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    Mamta

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    December 17, 2021 at 12:27 PM in reply to: Task 2: (Agree/disagree) : Money management

    In every school, money management should be included in the curriculum because it is a good skill to become successful in life. I completely agree with this statement as it will teach children how to budget their money and effectively use it in their later life.

    To start with, Money management is a very important technique that can be useful in everyone’s life. If it starts at a very young age in high schools, students get to know its importance and can easily implement it in their daily life. Nowadays, each and every child gets pocket money , so they can use this skill and budget their money. By doing so, Children can do a good practice and do not misuse the money. This habit will prove to be beneficial in their future businesses or jobs.

    Moreover, just by learning the financial management they can understand how to spend their income and where to spend for good return. In future they could become renowned businessmen. If proper guidance or money handling is included in school curriculum, youngsters avoid the situation where they use all their income and do not save a few pennies for bad days. For example, those students who know the importance of money management can save enough money to help their parents in their higher education expenses.

    To conclude, because financial planning classes are crucial for them, they should be provided these lessons in schools. In such a way they realise its value at an early age that would be beneficial for them in their future while doing money planning.

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    Mamta

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    December 15, 2021 at 4:59 PM in reply to: IELTS General Training Task 1

    @falak , Ma’am please review it.

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter regarding my transfer to the office of Bangalore city.

    I have been working in this organisation for 5 years and I have never requested for a relocation but now the situation is not in my favour. As you know, I am basically from Bangalore and my parents live there. My father has been facing some health problems since few months and it is my duty to look after him.

    I would like to request you please approve my transfer. So that, I can manage both my duties toward my job and my parents. It would be easier for me to work there as I can closely observe his health along with my project assignments.

    My father will go for an eye operation in the next month. Please approve my relocation by the end of this months. In such a way I can support him in his tough time.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Your sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    December 13, 2021 at 11:54 PM in reply to: Task 2 (discuss both views)- Newspaper

    It is believed by some that to learn national or international news the best way is the newspaper, while others consider that we can get to know about the news in a better way through media, TV or other applications. This essay will discuss both views and explain why in my opinion, the latter view is the best way.

    To begin with, newspapers are a good source to get all different kinds of information in one place. We can find local, international, business, and sports news in one place, which can also enhance our vocabulary related to those sections. Newspapers are liable as a result, most elderly people love to read it with their morning tea. Moreover, elderly people are unfamiliar with the usage of electronic gadgets that’s why they find newspapers are easy to use and more convenient.

    On the other hand, there are a plethora of other platforms to get news. These are TVs, radios and many other applications that provide news on a real basis. Because of the internet, the audience can learn news in a few minutes and it gets updated as well. For example, today India won the Miss Universe title after 21 years, so we can see this news on all other media platforms just after it occurred. People do not need to wait for tomorrow to read it in the newspaper as it is already available on the internet today itself. Secondly, these sources are very handy, people can use them anywhere and anytime and the news are just away from a click.

    In conclusion, newspapers have many benefits and it is undeniable that they might provide lots of information for readers but in my opinion, televisions, radios and the internet play a crucial role to update people with the latest information as these are the fastest way to get news.

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    Mamta

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    December 10, 2021 at 7:47 PM in reply to: Task 2 : GM foods (agree/disagree)

    As the population of the world is increasing, the biggest problem is how to feed the people. It is believed by some that GM foods are a good option to tackle this problem. In my opinion, GM foods can solve the problems of food shortage as they can grow in any weather conditions and they also have rich nutritional values.

    To begin with, there are many advantages to growing these genetically modified crops. First and foremost, they are extra resistant to weather conditions such as flood and drought. As a result, these can be grown anywhere at any time in the year. For example, initially apples can be found in the most northern part of the country but now they can be found in the northern part as well, as they do not require any specific temperature or location to grew in. Secondly, they are cost effective and usually cheaper than the normal crops because they can be produced in the same amount using less land, less water or less pesticides. Because farmers can save on resources, food producers can also charges lower price for genetically modified foods. In some cases, the cost of the foods such as soybeans, corn etc may be cut by 15-30 %.

