have a win-win situation for all.

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    September 13, 2021 at 9:13 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – International Sports Events

    Although a section of people opine that organizing a worldwide sport event can bolster country’s image, others demur that it could be detrimental. I strongly believe that holding an global event has both benefits and drawbacks associated to it.

    To begin with, providing an international event shifts the focus towards a hosting country. This in turn attracts attention of media, brand endorsements, tourists and catalyses both countries image and economy. Thus providing lucrative results. For instance, during 2011 cricket world cup which had been conducted in India, the crickets brand endorsements almost doubled and resulted in swelling of sports economy. Besides, media ratings of sporting channel skyrocketed. Besides, this also catapulted the local IPL cricketing event organized later.

    Secondly, arranging an multinational event entails huge preparation and government should invest a lot of money and time. Though enhancement of image is true its only fugacious. Therefore, this can be utilized in catering to the needs of poor people. For example, in a developing country like India where poverty is higher we can leverage our resources in uplifting poor peoples’ quality of life. Thus it would be prudent to use our economy in a much better way.

    By the way of conclusion, on one hand hosting events fortifies countries image, on the other hand the proponents of events should look into possibility of using our resources in a better way to improve peoples’ quality of life.

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    October 18, 2021 at 8:53 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2 agree or disagree (too many choices)

    Thanks a lot, sir, your feedback has been undoubtedly a source of my improvement!

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