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    Kapil

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    June 4, 2022 at 7:48 PM in reply to: IELTS Writing Task 2

    In this modern era, the market has grown rapidly due to publicity of products, and it is argued that it is the major reason for the growth in the sell. I completely agree with this statement, because of creates awareness among the users and builds trust level through creating a trend. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss in detail with examples and sum up with a logical conclusion.

    To begin with, advertisements provide information about the items and services, and it is necessary to know before used by the buyer. Nowadays, a plethora of advertisement companies create creative content for the consumer which helps them to raise sales, which provides advantages to use their products profoundly, so people are aware of it and they think about buying at any cost. For instance, human beings didn’t prefer electric vehicles till the last 2 years, but Honda has promoted their vehicle with a number of benefits such as cheaper to use and saving the environment, so consumers could understand the advantages thereby they lead to buy and the company growth has reached to 110% in a year.

    Moreover, these days youngster follow their favorite actor and actress on the social media and they keep updated on their activities, so big brand companies take this advantage and promoted their items through hands of the famous movie star, which is also one type of mass promotion to attract the huge shoppers. For example, the Nokia phone lost its market size in 2010, so they launched their new model with help of Tom Cruise who has millions of followers all over the world, they got successful to grow up their business.

    To conclude, it is already proven by many brands that advertising is a medium of the bridge to reach the customers for hiking the sale, and if sellers don’t follow this route they could not get success in the business.

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    Kapil

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    June 3, 2022 at 11:47 PM in reply to: Task 1 (letter writing) : website

    Dear John,

    I am writing this letter to inquiry about to do development of a website which describes our business in profoundly.

    Our organization has been producing a variety of food products for 10 years, and it becomes very famous in the middle east, still, we would like to grow our business in Asia, so we are looking for a developer who can make a creative website for attracting the client.

    Presently, we provide brochures to clients but it is not included all the details, though it is very difficult to reach globally through it, so we deiced to launch a website which displays some essential elements such as automatic technology for production, steps of operations, and care of hygiene & safety during the work.

    Nowadays, we are producing more than 400 products such as sauce, cake powder, jelly and many more, so we have many images which we can post, but it is better to use only main categories images of products, a photo of view angle from outside and inside of the firm, and some pictures of happy faces of the employees.

    I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

    Best regards,

    Tony Joy

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    Kapil

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    June 3, 2022 at 10:50 AM in reply to: Task 2 (Opinion based) : Capital Punishment

    These days, crime has grown rapidly due to a lack of gaps in the judicial system, so it is argued that violence could be decreased by the capital punishment which is also proven by some countries where they implemented the same, therefore I completely agree with this statement and will discuss furtherly with examples.

    To begin with, nowadays the violation has increased in many nations which should be under control because citizen doesn’t feel secure in this environment which is also impacting on the reputation of the country. For instance, Saudi Arabia is one of the countries in the world where the crime rate is around 5% because they applied capital punishment for criminals, thereby locals live peacefully without any fear, and even ladies feel more secure alone to go outside of the home.

    Besides that, it is necessary to have belief in the judicial system by the population, because nowadays, a plethora of countries could not close the criminal cases in a timely manner, so folks don’t get justice on time, thereby, the government loses the trust of them, on the other hand, it leads to making another misdeed by the crook. i.e., In South Africa, lots of violation cases are in the pipeline to take decisions, so it becomes difficult to stop the illegal activities and it is out of control for two decades.

    To conclude, it is high time to take the necessary action by the authority by applying the strong regulations which help to reduce the crime, so citizens can live at peace in the nation.

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    Kapil

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    June 2, 2022 at 3:34 PM in reply to: IELTS TASK 1, Letter writing

    Dear Mr. John,

    I am writing this letter to complain to you about our neighbor who plays music with extremely high sounds, which creates trouble for us to live in this house.

    I have been living with my family in block number: 22 for 7 years, and I have never complained about anything yet, but it is high time for you to know that one neighbor plays his sound system on high bass, which creates a disturbance for everyone in the apartment. I discussed with him more than 5 times to keep the sound on low bass but he didn’t listen to me. Moreover, during the play of music, our wall is getting vibrates.

    My grandparents are living with us and they suffer from some disease so they have to take rest, but they could not sleep because of this issue. In addition, my child is studying in the 10th standard and he has a final examination, and he could not focus on the reading because of the noise.

    I would like to suggest some solutions to solve this issue. Firstly, He can set up a soundproof system in his room. Secondly, you can offer him a single apartment which is located on the terrace. Finally, you can give him intimation to finish the house contract.

    I look forward to hearing from you and requesting to look into this matter to solve this problem at the earliest.

    Yours sincerely,

    Tony Joy

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    Kapil

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    June 2, 2022 at 2:54 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    In this modern era, the revolution in the science and technology fields have positive impacts on the tourism sector, thereby it is argued that English is becoming a well-known language that might be accepted as a primary spoken language in the future, but it has some merits and demerits which will be explaining in the forthcoming paragraphs with examples and sum up with a logical conclusion.