    Furthermore, these foods are rich in more nutrients such as vitamins and minerals since they are modified by scientists. So, they are beneficial in those areas where people suffer from nutritional deficiency. They can reduce the usage of pesticides as they have been altered to less vulnerable to insects and pets. Instead of having to be sprayed with a complex pesticide, these come with an innate pesticide. In a recent survey, it found that usages of pesticides reduced by 10 % as compared to the last ten years. Because of less pesticides, these crops may lead to less health risks for people eating them.

    To conclude, I agree, GM foods are useful to feed the growing population. They are good for a healthy lifestyle and also increase the yields in the country as they do not need any specific requirements related to weather or location. GM crops technology play a vital role to combat food scarcity for the reason that we can increase crop productions easily with cost effective methods.

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    Mamta

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    December 10, 2021 at 3:30 PM in reply to: Task-1 (Letter writing) : Semi-formal letter to landlord

    Dear Mr Sharma,

    I am Mamta Gulia, a tenant at your Gaur city residence. I am writing this letter to inform you about the damages caused by the cyclone last week and those need to be fixed immediately.

    I have been living in your apartment since 2016 and we live on the 8th floor. Last week, Cyclone Fani hit the city and as a result, a downpour damaged the windows of the house very badly. Electricity has also gotten affected since then and continuous chill wind is flowing in my flat. It is very uncomfortable for my mother in law to stay there as she is ill.

    I request you please make an arrangement to fix the problem as quickly as possible. It is winter now and the cold wind is unbearable for all family members. You can also contact the local vendor who can inspect the house for better understanding of the loss. I will assist you in whichever way possible.

    I look forward to hearing from you on a positive note.

    Yours sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    December 9, 2021 at 11:06 AM in reply to: Task 2 : (discuss both views- Art )

    Some people believe that art should be a compulsory subject in schools while others argue that it should not be necessary as it is a waste of time. This essay will explore both the views along with my opinion.

    To begin with, those who think art should be essential have many arguments. First and foremost, it provides the opportunity to children to pursue their hidden interests. Many kids do not know that they are interested in arts subjects like painting, drawing, sculpturing and many more and they are not good in academics as well. So, art classes provide them an opportunity to identify their strengths and make them their career choices. For example, legendary Bollywood actor Amitabh Bachchan did not perform well in school but due to his acting passion, now he is not only successful but also famous worldwide. Secondly, these classes provide a relaxing environment to kids as they are very busy in back to back classes and sometimes feel exhausted. Some research shows that students can focus more in academic classes if they are happy and relaxed.

    However, on the other side, some say that including art as an essential subject in schools leads to loss of valuable time. Only a minority like these subjects as a result other kids are reluctant to attend these classes and want to only focus on their main subjects. Nowadays, lots of syllabus are required to be completed on time for better results and for a better future for children. So, many parents do not want to see art as a compulsory subject and do not allow their kids to continue with these subjects. For instance, in higher education, mostly career options are available for students who scored well in science and mathematics. In addition to that, art should be optional in the school curriculum. So, kids can choose according to their interests.

    To conclude, necessary art classes provide a good platform to identify hidden talents of children along with some light activities to help them in reducing their stress levels. However, in my opinion, these classes should not be essential, rather it should be optional as individual students have their own interest and the education system should provide them this opportunity to choose their subjects.

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    Mamta

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    December 3, 2021 at 1:15 PM in reply to: Task 2 : GM foods (agree/disagree)

    As the population of the world is increasing, the biggest problem is how to feed the people. It is believed by some that GM foods are a good option to tackle this problem. In my opinion, GM foods can solve the problems of food shortage as they can grow in any weather conditions and they also have rich nutritional values.

    To begin with, there are many advantages to growing these genetically modified crops. They are extra resistant to weather. In other words, they do not need any specific weather conditions or places. So, farmers can harvest them anywhere. For example, apples can also be found in the northern part of the country. Additionally, farmers might benefit from these GM foods because they require less money and land. So using less land they can grow a large amount of crops.

    Furthermore, these foods are rich in more nutrients such as vitamins and minerals because they are modified by scientists. It can reduce the usage of pesticides as they are not attacked by pets. So do not need pesticides to kill them. As a result, they can be used for more days. For instance, people buy these foods for a whole week at a time and store them in their home without much effort.

    To conclude, I agree, they are useful to feed the growing population. GM foods are good not only for a healthy lifestyle but also for increasing yields in the country. For the increasing population, increasing crops play a vital role to combat food scarcity.

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    Mamta

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    December 1, 2021 at 4:40 PM in reply to: Task1 (Letter writing) : Complaint to retailer

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to complain about a broken product that I bought recently from your website.

    Last week, I ordered a set of twelve bear mugs for a party that I organized in my home but when I received the item it was in a very bad condition. I would have expected that the package to be wrapped more effectively to avoid any mishappening but there was no padding at all. I ordered it for a party but it disappointed me because two mugs were badly damaged.

    The order number is 123456789 and I ordered it on 25th November 2021.Now I want to return it as the occasion has passed for which I bought it. I have already raised a complaint on your website but it has been one week and still i do not get any update regarding the same. So, I request you please make arrangements to return it as soon as possible and refund my money quickly

    .I look forward to hearing from you on a positive note.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    November 29, 2021 at 11:43 PM in reply to: Letter Writing -4 (Forgotten Envelop )

    @falak

    Dear John,

    I hope you are fine and doing well. I am writing this letter regarding the envelope that I forgot at your place. It was an amazing experience to stay with you in Australia.

    First, I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your help that you did in another country. I know saying thankyou is not enough but I feel lucky to have a true friend like you. All the arrangements were appreciably made not only by you, but also by your parents who treated me like their daughter. I spent some memorable moments with them.

    Unfortunately, I left an envelope in the drawing area. It is in the cabinet that is near the Television and the envelope is in the last drawer. I hope you can easily find it now.
    As you know, I was preparing to change my company and recently I got selected in one reputable company. The new organisation wants to see all my original documents to verify all the details.

    I request you return it as soon as possible by post , so that the company could start the further process very quickly.

    Take care and see you soon.

    Best regards,

    Mamta

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    Mamta

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    November 27, 2021 at 6:42 PM in reply to: Essay advantages and disadvantages ( Children )

    Since the last few years, most people do not want kids in their early years and it has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of this along with some examples and provide a logical conclusion. Whilst acknowledging that there are drawbacks, the essay will argue that the advantages of having children in later life outweigh the disadvantages.

    There are many advantages for people who plan a baby in their 30’s. First and foremost, they get ample time to settle in their career and to reach a desired level. As a result, they are financially stable to fulfil the basic needs that are required for growing up a child. Additionally, those couples are mature enough to handle the responsibilities of their babies and react according to their needs. For example, is has been seen that parents who are in their 30’s have lots of patience and they can easily understand the problem of a child and handle that situation very well.

    On the other hand, having a baby in later life also has some disadvantages as well. Some couples face problems related to fertility because, as the age of a woman increases, the rate of her fertilisation decreases. So, some of them have difficulty in conceiving. Moreover, people suffer not only from physical illnesses , but also from mental health issues. Age gap is also considered one of the negative factors because parents and children cannot share anything with each other. For example, according to a research when parents and kids have a considerable age gap then youngsters might start hiding their problems from their parents and reluctant to share anything. However, some fitness programs and a friendly environment at home can overcome these problems.

    In conclusion, although deciding for a baby not early age has some drawbacks like problems related to conceiving along with some communication gap between both generations. However, it has many benefits for the overall growth of kids and for their bright future. I believe these benefits of planning a baby after settling down in their career outweigh its disadvantages.

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    Mamta

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    November 26, 2021 at 12:28 AM in reply to: Essay advantages and disadvantages ( Children )

    Since the last few years, most people don’t want kids in their early years. This has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of having children in later life along with some examples and provide a logical conclusion.