    The main two advantages of a common language are improvement in the relationship between the citizen of the continent, and people getting exposure to the global market. Firstly, the language is the biggest barrier between the nations, because a plethora of human prefers to speak in their local language which is more comfortable to explain their ideas, but if everyone has proficient to speak a single English language, it will break the barrier between the nation and they can deal with each other easiest way. For instance, if the Japanese are adapting the English language, then they can understand the Americans, and helping together for grow up the economy. Secondly, employees can work from any country, as presently due to lack of knowledge of local language person could not get a job in many countries. i.e., If a person wanted to work in Poland, then it is mandatory to speak and understand the polish language, otherwise, his job application is rejected by the employer.

    However, a single language has some major drawbacks as a culture might be extinct from the world. Ancestors defined many rules and regulations in their own local language, so if a person doesn’t have knowledge about it, festivals and culture might be disappeared from the world, therefore it is compulsory to have knowledge about the local language. For example, all the historical books were written in their own word which is not possible to acquire without knowing profoundly.

    To conclude, although one language has certain advantages like reducing the communication gaps and providing career opportunities on the international stage, it has also a negative impact on culture get extinction in the future.

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    Kapil

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    June 1, 2022 at 11:37 PM in reply to: Task 2 (Is it a positive or negative development): Retirement

    In this modern era, the lifestyle of people has been changed frequently which impacts negatively and positively on each generation. It is a new trend that older persons prefer to stay in the retirement home instead of with their adult children, and it has merits and demerits to live far from the family which will discuss in forthcoming paragraphs with examples and sum up with a logical conclusion.

    First of all, a person has spent their whole life for their family to fulfill their requirements, and they don’t get a chance to enjoy their life, so it is the best time to enjoy themselves without taking any tension in the world. Firstly, due to a hectic life schedule, people don’t find time to get relaxed, so while they are getting retired, they have also the authority to live a life in their own way, and when they meet the same age group, they could share the ideas and make fun together. Secondly, nowadays many parents live alone because their children live abroad, so they feel lonely at home, thereby they feel depressed at some stage, so it is better to live in communities to avoid such problems. In 2020, a study conducted by oxford university revealed that 60% of the older generation suffer from depression due to living alone at home.

    On the other hand, there are also negative impacts, if they are not living with their children. Firstly, at a certain age, they face a plethora of diseases such as asthma, diabetes, and blood pressure for that they have to make a regular checkup at the hospital, so in this situation, the only closer one can help to take care of their health. For example, as per the report by the bbc news, 20% of older die every year who are not living with family due to being unable to get aid on time. Secondly, older age people always have a dream to play with their grandson, so if they are not living with their children, they also missed this opportunity.

    To conclude, living a life with full enjoyment is necessary for human beings which they can experience after retirement with the same age group of communities, but if they don’t live with their adult children then they have to suffer during their health problems and could not realize the value of grandparents.

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    Kapil

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    June 1, 2022 at 9:54 AM in reply to: Task 1 (Letter writing) : Extra ticket

    Dear John,

    I hope you are doing well; due to our hectic schedules, we didn’t meet in the past 5 years. But it is high time to give you good news. I am writing to invite you on a holiday trip to Hawaii where we can experience the real beauty of nature during this summer vacation.

    I visited City Pride Mall last week, and they organized a competition between the buyers who have bought a fascinating list of items. I got the first rank so they gave me two tickets for a holiday to Hawaii. As you know, you are one of my close friends and for a long time, we didn’t go together to chill out so I would like to invite you for this trip to make it memorable.

    This travel takes place on the first day of the next month for a week in which they will give the opportunity to visit mountains, rivers, and most important tracking on the Himalayas for two days.

    As per the locations, you have to keep some special clothes with you to protect yourself, as the weather will be chilly so it is mandatory to have a good sweater, to have new shoes for tracking, and don’t forget to bring your camera to capture our beautiful pictures.

    Well, let me finish here. I am eagerly waiting for this journey and reply to this letter if you need any further information about it.

    Best regards,

    Tony Joy

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    Kapil

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    May 31, 2022 at 11:45 PM in reply to: IELTS General Training Task 1

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to request you that allow me to transfer my work location to the Jeddah site which is nearby my hometown.

    I have been working with this organization for 15 years, and have presently taken charge of the Riyadh region as a sales manager. My family is living in Aziziya, and I have to stay alone in Riyadh for a long time, so now I would like to stay with my family.

    I would like to request to approve my transfer to the headquarter which is situated in Jeddah, that is around 50 kilometers far from my hometown, thereby I could do up and down from my home to the office.

    As I have to pay my accommodation rent annually which is going to finish at the end of this month, it is better if I can move before the first day of next month, so I don’t have to renew the contract.