    There are many advantages for people who plan a baby in their 30’s. First and foremost, they get ample time to settle in their career and to reach a desired level. As a result they are financially stable to fulfil the basic needs that are required for growing up a child. Additionally, those couples are mature enough to handle the responsibilities of their babies and react according to their needs. For example, is has been seen that parents who are in their 30’s have lots of patience and they can easily understand the problem of a child and handle that situation very well.

    On the other hand, having a baby in later life also has some disadvantages as well. Some couples face problems related to fertility because as the age of a woman increases, the rate of her fertilisation decreases. So, some of them have difficulty in conceiving. Moreover, people suffer not only from physical illnesses , but also from mental health issues. Age gap is also considered one of the negative factors because parents and children cannot share anything with each other. For example, according to a research when parents and kids have a considerable age gap then youngsters might hide their problems from their parents and reluctant to share anything. However, some fitness programs and a friendly environment at home can overcome these problems.

    In conclusion, although planning for a baby at a later age has some drawbacks like problems related to conceiving a baby and some communication gap between both generations, it has many benefits for the overall growth of kids and for their bright future. I believe these benefits of planning a baby after settling down in their career outweigh its disadvantages.

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    Mamta

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    November 25, 2021 at 6:41 PM in reply to: Letter writing (noise from a restaurant)

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to complain about the noise coming from your newly opened restaurants.

    I am Mamta Gulia and I live in a housing society that is near to your restaurant. Nowadays lots of disturbance is coming from your side especially, in the night time. It is related to loud music and the nuance of some drunk people, that might create inconvenience to us. As I have a ten month old baby, it is very difficult not only for him to sleep but also for us to make him sleep with such a noise.

    I would like to request you to stop playing music after 11 pm, as it is restricted to play loud music after that time. Additionally, you can install soundproof glasses whenever they are necessary. You can also make your customers aware to not create loud voices after drinking alcohol.

    I hope you will consider my request and solve these problems as soon as possible. If you don’t resolve these issues, I will have to file a complaint with the nearest police station and also write a complaint letter to the local government authority.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you on a positive note.

    Your’s faithfully,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    November 23, 2021 at 6:36 PM in reply to: Problem solution essay (Internet)

    With the use of the internet, the way of sharing the information has changed and some problems that were not present in the past have been created by this development. This essay will discuss some problems related to the internet followed by some solutions to tackle them.

    To begin with, one of the serious problems is online fraud and hacking. Many personal data and information related to a person are available on the internet that lead to serious fraud and crimes. For example, hackers steal some private data of people and blackmail them on the basis of that information. Another major problem is easy access to any information on any site, which is sometimes dangerous for children. They can access some adult content like pornography by just providing some false details related to their age, which might affect their minds and they get diverted from studies.

    Some solutions are provided to overcome these problems. The government should pass a law to protect the personal data and secure the privacy along with some cyber security. Additionally, some strict IT securities should be there to verify the details of users using strong passwords. Some awareness programs should be run by the government and IT firms regarding the sharing of personal information on the internet. Parents should also keep an eye on the activity of their children and educate them about the right uses of the internet.

    To conclude, the Internet has made the individual’s life easy along with some serious problems. However, some actions such as data privacy and cyber security taken by the government are provided a good solutions to these problems.

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    Mamta

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    November 11, 2021 at 12:54 AM in reply to: Letter- Building Company

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter regarding the new project that you are planning to start in Mayur Vihar, New Delhi.

    My name is Mamta Gulia and I live in Mayur Vihar. One of my friends is working in your company as a site engineer. I got to know from him about your new assignment that you are planning to construct new houses in that area.

    Some areas around my society are vacant. So according to me, this is a good decision to build some buildings here. They provide a good environment or neighbourhood to our society as well. More facilities like shopping malls and hospitals might be available in the future because many individuals live there.

    As you know, there are many companies near that site . As a result, some employees find that place a suitable option for living with family. I hope you provide them with some good services like parks, swimming pools, kids play areas and many more.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    November 11, 2021 at 12:33 AM in reply to: Problem-Solution Essay [Night Shifts]

    Globalization makes it easy to connect to anyone from different parts of the world. Due to this, people work in multinational companies and people work in night shifts. These workers might face some serious challenges in their life related to health and safety. This essay will explore the problems faced by night shift employees and some solutions to tackle those issues.

    Due to night shifts, some people face health problems such as indigestion and insomnia. Because of the night shift, they have to stay awake all night, which results in sleep related problems for them. They are unable to sleep well in the daytime because the entire world is working and lots of disturbance is present around them. So, they are not properly concentrating on their work as well. Lack of sleep also affected their meals routine that caused digestive problems. In addition, many female staff feel insecure to work at night. They do not have many options to commute and they feel frustrated and nervous.

    There are some solutions to overcome these problems. First and the foremost, the employees who work at night shift should follow a proper routine and take adequate sleep at day time to refresh themselves. Atleast three meals should be included in their diet to ensure that their digestion system work properly. For women’s safety, companies provide a cab facility to help them and more patrolling should be done by police.

    To conclude, employees who are working at night time face some health related issues along with security concerns among women. A healthy diet and proper routine might be beneficial to work in odd times. Office cab and more transport service may be useful to reduce nervousness.

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    Mamta

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    November 8, 2021 at 12:01 AM in reply to: Opinion Essay [Customer Reviews]

    In today’s modern world, the Internet plays a vital role in our life. Nowadays people use the Internet to buy products online and check many customers reviews to know about that product. This essay will explore the ideas, why reviews of customers are beneficial while shopping online.

    To start with, online shopping is very trending among youngsters. They want to buy everything online while sitting in their homes. Customer reviews provide them with a free service to purchase a nice product. They might save lots of money and their valuable time by analysing the reviews because they can make their mind clear whether they want to give it a try or not. Otherwise, they can engage in the return and exchange process, if they don’t find it appropriate after purchasing. Many people give their feedback about that product that would be beneficial for others to make a decision.

    In addition to that, Good and bad experiences of many individuals are required for online shopping to know about the authenticity of the product. Many duplicate products are available in the market. By reading the reviews about a particular item, a person gets to know the quality of that item. Customers can save themselves from the wrong purchase and exactly know about the type of product and its positive and negative features along with price. Many people who don’t have much knowledge of laptops and phones, buy them after reading the reviews.

    To conclude, customer feedback is essential in online shopping to provide a good platform to purchase original items and saves time and money. Real experiences of others would help them to make up their mind.

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    Mamta

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    November 6, 2021 at 11:51 PM in reply to: Letter [Translation Agency ]

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to request you regarding the translation of some documents from Japanese language to English.

    I am working in a company as a team manager and recently our team got a project from a Japanese company. A contract has been sent to us to implement the project. The only issue with this implementation is the language of the project. It is written in Japanese.

    To understand the terms and conditions of this project, it is necessary to read all the documents carefully. I would like your agency to translate the whole document line by line. This is very confidential information and I found your agency a trustworthy option.

    The further process of this new project depends on our response. So I request you to translate the documents as quickly as possible for our better understanding. So that we can proceed with the same.

    I look forward to hearing from you on a positive note.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    November 2, 2021 at 10:23 AM in reply to: Discuss Both Views [Architecture]

    Some believe that the design of the new house should not be changed and it remains of the same as the old one. While others consider that people should be free to design their new homes according to their wish. This essay will explore both views of house construction along with my point of view.

    Same style of all the houses in an area have many merits. Those houses are easy to make and save lots of money and time. The latest and best design for a new home requires lots of research and effort. So same design homes are easy to construct for architects. They provide a well maintained structure to the city and are easy to keep clean and tidy. Same style building provides heritage and culture to the country.

    On the other hand, some believe that people should be allowed to build their home according to their own choices. With modernization, the latest technology and changes make it mandatory to alter the building structure. Every family has its own needs and requirements and wants to design their dream house accordingly. Therefore, it is fair to construct their own house and not copy the old structure of someone’s building completely. The concept of new ideas comes with creativity and productivity that would be beneficial for architects and designers. In addition, the same structure houses may become monotonous and might not provide happiness to the owner.