    I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

    Yours faithfully,

    John Nick

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    Kapil

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    May 31, 2022 at 11:07 PM in reply to: Task 2 : (discuss both views- Art )

    In this era, education is an essential part of humankind, but the subject of arts includes in the curriculum at school become a controversial topic. It is considered by some people that it is just futile for the students while there are others who think that it is an important subject to learn during schooling and I completely agree with this statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views with examples and provide a logical conclusion.

    To begin with, it is significant to focus on the useful subjects which boost the career in the future, because at the early age child don’t have the capacity to learn multiple topics at a time. Firstly, these days schools prepare a syllabus with the list of subjects in which they also include the Arts, so it is an extra burden for the children, due to tight schedule they could not enjoy the outdoor activities, thereby many are getting frustrated and lead to take wrong steps in the life. For instance, a recent report from the New York times indicated that around 10% of adults did suicide in the year 2021 because of the stress of study. Secondly, there are many examples of pupils who lose their concentration on the main subjects due to extra activity.

    On the other hand, it is required to get knowledge of arts during the schooling, because it is also defined the career path. Firstly, a person has multiple capabilities to do creative work but lacks of guidance never come into the open world, so school is the best platform to learn and enhance the skills for making a bright future. i.e., nowadays artist is the most successful professionals in India rather than others. Secondly, it is helpful to reduce stress while doing the dancing and painting activity. As per the survey by the bbc news, those students who are interested in art are more creative and intelligent than the others.

    To conclude, the lengthy syllabus creates trouble for the students and they don’t find time to follow their hobbies, but many of them can realize their hidden skills through these artistic activities which guide them to the right path in life.

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    Kapil

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    May 30, 2022 at 11:47 PM in reply to: Letter Writing (Informal 1)

    Dear John,

    I am writing this letter to inquiry about to do development of a website which describes our business in profoundly.

    Our organization has been producing a variety of food products for 10 years, and it becomes very famous in the middle east, still, we would like to grow our business in Asia, so we are looking for a developer who can make a creative website for attracting the client.

    Presently, we provide brochures to clients but it is not included all the details, though it is very difficult to reach globally through it, so we deiced to launch a website which displays some essential elements such as automatic technology for production, steps of operations, and care of hygiene & safety during the work.

    Nowadays, we are producing more than 400 products such as sauce, cake powder, jelly and many more, so we have many images which we can post, but it is better to use only main categories images of products, a photo of view angle from outside and inside of the firm, and some pictures of happy faces of the employees.

    I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

    Best regards,

    Tony Joy

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    Kapil

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    May 30, 2022 at 11:19 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing ( Agree/ Disagree )

    In this 21st century, technology and science have grown rapidly, and it makes life easy for human beings. It is argued that people get more benefits to live in the urban area instead of sub-urban. I completely agree with this statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss the reasons to live in the city with examples and also provide a logical conclusion.

    First of all, the education is an essential requirement of the person, especially in this century it becomes mandatory to get higher education from the reputed university for the personal and professional growth, which they can get only from the metropolis where all these education sectors exist for the study, so it is the major reason for the migration. For instance, nowadays most of the companies have recruited those persons who earn a minimum bachelor’s degree, and lack of the facilities of college/university in the countryside, so students have to move to the city for the higher study.

    On the other hand, these days folks have became more concise about their career, and they are ready to stay anywhere in the world for it. Most of the multinational and well-known companies situated in the metro city have provided a number of advantages with high salary packages and opportunities to work in the modern environment, which helps to boost the career of the employees, so humans attract to it and they move to the city. i.e., as per the evidence by the pole of BBC, there was 40% population relocated to the metro in 2022, and only 20% population is remaining in the village to do farming. In addition, locals reckon that they can live a high standard lifestyle in the Town so it leads to settling in the city with family.

    To conclude, for higher education and getting exposure to a job, people are preferring to leave the countryside, even everybody want to make a secure life for the future which they can do in the town.

  • In this modern era, technology and science have grown rapidly, so it makes easy for human beings to transit in any country of the world, and many the parents looking forward to this option for their children to get abroad education, which gives opportunities to explore on the international level and learn a new culture, but sometimes due to lack of proper monitoring children chooses the wrong way. This essay will examine the merits and demerits of the abroad study and provide a logical conclusion.

    The two main advantages of studying in foreign are getting a global platform and living a high standard lifestyle. Firstly, while studying outside of the home country person get knowledge of the various cultures because it becomes possible to have face-to-face interaction with a number of people from a different continent. In addition, they can learn new languages, up-to-date knowledge of the field, and earn an international college/university degree which helps to open the door in the worldwide market. For instance, as per the evidence of the survey by the BBC in 2022, multination company hire the employees whose has degree from the outside. Secondly, individuals can earn a good salary, so they can live with a high level of living and be able to use expensive things.

    However, it has also some disadvantages as many children leave their parents forever and forget the ethics of family and society. Firstly, while studying alone outside, there are many challenges to face, so they have to make friends which sometimes leads to the wrong way such as if adults get some bad company, they had to adopt the culture due to peer pressure and many times they became addicted of drugs, thereby they break the relationship with their family to enjoy their own life. For example, in the United States 50% expat population is addicted to drugs and robbery who could not go back to their home country. Secondly, if people live far from society, they lose to take interest in the festivals and culture, so they forget the morality of the community.

    To conclude, although foreign education has certain disadvantages like children leaving the home forever and lack of knowledge of their own society, it has an extremely positive impact on the possibility to get explore on a global platform and live a premium quality lifestyle.

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    Kapil

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    May 28, 2022 at 10:24 PM in reply to: Task1 (Letter writing) : Job for friend

    Dear John,

    I am writing this letter to inform you about the available vacancy in the Oracle Corporation which is a good opportunity to grow your career.

    Recently, I have found that 3 application tester is required by one of the reputed IT companies. It has the basic requirement of the software skills which can be used in the testing of the code, as a tester should have abilities to find the bugs from the written code through compilation technique and submit the report to the concerned department. In addition, the candidate has to tune the code so it is mandatory to have knowledge of the Java, PHP, and Perl languages.

    As you already graduated the computer science and 1-year work experience in programming make you the most suitable candidate for this post.

    I had contacted the HR team of the organization, and they suggested applying through their career page, where an applicant has to create an account on the company’s website with the details of professional experiences, education histories, and skills.

    Let me know if you need any further details about this application.

    Best regards,

    Eric Trance

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    Kapil

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    May 26, 2022 at 6:56 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2: Advantages and disadvantages

    In this modern era, technology has grown rapidly, and the majority of humans use electronic gadgets routinely. The over usage of web communication has replaced face-to-face interaction with messaging among the folks in the society. I reckon the proper way to use social media applications has made the easy life for human beings. In the forthcoming paragraphs, discuss its merits and demerits of it with a logical conclusion.

    The two main advantages are possible to get quick communications on far and in any bad situations. Firstly, in the earlier days, it was difficult to make communication for those who live in the abroad country, but nowadays it becomes very easy through virtual calls. For instance, Facetime is one of the famous applications used for video calls in groups and individuals so family bonding stays for long life. Secondly, the person can stay in touch in any situation without go outside and surviving. i.e., the Government had declared a curfew last year due to covid, so no one goes outside of the home and many had felt the tired, laziness and frustrate during this period, but due to social applications, they could connect in groups to talk to each other, get the knowledge to tackle this diesis and they could live in this difficult condition.

    However, it has also some disadvantages like destruction in individual and social life. Firstly, people could not experience human behavior through the remote session, so they don’t get feeling toward them. For example, due to the habit of the video call, mankind doesn’t get to know the reality of the individual which leads to breaking the bond as it becomes difficult to keep a healthy long-distance relationship. Secondly, these days all the events become online so folks don’t take interest in such a function which impacts the knowledge of the culture.

    To conclude, although social media has certain disadvantages like being destructive the personal and social life, it has an extremely positive impact on the transmission of messages between the individual and group. I reckon that these benefits of easy communication outweigh the disadvantages.

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    Kapil

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    May 26, 2022 at 5:16 PM in reply to: Letter (Learning a Language)

    Dear Madam,

    I am writing this letter to request to take English classes because I would like to learn at an advanced level.

    One of my friends has been attending your tuition for 2 months, and he has become fluent to speak which is really impressive. During my conversation with him, he recommended you for the best teaching techniques.

    I will be shifting to Australia in 3 months, so I am looking for training and practicing English to polish my skills. As English is mandatory in a foreign country I have to learn before arriving there and because of that, I would like to join your classes.

    As you have a plethora of batches, you can provide permission in one of it, so I can start to get the knowledge profoundly of English, moreover, it will be a good opportunity for me to do practice with your students on daily basis.

    I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

    Yours faithfully,

    John Rack

  • In this modern era, the tourism sector has grown rapidly, because it has huge demands from the range of tourists and scientists, thereby a lot of travel destinations are open for them especially remote habitats. This essay will examine the merits and demerits of this progress and provide a logical conclusion.

    The two main advantages of access to the natural landscape are getting exposure to individual life and research becomes possible in some areas. Firstly, nowadays people get frustrated with visiting the same places so they always try to find out some interesting places to explore by themselves, and such places help to get the opportunity to learn a new culture, communicate with the locals, and enjoy the amenities which are far from them. For instance, Kutch is one of the small districts, nobody had heard about the name a decade ago but the government developed that site, and presently, around 100.000 tourists visit every year to enjoy the climate and ecological system. Secondly, it is the greatest fortune for scientists to investigate those areas which are still not been introduced to the world, and it also helps the nation to boost the economy. i.e., recently scientists from Sweden got success to find copper in the hill station, so the authority will get benefits from these regions.