    In conclusion, same structure houses are easy to construct with a limited price range. However, individuals should have freedom to construct or renovate their home with their wishes. In my opinion, everyone has the right to design their homes according to their needs, this will lead to more job options in society and we could use the latest technologies for human benefit.

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    Mamta

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    November 1, 2021 at 12:40 PM in reply to: Letter to a neighbour

    Dear Sam,

    I hope you are fine and doing well. I am writing this letter to thank you for agreeing to look after my house during my business trip.

    I am going on a two weeks trip to London. As you know, I am fond of plants and flowers so there are many in my garden. I request you please water my plants on a daily basis so that they grow and do not wither. Apart from that I am expecting a letter from my cousin this weekend, please collect it on my behalf.

    In case of an emergency, you can call me anytime. Once I reach there, I will share my new contact number with you. If it is inaccessible, please let my friend know who is living just 5 minutes away from my hotel. I can also share his contact number with you.

    I have no words to thank you for this help. Good neighbours like you are a blessing. Please buy a nice gift for yourself from my side as a token of appreciation.

    Your neighbour,

    Mamta

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    Mamta

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    November 1, 2021 at 11:58 AM in reply to: Task 2 Essay – Sports / Gender Issues

    Over a few decades, the sport became more famous and gained lots of popularity among the people. However, people are more interested in men’s sport than women’s sport. This essay will discuss the reasons for it. In my opinion, this has a negative impact on the career of women players.

    There are lots of reasons for this discrimination. First and foremost is the male dominated society. From the last many years, men have been thinking that they are superior to females and they only have the right to do activities such as job, enjoyment and many more. One the other hand, females are meant for household chores and they are to obey their rules. So, if women want to do something for their careers, men don’t like it and do not support them. That is why they get less attention in every field. Similarly, the government hardly promotes sports related to females and provides them a platform to prove themselves.

    To suppress the talent of the women players, males generally do not want to see them growing. This is a very negative situation because it shows our society still has the problem of gender equality. Females do not get a chance to show their talent and creativity. They feel frustrated and ashamed to be a woman. Furthermore, they think that they are not up to men. Mostly female athletes who participate in any sport feel inferior as the reason they dropped out.

    In conclusion,

    females get less chance to prove themselves in sports because of the mentality of society and the promotion process. Sometimes they are not equally treated as men resulting in irritation and depression. According to me, this is a negative development because it shows we still live in a gender discriminating society.

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    Mamta

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    October 29, 2021 at 10:22 AM in reply to: Letter (Semi-formal)

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to remind you of our last visit on a plane and you advised me to contact you regarding my job in your restaurants.

    Last Sunday, when we were going from Pune to Delhi. By chance I got a seat next to you. During snack time we talked to each other about the quality of food that was provided to us and then we discussed some things related to the hotel industry. As you have been related to this field for the last 20 years and you own a chain of restaurants, you gave some valid points related to the growth in this industry.

    You also told me that there might be some suitable job options for me as well in your restaurants. So I am thinking of changing my current job and want to apply in your restaurants, I have checked your website and found that I am suitable for a manager post and I am keen to work with you.

    I have a work experience of 7 years in this particular field as an assistant manager. I have dealt with many customers and have attended many seminars related to customer dealing . The certificates related to those sessions would be definitely beneficial for me to understand customer behavior and to resolve customer queries in an effective way that would be useful for your business.

    I have attached my resume with this letter. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours Faithfully,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    October 28, 2021 at 9:55 PM in reply to: Two part question – Task 2 [Museums]

    Museums are a good option to know about the culture and tradition of any country or place. However, the number of visitors are decreasing drastically. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening, and then provide some solutions related to it.

    There are two main reasons for this decrease in the number of people who visit museums. Firstly, people find it boring to go to such places because of the advancement of technology. If we compare with the past, in today’s era, people have more choices to indulge themselves in their free time. While in the past, they found museums a leisure activity. Secondly, people, especially youngsters are not keen to explore such places as they don’t know about their culture and are reluctant to know anything about it. For example, children don’t even know about Ramayan and Mahabharat, which are the greatest epics.