    However, the open door of the natural environment also has some disadvantages like disturbing the ecosystem and security threats for tourists. Firstly, due to the location being far from the cities all the utilities do not possible to provide at that place so when the person visits these spots they face lots of security, accommodation, and travel issues. For example, the Amazon forest was not permitted the stay to the common public, but recently they introduced a project through which anyone can stay between the flora and fauna, in a month around 6 persons found the death due to the attack by the tiger. Secondly, when humans tamper with nature they also create problems for the animals and plants, therefore it affects the natural system.

    To conclude, although there have certain disadvantages like the safety of folks and freighting in climate, it has an extremely positive impact on the character of humans and the scope of the investigation. I reckon that these benefits outweigh its drawbacks.

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    Kapil

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    May 19, 2022 at 10:35 PM in reply to: Problem solution essay (Internet)

    In this modern era, technology has been growing rapidly for decades, and it plays a major role in the life of human beings. There are merits and demerits to using it, hence in this present world, it creates trouble for the person which did not exist earlier. This essay will first suggest the biggest problems caused by this phenomenon are the hacking of personal information and loose concentration from the study and then argue that awareness about the security and limited use of the internet is the most viable solution.

    To begin with, the internet is the most important invention of humankind, but security breaches and easy accessibility are the most problems caused by it. Firstly, the information of a person is not secure anymore, because a group of people has looked for the stole amount from the bank, so they always try to get personal details as much as possible which they use to hack bank account. Secondly, the young generation can access the web easily through electronic gadgets because nowadays parents also prefer to keep updated with their children, but due to overuse of social networks and games, they become habitual to staying online late at night and could not concentrate on the study which directly effects on their career. For instance, in the last 5 years the depression cases increased on boom in the united states because adults spent an average of 7 hours on the world wide web and they are concerned about the likes of their pictures and post on social media so if it will not reach a certain level, they feel upset.

    On the other hand, a possible solution to reduce this problem would be the awareness among the users and defining limitations to using the internet. Firstly, Government should take necessary steps to make secure bank platforms and spread the awareness about the usability of networks between individuals, which is helpful to reduce the cases of cybercrime because nowadays if users get hacked, they don’t complain anywhere, so authorities don’t have the details about the cases so it is also the responsibility of the person to make cybercrime case to stop such an incident. Secondly, Parents should keep watch on their child to use the internet, and schools & colleges should band the mobile phone during the classes because most the students are busy with their gadgets for chatting and playing games. For example, Sweden become one of the gadget-free countries in the world where they use an average of 1 hour’s internet per local because individuals and authorities had taken the steps together to stop the use of the web.

    To conclude, the Internet is a giant in the world which makes it easy life for people at the same time it creates a lot of troubles such as personal details breaches and interruption in education, but possible solutions could be limited use and awareness about the security of the web.

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    Kapil

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    May 19, 2022 at 9:54 AM in reply to: Task 1 (Letter writing) : Internet connection

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to complain about the poor connectivity of internet in our area last two weeks which has been affected to everyone in work and study.

    I have been living at Kameel Azhar Street and use the internet of the Mobily for 5 years, but nowadays in our area we all are facing trouble in the internet connection. Such as, it does not work between 7 to 11 in the morning and 3 to 5 in the evening time, moreover when connection is getting alive it does not give a speed which we pay for bandwidth.

    Due to covid, schools and offices have became virtual so internet play major role at the work place and study. Students could not attend their classes and employee could not provide work on time, and both are essential for the society so this issue has affected on almost every person.

    I would like to suggest some solutions like, you can arrange separate network for each society so users get speed because of less traffic of packages, even, setup of the Wi-Fi devices between 3 to 4 houses will solve this trouble.

    I look forward for your reply at earliest convenience and solve this issue on priority base.

    Yours faithfully,

    John David

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    May 19, 2022 at 12:13 AM in reply to: General Letter Writing 1

    Dear Mr. John,

    I am writing this letter to introduce myself and reason to enroll in the Oracle EBS course which is helpful for me to get knowledge of the commercial processes.

    Myself marina and I have been studying Bachelor of education in the MKICS college for 3 years in the Information Technology department. I have completed 6 semesters with distinction and am able to secure first rank in each semester, moreover won the best innovation competition award for my industrial project.

    I had got opportunity to work with one of the reputed company Wipro Ltd for 6 months during last semester project which taught me essential lesson of process life cycle in the industry, and I decided to make career in the enterprise resource planning field, therefor I had pursued in the course of Oracle EBS, because as per the defined structure of course it covered all the modules such as finance, purchase, order management and planning which I need to learn for the jump into this field.

    I would like to request for approve my application form for attending this course.