    To resolve these problems, the government should include some new and latest technologies which would attract tourists. For example, some sound effects and some artificial intelligence technologies are introduced to connect with visitors. Furthermore, kids should be taught history in a very interesting way in schools and the government should make it compulsory for schools to take the children at historical sites. So they can connect academic lectures with those places. These activities encourage kids to take more Interest in the subject.

    To conclude, people feel monotonous to go to the museums and unwilling to learn anything about historical events. Some technological modification in those places and introducing some effective way of teaching in schools could be beneficial to attract more people there.

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    Mamta

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    October 28, 2021 at 12:49 AM in reply to: Letter – (Formal) – Request to join a training course.

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter regarding the artificial intelligence course. The advertisement of the same saw on the Internet.

    The course is about AI and its uses in the near future and it lasts for 5 days starting from 4th November to 8th November. Some good trainers and experts of this field will give a presentation regarding the details of this new technology. they will also explain how individuals and organizations could get benefits from it.

    The daily class duration is 4 hours and it will start from 4 pm. I request you to please allow me to attend the classes at this particular time because these are office hours. The cost of this course is about 15000, would you please let me know how I can claim this from the company.

    As we are working on a project that is related to driverless cars, the main concept behind it is artificial intelligence. So after attending these training sessions I can know more about this field and include that knowledge in our current project to enhance the quality of the project.

    I look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    October 27, 2021 at 3:14 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 – [Crime]

    In some nations, heinous criminal cases are decreasing. However, safety concerns of people are increasing as compared to the past. This essay will first look at the reasons why this is happening, and then explore solutions for it.

    The main reason for this increase in safety concerns among people is the advancement of technology. Nowadays, news spreads quickly as compared to the past. People know every information related to theft, robbery, murder, rape and many more as fast as it happened, due to this they feel unsafe. When we looked at the past, they did not know the details of these incidents. In addition to that, unemployment is also one of the reasons because youngsters are not sure about their future and about their jobs, so sometimes they are involved in heinous activities for their basic needs. People are surprised to know that an educated person is doing such types of wrong acts, and those acts spread panic among people.

    In order to solve this, great changes will need to be made. For a start, Government should educate the people through news and news channels that the crime rates are slowing down day by day and provide actual data regarding this. Government should generate more job opportunities and assure youth that their futures are not at risk. It can also provide soft loans at reasonable interest rates , so that many youngsters can start their business.

    In conclusion, safety concerns are a major issue and are increasing. They are caused by the latest technology and unemployment. Government needs to work on these issues just by introducing some awareness campaigns and generating more job options.

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    Mamta

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    October 26, 2021 at 12:29 AM in reply to: Discuss both views – [Children Spending Time Alone]

    In the leisure time of kids, they should be motivated to participate in some team activities by their parents. However, others believe that children should learn how to keep themselves busy. In my opinion, group learning has more merits than self learning. This essay will explore both the sides of this.

    To start with, group activities provide many opportunities that would enhance personal development of children such as communication skill and self confidence because they meet with different people and interact with them. Furthermore, as they participate in groups, they know the importance of team work and respect others viewpoints. Leadership quality comes when someone works in a team. For example, these kids are more socialised and more active and even perform better in their schools.

    On the other hand, children can also manage their free time on their own. They can use their time according to their choice. This includes many leisure activities like games, painting, swimming and many more. They can manage their time and decide what they want to do in their free time. This develops their decision making process. Children who are managing their time on their own are self dependent. But sometimes, they spend their free time by playing games and using social media that leads to health problems such as obesity and depression.

    To conclude, both views have their own benefits as they provide leadership quality and time management skill. However, organised group activities have more plus points because kids can learn different skills and good qualities from each others that necessary for one’s development.

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    Mamta

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    October 25, 2021 at 11:22 PM in reply to: Letter – Selling furniture to a friend

    Dear Sam,

    I hope you are doing well. Last week, I received your letter and I was thrilled to know that you have changed your company and are now planning to move to New Delhi from Pune. As you requested in your last letter regarding to search the house and furniture.

    I am doing some changes to my house. Renovation work is going on. I have changed the interior of the living room and want to sell the movables. If you want to buy some, you can check mine.

    There is one seven seater sofa set with one centre table that is of excellent quality. I bought them four years ago. One dining table is also available with six chairs. It has a glass on its top that gives it a rich look. Television cabinet has some space for decoration items. All are of white colour with golden design.

    I would like to invite you and Lira to dinner for next weekend. You can also have a look at those items.

    All the best,

    Mamta

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    Mamta

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    October 23, 2021 at 7:39 PM in reply to: Letter – [Correcting Information]

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter to you regarding the article that was published in your magazine last week containing some false information.

    Last week, I read an article about my home town in your magazine. I am very thankful to you for this. It was all about the weather, especially the monsoon season. But it has some incorrect facts about the rainy season. The monsoon season starts in May but you mentioned it starts at the end of June.

    Your magazine is a very popular one throughout the world ,so it is very important to present true facts and figures because most of the population of my town depend on tourism and this wrong information might decrease the number of tourists.

    I have a small request, please re-publish the correct information in the next edition of your magazine with a note that the information given in the last edition was not correct.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    October 23, 2021 at 6:57 PM in reply to: Advantages/Disadvantages [Gap Year (Education)]

    It has become a trend among youngsters to take a year gap after finishing school and before starting the university courses. This essay will explore the benefits and the drawbacks of this gap taken by students.

    To begin with, the children who prefer to take a break between their studies after completing school have many positive sides. That time can be utilised by them in their personal development skills like they can learn some new languages, improve their body language and also do some small courses that will provide a career growth opportunity to them. Furthermore, they can also do some work in any reputed firm and use that experience in their further studies as well as in their careers. In this way, they would also earn some money that will be used in their higher education and even teach them a lesson of saving.

    But this gap has some drawbacks as well. After spending a whole year without study, some youngsters feel disconnected with education and could not focus on higher studies. They are one year behind of their classmates, which resulted in some dissatisfaction. Some companies consider this gap a bad impact on one’s career. They indulge more in social media and games because of free time that they have before. so they waste their valuable time on the internet that leads to isolation.

    To conclude, this phenomenon has its own pros and cons. This year off will be effective for the future if spent wisely by doing some useful activities. on the other hand disconnected students from further education.

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    Mamta

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    October 23, 2021 at 1:38 PM in reply to: Formal Letter of Apology – GT

    Dear Sir,

    With profound regret, this letter is to seek an apology as a project was not delivered on agreed time, and thus, an important client ended the contact with our company

    I take full responsibility of what has happened. This project is crucial for our company. I worked on this project since last two months and could not able to complete it because of the shortage of time that lead to financial loss and reduce reputation in the market as well. When I started working on this, I missed the detailed planning and at the end, it resulted in losing an important client.

    I promise that would not be happen in future as I have learnt a good lesson from this incidence. I also know the importance of good project planning and I will not repeat the same in the future.

    Once again, I feel very sorry from the bottom of my heart. Please accept my apology.

    Yours sincerely,

    Mamta Gulia

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    Mamta

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    October 20, 2021 at 10:26 PM in reply to: Letter – [Cancellation] (Course)

    Dear Sir,

    I am writing this letter regarding my course which i have enrolled with your institute.

    I am working in a private firm that is a US based company. Last month I enrolled a course in your institute that would benefit my career in upcoming days. My office hours are from 10 am to 7pm, so I chose evening slot for the classes.

    Now I have been given a new project as a team leader. So I have to manage the whole work and give some extra time to complete the given assignment on time. One of my team members got injured and on leave for two weeks, so extra responsibilities are on my shoulders.

    Due to this, my office hours have increased, I have to devote some more time to my new project. For this reason, I am unable to continue my classes. I need a favour from you regarding the same please put my course on hold for sometime. So that my study will not get affected.

    Once I finish my assignment , I will continue the classes with full focus and dedication.

    I look forward to hearing from you regarding the same.

    Yours faithfully

    Mamta Gulia

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