    Yours sincerely,

    Marina

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    Kapil

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    May 19, 2022 at 12:10 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2: Problem -solution (life expectancy)

    In this era, science and technology has grown rapidly which impacts profoundly increase the age of human being. This essay will first suggest that biggest cause by this phenomenon is the financial trouble for individual and burden for pension on the government and then argue that awareness about the saving and provide more opportunity to locals and foreigners are the most viable solution.

    First of all, it is essential to keep body healthy and active, but due to long age it also creates problems on personal and nation level. Firstly, there is a government rule to get retired on the age of 60, but most of the person face issue due to lack of saving, because of high standard life and cost of living they could not survive with limited money. Secondly, if a plethora of person get retired at the same time, it also creates burden on the government for pay pension to them, because shortage of workforce could not generate the revenue which directly effect on the economy. For instance, nowadays in the Germany 60% population has got retired from their work so as per the rule, authority has to provide social security to their citizen but absence of the money in their locker, they could not provide to everyone which is the biggest trouble for aged people.

    On the other hand, possible solutions would be to teach financial education at the early age is helpful to store money for the later age, because parents and teachers provide only education of language, science and mathematics but they should also emphasis on the financial freedom. Moreover, authority should create new opportunities in the market for the local and overseas folks from where they get more taxes, which they can use for the retirement schema. For example, Canadian government could not afford the pension to their local in the 2012, so they launched a project to attract the expatriates, and they got success to came out from the recession period and increased the collection of taxes for the civilization.

    To conclude, difficulty of financial trouble at old age and burden of retirement on authority could be solve through provide education of finance to students in the school and colleges and make investment by authority in the new technology to create job opportunities for locals and foreigners for economical stability.

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    May 17, 2022 at 9:59 AM in reply to: Task 2 (Problem/solution essay) : Traffic congestion

    In this 21st century, science and technology have made life easy for human beings, but due to over utilization, the common obstacle is faced by almost every metro city which is the traffic jam. This essay will suggest that the main causes by this phenomenon are the migration of local community and easy access of private vehicles and then argue that development of the rural areas and utilization the public transport are the most viable solutions.

    To begin with, the foremost problems caused by traffic congestion are that a group of people have moved from rural area to urban and individual are preferring to use own vehicle. Firstly, there are number of reasons lead to civilization for resettling in metro, such as find employment, earn degree from reputed school or university, and enjoy modern life-style. Secondly, it has became easy to keep personal transport options for everyone, in addition many have more than one for the pastime. For instance, Mumbai got the first rank for the most congested metro city in the world, where almost every one faces the issue of traffic, because of overcrowding who are influenced by way of life and making the money.

    On the other hand, possible solutions to these problems would be increase the scope of living in the countryside and promote to use general transportation. Firstly, government have authority to take decisions, so they can focus on the development of the villages such as start the new factories so villager can find job at their own place, and open the schools and colleges so students can earn degree without leave their hometown. Secondly, ministry can make arrangement for locals to get easy transit from source to destination through their transportation, and promote some scheme to attract the passengers. For example, Delhi ministry has launched huge numbers of buses, and they declared transportation free of cost for the ladies and children, which has been getting most successful project for two years in the country.

    To conclude, steaming the traffic congestion caused by lack of opportunities in the rural and wish to use own wheels, but possible solutions could be taken initiative by administration to improve the possibility for the villagers and encourage to society for use their public services.

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    Kapil

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    May 13, 2022 at 6:41 PM in reply to: Task 1 (letter writing) : apologize for absence (semi-formal)

    Dear Mr. John,

    I am writing this letter to apologize for unable to attend the oracle event which was held on last Monday at Jeddah branch. Because of wedding function at my home, I was super busy on that day.

    We are four members in my family, and my parents already planned marriage function since last month. Moreover, I am elder brother of my sister, so I had taken lots of responsibilities to make this function successful, and it was completed smoothly without any major obstacles. In fact, If I attended the oracle event, I would not get concentration in the seminar.

    I have discussed with HR team to take part in this seminar at our Riyadh branch which will held on next Friday, and they can arrange the sit for me If I get approval from you, so I am requesting to accept my request in the portal for the further procedure.

    I am looking forward to your help at your earliest convenience.

    Yours sincerely,

    John Bathe

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    Kapil

    Member
    May 13, 2022 at 6:41 PM in reply to: TASK 2[OPINION BASED TOPIC]FOOD

    In modern society, it is argued that fast food has become popular in all nations which effects negatively on human’s diet and way of living. I completely agree with this statement and in the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall elaborate more on this in details.

    To begin with, nowadays due to tight schedule of persons, they don’t have much time to make food by themselves, so pre-cooked food is the best option for them, because it is more convenient than hand-made food. Moreover, sellers use number of ingredients to make it tasty which attracts more consumer to buy. For instance, Dominoes sell the variety of burgers in which they use catchup, salt, oil and human made ingredients for make it delicious, and buyers don’t have knowledge about the used materials how much safe for them.

    At the other hand, way of life of the people gets change rapidly which impact profoundly on the body, thereby group of humans have faced with lots of health issues. Community of science already declared the bad effects of these food in 2010, although society don’t take seriously to avoid major trouble for their health. i.e., as per the evidence by BBC, there are 70% persons suffer with cancer who totally depends on the fast-food, because they don’t have time to cook food or don’t have facilities for same.

    To conclude, the major result of eating fast-food is overweight and obesity which create a lot of troubles for mankind on their health. In my opinion, I reckon that the disadvantages outweigh advantages.

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    Kapil

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    May 11, 2022 at 10:03 PM in reply to: TASK 2[OPINION BASED]COMMUNICATION

    In this digital era, technology has become an essential part of human beings because people chat together instantly through social media applications such as WhatsApp, Facebook, Instagram and short message service, so, pessimist claim that quick transmission will cause the vanish of language’s fundamental. I partly disagree with this statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discussion the reasons with examples.

    First of all, language is main source of communication between the communicator, so it plays a vital role for everyone. As each sector of business and government never make deal without the letter or email, because it is one kind of proof which is required to get agree between the parties, and everyone follow the same for last long years. In addition, many applications and software already in the market which is useful to correct the mistakes. Gramaly application is one the best example for correct human mistakes with suggestions.

    At the other hand, from the begging of the study, there are lots of courses introduced in the curriculum which provide the understanding from profound, so students have learned from the schools and they adopt a way to use the words in writing. i.e., nowadays parents prefer to get admission of their child at early age in which they learn the primary syntax so they will not face the issues later stage.

    To conclude, each person on the earth have to write formally on the workplace in which have to mentioned with properly, in addition, students have taken written examination, so no one can skip the structure and thereby, it never be passed from the globe.

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    Kapil

    Member
    May 10, 2022 at 11:37 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- OPINION ESSAY (BUSINESS)

    In this 21st century, businesses have expanded overnight in which consumers play vital role to make them success and nation promoted for make strong economy. It is considered by some people that small scale business could not compete to large scale, while there are others who think local commune will end soon if domestic trade could not take stand in this market. I partially agree with this argument. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss the reason with examples.

    First of all, government provides permission to launch new construction projects, open shopping centers and make trade on international level for progress the economy and nation, so it is high time for wholesale retailer to increase their sell and get wealthy profit, thereby number of investors have invested in this market. Firstly, they could provide items in cheap price with best quality to attract the buyers. Secondly, due to huge investment they afford to expansion so nowadays they also provide facilities to deliver the products on door. Finally, it also creates the vacancy for the many. For instance, wall mart is one the famous mall in the united nation which is provided best service to the users and huge number of jobs.

    At the other hand, due to expansion of mall, it impacts profoundly on the internal business, because most of the localize prefers to buy everything from the one place instead of the multiple shops, but still there exist a community of poor who could not afford the shopping plaza because they prefer to buy on credit instead of cash due to lack of regular income. For example, a plethora of small size business stopped due to decrease in the sell because majority of public going to city center to get enjoy the shopping experience.

    To conclude, I reckon, it is responsibility of everyone and government to balance bond between commune and local traders otherwise the poor person will not feed to their family.

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    Kapil

    Member
    May 10, 2022 at 10:05 AM in reply to: Task 1 ( Letter writing) : Borrowed book

    Dear Mr. John,

    I am writing this letter to let you know that I would like to return the book which you provided me when it is most required.

    The book name is ‘oracle enterprise system’ which is written by james bond, and it is just latest edition where they described about enterprise system in profound way which make easier to understand for the end users.

    As you know, we had to submit the final thesis of the project to complete the course, and I took subject of manufacturing company for this study, so this book helped me to get idea of each module such as finance, purchase, planning, production and human resource because these are the mainly department who use the system. It assisted me to secure the first rank in this semester.

    I got sick for 2 weeks and doctor instructed me to get rest at home so I couldn’t come to college to return your book. I apologize for inconvenience.

    I look forward to get your response regarding your availability at the university.

    Yours sincerely,

    Abc

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    Kapil

    Member
    May 10, 2022 at 12:47 AM in reply to: TASK 1[SEMI FORMAL LETTER] LANDLORD

    Dear Mr. John,

    I have been living in the apartment A-22 for 2 years at Kameel Azhar Street. I am writing this letter to inform you that one of my neighbors who is living in A-23 play music on high volumes, so it creates lots of disturbance for me and my family.

    Let me explain the situation, two bachelors are living in the same flat and they finished their duty around 6 o’clock in the evening. Once they reach to home, noise gets started till the early morning. They play music system with full volumes and bass sounds, so our wall also gets vibrate.

    As you know, we are 5 members in my family in which my son has studied in the 10th standard and he has started the board examination in a week, because of this disturbance he could not study properly. My grandparents can’t sleep appropriately and don’t get rest on account of the noise, Thereby, my grandmother also feels sick.

    Would you kindly step in and resolve the issue? As all the society members have same complain. I raised my concern to our president of society who might be take action. Please pitch in and resolve it otherwise I have to move another flat.

    I am looking forward for your response.

    Your sincerely,

    Abc

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    Kapil

    Member
    May 10, 2022 at 12:46 AM in reply to: TASK 2[OPINION BASED]ENVIRONMENT

    In the 21st century, environment conservation becomes the biggest challenge on the earth for the human being because they culprit the major role to disturb the natural life cycle. It is considered by pessimist that situation is now out of control to get solved, while there are others who think the right steps towards the save habitat improve the situation. I completely agree with statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views with examples.

    First of all, in this era, it becomes easy for person to land on the moon because of the expansion in the science and technology field, but it impacts negatively on the eco-system. For instance, it is a fact that industrialization, deforestation, farming and burning fossil fuel are mainly cause of the globalization, which is directly influence on the weather of the earth. In the 1800s, people didn’t face the issue of air pollution but now it occurs normal in a plethora of the cities.

    On the other hand, others including me reckon there have multiple possibilities to defence our habitat if people strongly decided to take initiative for the globe. Firstly, Government have authority to banned the deforestation and launch new projects for the reforestation. Secondly, individual can take responsibility to grow new plants and avoid to use own transportation for the ride. They can use public transport or bicycle in short distance. Finally, through the development of new forest leads to secure the animals and territory. It is better if everyone insists to use eco-friendly products. Sweden is one the best example which could apply the rules and regulation in the favor of nature, therefore it could be secure the first rank in the world for provide the fresh air to their population.

    To conclude, it is high time to save the nature and wild life otherwise future generation might be have to buy the oxygen instead of get free of cost, even disappear of species also impacts on the life cycle of the planet so it is individual responsibility to take initiative for contribution to the society. It is not irretrievable to save the soil.

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    Kapil

    Member
    May 8, 2022 at 11:30 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 (both views) : Packaging

    In this era, businesses and consumers influenced by the new innovative technology which create a major impact on the eco system. It is considered by some people, minimize the wrapper on the product is the duty of manufacturers & supermarkets while there are others who think, customers should accept the items in the normal package. I reckon, it is liability of both parties to take necessary action towards to solve the packaging problems. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views with examples.

    Generally, industrialist look forward to grow their business in any cost, so the marketing team always interested to know the taste of the consumers and they develop plan to make attractive item which has power to engaged the buyers. For instance, the packet of chip which is wrapped by the large paper ware but it contains small amount of quantity, if they use cheap quality of cover then it might be effect on the sell. So, it becomes mandatory for them to prepare well looking stock to trade.

    At the other hand, there is customer demand to buy fair items because people determine fascinating products from glance point of view instead of quality. i.e., young generation stare the dairy milk chocolate which is made by Cadbury, because it is wrapped inside the golden paper with beautiful pictures otherwise the test is not worth of the price. So, due to the trend of show off, individually don’t accept the poor packaging.

    There are number of solutions if it is accepted by the human kind to solve this issue such as item should be packing with the eco-friendly materials which help to save the trees and environment.

    On balance, make change in the society is not responsibility of one but it can happen through to take initiative by everyone in the nation.

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    Kapil

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    May 8, 2022 at 1:14 AM in reply to: TASK 2[OPINION BASED TOPIC]International Aid

    In today’s world, it is responsibility of nation to help others in crucial situation. It is considered by some people; they should avoid financial support to others because firstly they should spend on their own society to solve the problem of workforce and streeties which are the major issue for the country. Both are directly impact on the economy. I completely agree with this statement. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss in details with examples.

    Nowadays, due to huge number of populations and lack of job vacancies, it becomes difficult to survive for many. Firstly, they could not afford the higher education for their children. Secondly, because of the absence of the work sometime individual feel depress and they get addicted with some bad habits, thereby, they make crime and the rate of violation is getting increase. It is liability of authority to create opening in the market. i.e., Presently the economy of Sri Lanka has touched to down in compare to past and majority don’t have enough amount to buy groceries because government could not create new vacancies for the local people.

    Home is essential part of the human for living with their family, but today a plethora of people have to sleep on street due to the lack of space in the city. So, ministry should launch project of home for the poor.

    There are many examples of developed countries who helped to under developed nation but doesn’t get positive result. For example, United states had provided financial support to Afghanistan for 20 years, but because of corruption the money only reach to the politician. Civilization don’t get any benefits so their situation didn’t improve.

    To conclude, government should focus to resolve the problems of their own citizen instead of aid to others because in the critical situation developing country might not offer any help.

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